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The young CEO Gu Zhihuan was knocked unconscious in a rear-end collision. In a dream, he learned that he was the cannon-fodder top in a book.
He loved the protagonist bottom deeply, but couldn't understand his own feelings. Only when the protagonist bottom went abroad for further study did he finally realize the truth. He began a difficult journey to win him back, but died before he could succeed.
In his dream, Gu Zhihuan saw the protagonist top and bottom finally confess their feelings to each other, as well as the villain turning evil and becoming powerful enough to rule the world.
He made up his mind: Cherish life. Keep away from the protagonist top and bottom.
So Gu Zhihuan abandoned his plan to pursue the protagonist bottom, gave up on the business partnership with the protagonist top, and kept his distance from the subordinate who would eventually become a villain.
Only, he forgot that on the day of the car accident, he had drunkenly accepted the villain's confession!
How had the plot gone off the rails right from the start?!
Looking at the wounded expression on the villain's face, Gu Zhihuan felt a terrible, twisted ache in his teeth. As he wondered how to explain a misunderstanding he'd long forgotten, the protagonist top and bottom started fighting over him!
Reading Guide:
1. This story is both melodramatic and indulgent, and the male lead is loved by everyone.
2. The plot Gu Zhihuan learns about in his dream is the original story. The story in the world where he lives has been off the rails from the start. Neither protagonist is a good person, and both like the male lead.
3. I haven't thought of the third point yet (three points look better in the layout).
Synopsis:
The first man of the cold immortal path: I'll do everything in my power to keep you safe for the rest of your life. If you wish, I'll announce to the world tomorrow that we are becoming cultivation partners.
The seductive leader of the demonic sect: Woman, don't think you can escape me in this life. You mustn't think about anyone but me. If you so much as look at someone else, I'll kill them.
The greatest healer: It's all my fault. I couldn't save you that day, and you suffered so much because of me. But now that you're back, you can command the Treasure Pavilion however you like. All I ask is that you let me stay by your side.
The sinister demon king threatens: If you dare leave me, I'll slaughter every living soul in the world.
As soon as Lin Xuan's best friend entered the immortal sect, it was as though she'd unlocked the heroine's halo. Four top-tier powerhouses were clamoring to force their love on her.
As her best friend, Lin Xuan sat in the front row and gleefully watched the drama unfold.
Angsty romance, rebirth, groveling to win back an ex, and a love rivalry.
Lin Xuan happily watched the drama, remembering a question someone had asked long ago: When people look for a lover's reincarnation in the protagonist, aren't they afraid of picking the wrong person?
Before Lin Xuan could think it through, her best friend was exposed!
Lin Xuan was so devastated she nearly coughed up blood. She looked at the four powerful men with complicated expressions and realized that their true love's reincarnation wasn't her best friend. It was her!
Thinking of what Bai Luo had gone through, Lin Xuan hurriedly grabbed her earnest, hardworking puppy-like boyfriend and ran!
The four top-tier powerhouses might be great, but compared to her own little puppy, her puppy was at least a normal person!
Puppy: I only made the cut because I'm normal?
Lin Xuan replied awkwardly: Hehe, of course it's because of love...
Theme: Love from a past life is beautiful, but isn't it awkward when you pick the wrong person?
Reborn as the Beloved Male Lead in an Old-School Campus Novel, I Set Out to Cure Love-Brained People
Bound to the Legitimate and Illegitimate Heirs System, I Grow Rich Selling Monsters
My Crush Says I Have a Sweet Mouth
After I Gave Up Treatment, They Begged Me to Keep Living
After Failing to Ascend, I Save the World Through Farming
After Reincarnating as a Cannon Fodder Fake Young Master, I Rely on the Real Young Master to Survive
The Scumbag Ex Chases His Wife to the Crematorium, Then Loses His Memory
The Guy I Flirted With Has the Same Username as Me
And there are also foreshadowings laid before, or let's talk about a plot. Lin Xuan's master in this life, in both lives, was obsessed with Jiang... What is the name of Jiang? What is Jiang Ming doing? Oh, anyway, you know that it is that person, who has been devoted to that person for two lifetimes, has loyal love, and does whatever it takes to achieve his goals. He is a little bit crazy, so why would she be easily moved by the man who likes her? Without any explanation, it seemed very, very strange and unreasonable. To be honest, she suddenly stopped loving the man she had loved wholeheartedly for two lives?? And it was almost in a short period of time that the man who liked her had not been found for so long. Lin Xuan got the memory of his previous life and suddenly found it in such a short period of time? It's so strange, and there is no explanation or description. If we single it out, you will know how unreasonable it is. Let me tell you, a wealthy lady likes a domineering president, very, very much, and then learns that the other person hates her and already has feelings for her. At that time, she still persisted in liking her, and she also tried to hurt the domineering president's sweetheart, almost like a vicious female supporting role. Then out of nowhere, she suddenly wanted to marry a gentle man who liked her. Pay attention! She was willing to take revenge on the overbearing president, and she did not say whether she had given up on the overbearing president or was disheartened. There was no reason, or no reason was written, no reason was shown, and there was no inside story. There was no more reason. She just suddenly and inexplicably wanted to marry that man, which made people very confused, confused, and confused. She felt that she had missed a lot of plots.
