The topic is very attractive. It makes people feel a bit of madness and pride after being baptized by the storm.
The idea of the article is very good. I have always agreed with Chu Rou's views below. First, establish the point of criticism (perhaps not considered a refutation), then change the direction of writing and write kneeling ashore. It's a pity that the article is a bit short and not entirely enjoyable.
The contrast between the two can be made sharper. The contents of the master's way and the kneeling way can be more concrete, add more words and ink, and make the metaphor concrete reality. The article could be more substantial. Hmm, maybe I write too many argumentative essays, and I just like the case-based argumentation to be aggressive and the article to be hearty, so forgive me.
The writing is very good. I like many sentences.
The insights are also unique. In fact, as long as it is one's truest thoughts, the pen and ink will become moving. ^_^
The topic is very attractive. It makes people feel a bit of madness and pride after being baptized by the storm. The idea of the article is very good. I have always agreed with Chu Rou's views below. First, establish the point of criticism (perhaps not considered a refutation), then change the direction of writing and write kneeling ashore. It's a pity that the article is a bit short and not entirely enjoyable. The contrast between the two can be made sharper. The contents of the master's way and the kneeling way can be more concrete, add more words and ink, and make the metaphor concrete reality. The article could be more substantial. Hmm, maybe I write too many argumentative essays, and I just like the case-based argumentation to be aggressive and the article to be hearty, so forgive me. The writing is very good. I like many sentences. The insights are also unique. In fact, as long as it is one's truest thoughts, the pen and ink will become moving. ^_^
... So powerful
Like Hehe, I sat on a sofa