Don't read this embarrassing old work, don't read it! (Mao Tao runs off holding their head)
This story has a lot of flaws, and Mao Tao will learn from the experience and keep improving. Several readers have said the bonus chapters about the Demon Dragon and the Hero are better than the main story, so I've turned off the paywall. You can go straight to the bonus chapters.
As the Demon King NPC in a full-dive game, he wipes out the players ten thousand times. This group of players, known as the Fourth Calamity, finally accepts their unfair fate and grumbles as they avoid the Demon King's territory.
Until one new player accidentally wanders in front of the Demon King and dances to "I'm Playing in the Mud in Northeast China." That day, every player on the server hears the announcement that sets the whole place abuzz.
[The Demon King likes "Cuihua Pickled Cabbage" +1. His wish has been fulfilled, and the Three-Headed Hound has thrown him out of the territory.]
When the players learn that gaining the Demon King's favor can fulfill their wishes, his territory becomes the busiest place on the map.
Player One: "Let's clap our bamboo boards and praise the Demon King for being so beautiful and powerful~"
Player Two: "Demon King, these are all the riches I've accumulated in my seven years of playing. I've even brought my homemade manure fertilizer. Please, just give me a little favor!"
Player Three (with sincere eyes): "Demon King Daddy, I'm your long-lost gosling!"
Faced with the crowds flooding his palace like a bustling marketplace, the silver-haired, blue-eyed Demon King, beautiful as a god, is forced to leave and disguise himself as an ordinary player just to find a little peace and quiet.
While players across the server frantically try to win over the Demon King, the top player on the server leads his team into the hell-difficulty Monster Forest for training and sternly warns them:
"The people who go looking for the Demon King are either lazy people hoping to get something for nothing, or complete idiots. Remember, giving in to your desires brings nothing but endless pain!"
His teammates seem to have cotton in their ears. Every one of them ignores him and stares in the same direction. The top player turns around and sees a beautiful, delicate "ordinary player" beside a clear pool, with pure, sorrowful eyes.
"Hashizhu." Before his teammates can react, the top player lowers his voice and looks at his pet. "Want a little mama?"
A beginner's guide:
1. Magic and cultivation fantasy both feature prominently.
2. The Demon King has a touch of silly charm...
3. Set in the not-too-distant future.
4. The top player took part in the campaign against the Demon King, but couldn't beat him and got bullied by him instead :)
××× Mao Tao's next story: Reborn and Arranged to Marry the Male Lead's Uncle~
An Nuo transmigrates into a book twice, and both times it's the same book.
The first time, he is arranged to marry the male lead, Mo Chenghuan. Although Mo Chenghuan is worth over a hundred million, in private he's so stingy with An Nuo that they even have to split the cost of condoms.
After the wedding, the male lead refuses to spend a penny. An Nuo has to support the family and raise their child himself. They're so broke that he can't even afford to add an egg to his jianbing.
But later, An Nuo accidentally sees Mo Chenghuan buy his beloved's favorite a designer handbag worth 300,000 without batting an eye, grinning like a lackey.
What a damn bastard!
The second time he transmigrates into the book, An Nuo has lost all faith in marriage. He looks at the unmarried men in the Mo family and, while his ex-husband looks on in disbelief, chooses Mo Shenghuan, his uncle, who died young in his previous life.
An Nuo: Waiting to be widowed (and get rich).jpg
A year later, An Nuo looks at the person in his bed with bewilderment. Why does he seem to be getting healthier and healthier?
Even more unbelievable, An Nuo discovers he's pregnant. To avoid repeating the tragedy of his previous life, An Nuo cautiously pokes the man.
"Let's get a divorce."
Mo Shenghuan: Suddenly on the brink of death.jpg
An Nuo: "...???"
Theme: Strive hard and keep working toward your ideals.
It took me two days to read it, so I couldn't help but leave a comment.
In fact, I came here from other articles in DaDa, and then I found that the copywriting was very interesting, so I picked up this one from the column. When I first read the article, I didn't have much hope. (Because the comments look like...)
But the facts show that everyone has different preferences in reading articles. It would be a pity if you missed it because of comments www
In fact, I think the capitalization is pretty good. It's just right to read it as Wu Xipi, and the end of the text seems to be very open, so I assumed that the dog didn't catch Luo Lan, and Luo Lan just got an extra pet (Luo Lan is uniquely beautiful, hehe)
Then, the extras are really good, and I really enjoyed watching them.
When I clicked on the copywriting, I thought it was an online game article, but after reading it, I found that this only takes up a small part of the front part, and the subsequent plot feels like it has flown by. However, this world view is quite good. I really like this genre and I am quite satisfied after reading it.
Then, at the end, I made a small beep. I felt that there was still some foreshadowing that I had not finished writing. I always had the idea. I went to the supermarket to buy some potato chips. I was really looking forward to the feeling of eating potato chips when I got home. But when I got home, I found that there was a hole in the shopping bag and the potato chips had leaked out (Cat Cat crying jpg.)
But overall it's really good, the above is just my personal opinion. Come on, pen refill??
