I Found a White-Bone Angel [Western Fantasy]

... Jumped directly to the finale, otherwise I would feel so uncomfortable. The beginning is really fascinating. The world view you want to write is too big, but you can't control it. You want to add everything to this world, gods, peripheral gods, 12 apostles under gods, 12 black, 12 white, dragons, elves, children of the forest, and humans also want to write about divine power and kingship. In terms of political competition, I also want to discuss the true meaning of life, I also want to discuss love, the perception of the whole life, I also want to write about human nature, I also want to write about the dispute between the two camps of black and white, and I also want to write about the disputes between the two camps and the peripheral gangs. There are many maps, and there are many countries and regions in the country. It is so chaotic that I don't know what the place is and what it is used for. To be honest, The Lord of the Rings is not even written so completely. Just pick two points here and you can build a very long story, but they are all mixed together in one novel. Everyone wants to write it, and each one is half and half, but each one is not finished. I feel that it is actually written slowly. I feel that it should be at least a few million words. If you can clearly describe the entire world view, you may have discovered it. The world view I want to write is too big, so I keep talking about various settings to improve. It's like I watched an anime before. Episodes 24 and 16 were all about settings. The settings were all done through dialogue, and then it became bland. As a result, when I watched it, I didn't have a sense of immersion and it was not all settings. It felt like listening to the teacher's class. The first volume should be said to be the best part of the whole book. It has the strongest and most comfortable sense of immersion. You can feel what is really happening around her based on the character's dynamics. This is also limited to the first half of the first volume, because from the second half of the first volume, after the heroine comes out of Dorne, the heroine Basically, there is no sense of existence. Every day, she stays for love, dating, and nothing else. It feels like the heroine has no life of her own. The focus suddenly becomes to exist around the male protagonist, until the heroine dies and plays her own value. After Abi was resurrected, the RE: talker mode started, just chatting, then reminiscing, turning the map, talking again, turning again, talking again, no one can talk to me, and I can think and remember by myself. The reason why I couldn't bear to read this paragraph from Chapter 120 to Chapter 130 is that it is really too long and too recallable. The activities of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are squeezed into the cracks. And the further I write to the end, the less I can feel the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I feel that these two people are just two strangers and colleagues who work together. What are you doing there recently? I am What's going on? As for relationships, when the male protagonist's statue was broken, I thought he finally betrayed the goddess. Who would have thought that he was punished by the goddess. The feeling I saw was that your colleague suddenly said that he likes you and gave up his life for you. It was so unexpected that it was so sudden. After the female protagonist became Abi, I didn't know why she fell in love with the male protagonist. Because of a little finger? After so many reincarnations, why is the male protagonist the special one? Have no idea. It's all based on imagination. Anyway, the heroine found the hero, took out her finger, and the two of them kissed. As for why, I don't know. Then after that, you said how sweet the relationship between the two is, but no, they suddenly became colleagues. You do your thing, I do mine, share any information you have, and leave if nothing happens. By the end, I really couldn't feel the relationship between the two of them. The feeling now is that it is a pity to throw away and tasteless to eat. So that's it, all I can say is it's such a shame.

They actually do it, I love it!

The goddess of light and the god of love always have a sense of déjà vu with the rich woman and her pretty boy (?)

I laughed so hard hahahahaha, this chapter is inexplicably vivid, a bunch of angry bones hahahahahaha

Thank you so much to the author, I will really finish reading it now

Finally finished reading it! ! !

Sorry, I hate this kind of behavior

Unexpectedly, I have finished reading this article after four years! !

So exciting. Well written.

Hahaha, let's fight, let's fight, hahahaha