[Looking for bookmarks for my upcoming story, Is There Something Wrong with Waking Up in an Escape Game? The blurb is below. A deep bow of thanks!]
Blurb:
[Serious and steady real young master seme x gentle and fair-skinned fake young master
Content warning: This starts out as a feel-good novel, but I added a suspense plot, so it turned into a rather odd romance with a suspense storyline. The framework was also too ambitious, my writing wasn't good enough, and a lot happened while I was writing it. In the end, the story didn't turn out as well as I hoped. Please read at your own discretion. I'm very sorry, and thank you for your support.]
Song Mian wakes up one day to find that he has become the fake young master of a wealthy family in a melodramatic novel.
He has enjoyed a life of luxury only because he was switched at birth.
When the real young master is found, everyone around him waits to see him make a fool of himself, and even his parents start treating him strangely.
He becomes the most awkward presence in the family.
The plot has reached the first day Lu Yu returns. Song Mian is ignored at home until he can't even get a meal, and at school he is subjected to ridicule and mockery from his classmates.
According to the original plot, after Lu Yu humiliates him in every possible way, Song Mian will meet a tragic end, disappearing without a trace and with his fate unknown.
For the sake of his own life, Song Mian takes the initiative and offers to leave the Song family, hoping to become invisible and be forgotten.
On the day he leaves, everyone in the Song family watches him, but not one of them says a word.
Just as Song Mian drags his suitcase along, planning out his life after leaving the Song family, Lu Yu appears and grabs his wrist. Staring at him, he says, "Your surname is Song. You're a member of the Song family. Where do you think you're going? If you don't want to be the Song family's second young master, then be its madam."
Song Mian: Σ( ° △ °|||)︴?!!
This isn't how the script is supposed to go!
Please bookmark Is There Something Wrong with Waking Up in an Escape Game? =3=
Blurb:
After falling into a coma for three years because of an accident, Shen Yan wakes up to find himself inside an escape game.
The game stages the nightmares players had before entering it. To return to reality, they have to earn enough points.
Shen Yan clears one level after another and reaches the top of the leaderboard, only to enter his own nightmare.
It's so dark he can't see his hand in front of his face. Lying on the ground, he clearly feels cold fingers brush over his cheek and come to rest at his neck, slowly tightening.
As he struggles to breathe, someone leans down and chuckles beside his ear. His voice is dangerous, yet tender with the affection of a lover: "My dear, I've found you."
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Shen Yan, the player at the top of the leaderboard, is cool and composed. His face is so handsome that even a frown can make people swoon.
At first, some people think he's taciturn and boring, and that such a handsome face is wasted on him.
Later: How does he have both the looks and the skills?
Everyone assumes he'll keep acting so cold and unapproachable until he leaves the game.
That is, until one day the door opens. Shen Yan steps out of the dim room with unsteady strides and ragged breathing. His long lashes flutter, brimming with irresistible allure.
A pale, strikingly handsome man follows him out, so frail that he gasps for breath after every step, as if he could die at any moment.
Under countless watching eyes, his fingers lightly trace Shen Yan's neck and rub the dark red mark there. "Sorry. I'll be gentler next time."
The onlookers freeze on the spot.
Theme: Study hard and change your fate against all odds
Emmm... Let me talk about the advantages first, the sweet and emotional writing is okay, and then... Um. Let me talk about what I think are the shortcomings. First, the world lines are chaotic. I am not stupid to say this. I have watched some more complicated ancient dramas and anti-drug movies. Although the protagonists have always been with each other, I still can't tell which world line is real and the world where they first met (if anyone likes it can tell) Thank you for sharing. I can't see it anyway.) Secondly, the role of Zhang Cancan was dug up (that is, what he said can be changed after it is completed), but not filled in. Thirdly, the supporting characters are not rich enough, not three-dimensional enough and have no memory points (for me). Fourthly, Li Congyan's follow-up... Fifthly, why is there a barrier when Li Ke kills Song Mian later? Who snapped his fingers? Sixth, why does the door appear? Is the world just teasing?
There are a lot of holes that haven't been filled in. Some places feel incoherent and don't make sense.
What did Li Zongyan hide? Why does Zhang Zhicheng say it doesn't matter who the murderer is? Alas, to be honest, I didn't understand. Why did Shou feel like he was wearing a book? Was he also reborn? Who did that snap of fingers? . . . So many questions.
A little confused. In the main text, Zhou Mu is reading a novel. There is no Lu Yu in reality. Second Zhou Mu travels through the book. Third Zhou Mu is reborn in the novel. Fourth Zhou Mu is reborn in the Zhuma Zhuma version. The extra chapter is a real-life version of parallel time and space with Lu Yu. You can't return to the real world even if you open the door Is that so?
I watched the beginning of it 20 years ago and forgot to continue watching it. I suddenly remembered it recently and found it after searching for a long time. 🐰 [Lopp-eared Rabbit Head] [Lopp-eared Rabbit Head] The ending is a bit messy.
I was confused when I read it. I felt that the author actually wanted to write the infinite flow of mirror rebirth, but he wrote it in a hurry.
Ah, I feel like there are still a lot of holes that haven't been filled yet... Crying cat cat head
This is my second review, the author writes so well! I was very moved by the emotions of the protagonists and the villains were portrayed so crazy woo woo woo.
Read it all in one go. It feels very fragmented, and many characters have no follow-up and are like mere tools. However, the protagonist reluctantly ended the relationship, and it was good to like and trust the other person from the end. It just didn't fit with the text. I originally wanted to give it up, but I chased it to the end because I wanted to know how to catch the murderer. Ha ha ha ha. Come on.
I understand. I can keep up with big ideas (*σ??`)σ. Am I very good? , I personally think that the most important thing in a novel is creativity and writing style. The logic of this article is shallow, not very deep, but the deep writing will make people feel unequal, but it is still very good to get rid of the inexplicable feeling and read this book ~ Come on ^0^~