The extras are better than the second half of the story
Lorraine, I only have one thing to say, please kick the dog out.
Well written, eh, very imaginative?
I hope a dog will always be a dog
It feels like every devil has its own story.
Didn't you lay a second egg? Cross-dressing boss, girl heart demon dragon attack
Because Lorraine has read the full text
I wish Gouzi will always be Gouzi in another world
The writing is getting worse and worse. It is far different from the copywriting and the style of painting at the beginning. This was written without the author reading the message. After chasing it for so long, it feels useless. I don't know what to do. It's a pity to abandon it. I keep waiting for the author to turn things around, but I am disappointed again and again. I have become numb.
Is it difficult to write a sweet article about an online game according to the copywriting? Why do you have to go all the way to the dark side? Si Shen's behavior and plot development are extremely bad. Even if he turns dark, he will be more disgusting than this. Although many people will hate it more, at least some people should also like it. Now online games don't mention it at all. What is that label used for? A good hand was beaten to pieces, and a good plot was turned into shit. I chased it sincerely, and looked forward to it again and again like I forgive the scumbag. I was really angry and disappointed. After chasing serial novels for so many years, this one is definitely the most infuriating and disappointing one I have ever read! No matter how bad or bad it is, it has never left me so speechless. Anyway, I can just abandon that one. I bought this one here. Do you want me to stick the bone in my throat, but the final result is obvious that it will rot? How can I describe this feeling? I have never been so angry after reading a novel.
Originally, Rong Sishen accidentally bullied Luo Lan once or twice and it felt like a normal development. As long as the author doesn't deliberately write it like this, it can make the article come alive.
Open your eyes and take a look. How many people are there at the end of the journey?
Next time you write a novel, you should read the comment section. Sometimes it is easy for the authorities to get confused.
Maybe I said it too emphatically and incoherently, but I hope you understand that no one can torture themselves for so long unless they really expect it.
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It took me two days to read it, so I couldn't help but leave a comment. In fact, I came here from other articles in DaDa, and then I found that the copywriting was very interesting, so I picked up this one from the column. When I first read the article, I didn't have much hope. (Because the comments look like...) But the facts show that everyone has different preferences in reading articles. It would be a pity if you missed it because of comments www In fact, I think the capitalization is pretty good. It's just right to read it as Wu Xipi, and the end of the text seems to be very open, so I assumed that the dog didn't catch Luo Lan, and Luo Lan just got an extra pet (Luo Lan is uniquely beautiful, hehe) Then, the extras are really good, and I really enjoyed watching them. When I clicked on the copywriting, I thought it was an online game article, but after reading it, I found that this only takes up a small part of the front part, and the subsequent plot feels like it has flown by. However, this world view is quite good. I really like this genre and I am quite satisfied after reading it. Then, at the end, I made a small beep. I felt that there was still some foreshadowing that I had not finished writing. I always had the idea. I went to the supermarket to buy some potato chips. I was really looking forward to the feeling of eating potato chips when I got home. But when I got home, I found that there was a hole in the shopping bag and the potato chips had leaked out (Cat Cat crying jpg.) But overall it's really good, the above is just my personal opinion. Come on, pen refill??
The extras are better than the second half of the story
Lorraine, I only have one thing to say, please kick the dog out.
Well written, eh, very imaginative?
I hope a dog will always be a dog
It feels like every devil has its own story.
Didn't you lay a second egg? Cross-dressing boss, girl heart demon dragon attack
Because Lorraine has read the full text
I wish Gouzi will always be Gouzi in another world
The writing is getting worse and worse. It is far different from the copywriting and the style of painting at the beginning. This was written without the author reading the message. After chasing it for so long, it feels useless. I don't know what to do. It's a pity to abandon it. I keep waiting for the author to turn things around, but I am disappointed again and again. I have become numb. Is it difficult to write a sweet article about an online game according to the copywriting? Why do you have to go all the way to the dark side? Si Shen's behavior and plot development are extremely bad. Even if he turns dark, he will be more disgusting than this. Although many people will hate it more, at least some people should also like it. Now online games don't mention it at all. What is that label used for? A good hand was beaten to pieces, and a good plot was turned into shit. I chased it sincerely, and looked forward to it again and again like I forgive the scumbag. I was really angry and disappointed. After chasing serial novels for so many years, this one is definitely the most infuriating and disappointing one I have ever read! No matter how bad or bad it is, it has never left me so speechless. Anyway, I can just abandon that one. I bought this one here. Do you want me to stick the bone in my throat, but the final result is obvious that it will rot? How can I describe this feeling? I have never been so angry after reading a novel. Originally, Rong Sishen accidentally bullied Luo Lan once or twice and it felt like a normal development. As long as the author doesn't deliberately write it like this, it can make the article come alive. Open your eyes and take a look. How many people are there at the end of the journey? Next time you write a novel, you should read the comment section. Sometimes it is easy for the authorities to get confused. Maybe I said it too emphatically and incoherently, but I hope you understand that no one can torture themselves for so long unless they really expect it.