I'm the Vicious Cannon Fodder in a Transmigrate-Into-a-Book Story

For the first time, I felt that my money was wasted. The subject matter and writing are good, but the author is really not suitable for writing this kind of article. Even the most basic strategies are not developed in it. The man who is tactically hiding from horses, and the most exciting places that should be described are written into a history textbook. One sentence refers to a certain year and a certain month, which made me choke. Overall, people in the whole story are brainless. It's really amazing. The story is over. It's a long story, but nothing is explained. It's really like reading an instruction manual. Authors need to learn. It is easy to start by writing articles without power and disputes. Just be a brainless cookie.

I read it when it was finished in 20 years. In 2024, I suddenly became bored and found that I had ordered all the books and gave them ratings and reviews, so I read it again and found that it was even worse. Bought them all to score. . . I really admire myself. After reading it, it may be really boring. . First of all, there are many typos and the reading experience is not very good. . The logic of the article is not very rigorous, and the foreshadowing is not very natural. (Although I don't say how rigorous it should be... But many details really can't withstand scrutiny...) What can I say about the writing style? Writing about palace intrigues and war plots is like playing house. To say that this article is originally a husband and wife's daily life, but the young couple loves it. It's a bit too industrial. It doesn't look like the souls in the author's writing fell in love, but the author asked them to love so they fell in love. Originally, this kind of relationship that has experienced the cycle of life and death should be more complex, delicate and full (compared with the modern work published in 19, the writing style of this one is a bit naive and immature) ) Because of the lack of writing, the baggage written for the protagonist is also very stiff. It's like someone will give you a pillow right after you fall asleep, and the delivery is not very smooth and unnatural (it's a bit too stiff, just like when watching a video, the blogger suddenly said that the quality of his sleep has not been good recently, and you know that he is going to do it the next second. Implanting a sense of déjà vu with Hiroko on the pillow) Some of the character settings of the protagonist are actually quite good and should be very interesting to write, but the characters are not fleshed out enough, and the relationships between the characters seem to be very entangled and complicated. However, from the text, everyone's love and hate are so casual, so naturally they love and hate for no reason. . The villains are purely stupid and bad, either flesh-and-blood bad guys that make people hate them, or simply human-machine villains (ah, like the kind of brainless human-machine villains in some slap-in-the-face Tweet videos that require music and bubble gum and are not based on normal real-life logic). The later plot is also very slow and fluid, like watching a fast-forward TV series. The protagonist does not have much full characterization and is more dry, while the villain is more human-machine. Generally speaking, I have finished watching it, and I feel that I have finished watching it. . I hope the author can work hard and think more carefully about his writing.

I also finished reading it in one sitting, and the overall impression is very good. This subject matter is just right for me, please give it a try?

I! Finished reading! ! ! Up here! ! ! ! !

The story is okay, but there are too many bugs, and many sentences are not smooth and upside down. It's time to revise the essay

I have never read this type of article before. I feel that the broad outline is good, and the perspective of the topic selection is novel and interesting. However, the wording of some passages is not good enough, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read.

I finally finished chasing, and I'm a little curious, who will attack and who will suffer between Li Si and Tuesday?

In fact, the author's imagination is pretty good and the story is great. It's just that the presentation is too cumbersome and confusing, and the writing is a bit poor.

Continuation document: "Task Agent [Quick Travel]" Lin Shu died unexpectedly and entered the world of fast travel, becoming a professional supporting actor. He couldn't remember how many times he died. When the mission was carried out for the thousandth time, the fast-travel mission system suddenly malfunctioned, and the missions received by missionaries in different areas were very confusing. In this chaos, Lin Shu heard the voices of other fast travelers calling for help. Tasker 1: "I have always played the role of the male protagonist in the emotional flow area. Why don't the men here help me solve my problems? They are too cold and heartless. I don't know how to survive." Lin Shu: "You are an inspirational character. I will help you work hard to survive." Tasker 2: "I am an upgrading stream professional, and this is the twentieth time I have failed the mission. The task is actually a marriage first, love later, approach that I have never experienced before. Not only does it require me to be with my partner every day, just for me and my brother to have a drink, my partner actually wants to divorce me! In the upgrading stream world, I have to kick him away!" Lin Shu: "Okay, brother, I will make love to your partner for you." Tasker 3: "I am the big baby who is loved by everyone in the world of raising cubs. Why am I assigned to the terrifying supernatural world? The ghost husband is so scary! Woohoo..." Lin Shu: "Okay, please don't be afraid, I will marry the ghost husband for you." Tasker 4: "I used to be from the president area." Lin Shu: "President, what problem do you encounter?" Tasker: "The president here actually doesn't fall in love and engages in business wars every day!" Lin Shu: "... Okay, received." I, Lin Shu, am the agent of the quick travel mission. As long as the points are in place, everything will be easy.

Sahuahua, I have heard of this article before, but I never had time to read it. This time I finally have the opportunity to read it. It is so warm and sweet, and the feelings of attack and reception are really good.