I feel that this story still has a bit of EMMMMM, mainly the introduction and the plot. I think it should be a very long story, and I think that Lin Xuan and her little wolf dog should have gone through a lot of things before they fell off the horse. After all, I think love does not count at first sight. The two of them didn't experience anything, they just fell in love at first sight, and then they got together? I think this kind of love can't really be called love. At most, it can be regarded as a hormonal explosion. Hormones are not guaranteed to explode forever, so it is difficult to last long. If we want to count the time we spent together with the person we were together in the previous life, we should also describe it. Otherwise, it will feel very inexplicable, because the reasons are not sufficient. After all, I remember that she was also the son of a wealthy family in the previous life. It's not like I haven't seen many beauties. Moreover, love at first sight happens to a rich boy, and there is no foreshadowing or plot. It always feels very unreliable and cannot last forever. After all, there is no love story that can fall in love at first sight, then stay together, and then last forever. What should I say? I'm a bit unable to organize the language. The plot is indeed rich for beginners, but for this relatively heavy subject matter, it seems a bit thin. I suggest, just a suggestion, that you can start with short stories. I don't actually understand it very well, but practicing this description technique is indeed more suitable for short films. After all, the reference to writing is to learn to write first, and then learn to write sentences. Subtitles, and then learn paragraphs, and then write the article bit by bit. It is best to write a short short film that does not have a particularly grand background, and then practice writing. If you are not particularly good at writing emotional dramas, it can also be a persistent career, or even no CP, but actually I don't know which one is simpler and easier to use. You can also ask others for consultation, because I think your imagination and inspiration are very good, but With your current writing style and logical thinking, you may not be able to support a special or large enough magnificent world structure diagram. Yes, I think every novel is a world. Some may be created with reference to a certain era or modern background, which may be easier. However, I think it is still relatively difficult to cultivate immortality. It is difficult to write well the first time, so I I think you are still great. If you have inspiration, I suggest you. I suggest you record it first, and then record everything you think about the inspiration. Then when your writing style is better and your logical structure is better, (I don't know what to say, anyway, it is when you are more powerful in writing novels) and then try to conceive a complete novel and string certain things together.
Made me laugh so hard hhhhhhh
? What is no longer willful? ⊙_⊙Why is she so willful? Why is Lin Xuan so willful? Hasn't she already given up on feelings? Don't you believe in love anymore? She must be particularly grateful that Zhao Zizhi saved her, right? After all, I really don't see how much emotional foundation they have. Lin Xuan didn't believe in love after he gained the memory of his previous life. Then he gave up and abandoned Zhao Zizhi. Then because of Zhao Zizhi, he saved her life, and then she became hopelessly heartbroken???? She no longer believes in love! When encountering this kind of thing, there can only be a little sway, or no sway at all, because hasn't she already decided to leave the world of mortals? She made such a firm decision, and then "???" (It should be a black question mark face at this moment), it felt like her decision was not very firm... Her feelings changed very easily...
And that Zhao Zizhi said in his history that the first time he saw Lin Xuan, he felt that he liked her in his previous life. This statement actually agrees with me, but I think it should be a little conflict with your writing concept. As the nephew of the person named Jiang, he should have seen many beautiful fairies, and his environment is also quite complicated. He has such a feeling for an outsider woman. Anyway, my first reaction is, have I been plotted by someone? Or I gave him something bad, otherwise how could I inexplicably feel that a woman from an outsider family was my lover in my previous life? This reason is really too naive. This joke in the past life is really (//?//) They have never experienced any sharing of joys and sorrows. Then inexplicably the first time I saw her, I felt that she was my lover in the previous life, and then I fell in love with her wholeheartedly, and then stayed with her for a long time??? I'm really confused
? I'm really confused. It's been six years since those two disciples. How can they still not know that people can't grow backwards? When they first met their Nianxin sister, the sister could still talk and run. But six years later, the sister turned into a little baby??? And then they don't have any doubts???
Maybe the words will be a little confusing, because I am talking about what comes to mind. A novel plot is of course very good, but in fact, you can start with a traditional plot to practice your writing, or you can try a novel plot first. There must be logic and a reason. Her character is not like this originally, and then you have to twist her around. How to say it, the term is occ. I don't remember whether it is ooc or occ. In short, this is what it means. The character setting collapses, for example A very selfish person, and then suddenly does a very selfless thing, and then there is no turning point in the middle, or the turning point is not enough to explain the reason for his change, it is very strange. For example, a person likes to eat sweet things, and then one day she suddenly buys a lot of salty things, and then he eats the salty things with gusto. It is not because of gifts or other reasons, but he buys salty things inexplicably, or because he suddenly wants to buy them, or it is inexplicable and has no reason.
It's just that I feel it's a little awkward. The plot of the bad guy turning good is certainly good, but I feel that the awakening is a bit inexplicable. Originally, Poirot has not been a particularly positive child since he was a child, or should I say he is kind? Enthusiasm? Because a child with qualities such as kindness and enthusiasm should be very happy when she knows she has a sister. Then, I think her parents should give her a lot of love, so I don't understand, if this child has a lot of candy, why is she unwilling to give it away? I feel like she is a bit arrogant, she actually disdains Lin Xuan, and because Lin Xuan is better, she often compares herself with her, so later I don't understand why she suddenly woke up and changed for the better. It's not like she was deceived, and she is not a particularly chic person by nature. It can even be said that she is not that good, not that innocent. At least it can be seen from the incident of insisting on the Fire Qilin. Lin Xuan is her sister. Her sister can be said to have helped her so much, but she only thinks about bewitching Lin Xuan to use unfair means to seize her things, but the things are not actually his, so I always feel that she is not a particularly good-natured person, right? I think she should understand this truth, so I don't understand why she suddenly wakes up? It feels like the turning point is particularly abrupt, and the feeling of being forced back is usually allowed to develop like this, because originally, it shows that her mind is not particularly upright, and the subsequent development should also be that she can't stand such a contrast. I'm not saying that bad characters can only have bad endings. But this thing is created by this character. It is fundamentally not very good, and there is not enough reason, psychological description, or logic to make us convinced, or let us understand how her heart has changed, so it is very strange and awkward.
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