The All-Knowing Wanderer

Really good! Like it very much! I was also very depressed after reading the text! This article gave me a lot of comfort! The plot and writing are smooth and unpretentious! I regard this as the real ending in my heart~

Finished reading. . It's actually quite well written. But I think the best ending is like an empty dream I won't fall in love with you, I won't forgive you, I'll treat you coldly for the rest of my life, and you'll be so jealous that you deserve it. Forgiveness is difficult, but life is just about making do with it. There is no such thing as love or hate, a lifetime has passed like this, and it is really realistic

. . . I really want to shout, "Go to hell with this scumbag, but it's just a fellow person who came here, forget it" I always feel that living without hope is more cruel than death.

What kind of ending is this? I'm so depressed. I'm going to get tough when I can't get forgiveness. Huanyan still can't resist, so she just admits it. Are those two scumbags bastards? Why are you so biased towards them!

We have also read Sister Murong's works before. It is indeed a piece of torture for the sake of torture. To be honest, I felt that it was tortured and I felt a little numb after reading it. My understanding of the ending of this article is that Huanyan Lake collapsed and all three people drowned in it OTZ. The author is writing a follow-up to Huanyan. As a follow-up, it is necessary to inherit the style and plot of the original work to a certain extent. From the article, it seems that the author is still very faithful to the original work in terms of background (although I have never clearly distinguished those damn pig-headed men when I read Sister Murong's works - -|||). The author chose the type of article written by a fan, and this article indeed has the flavor of a fan. But - okay, I'm going to start nitpicking. The beginning of the article was a bit shocking to me. I don't know if it has something to do with Jinjiang River Crab. The structure of the article seems incomplete (if it is related to Jinjiang, then it was Jinjiang that shocked me, not the author OTZ). With the first impression of Sister Murong's article, the protagonist of the article was already fixed in my mind. When I saw that Huanyan was going to be the heroine, I was basically dumbfounded. The first thing I felt was how this is related to that. After reading it, I realized that the author gave Huanyan the ability to understand the birdsong. So what, the author, I think we can mention this paragraph above. Although the techniques of flashbacks and interludes are also good, I was really confused when I read it. Looking back, Huanyan has changed from a pitiful and tragic character to an avenger, but I always feel that the author's emotional description of him is not deep enough, and the transformation is a bit stiff. After all, Huanyan in the writings of Murong and the author is a person who has not read books and does not have much life experience. The author's description seems to be a little too literary and not naive enough (why does he give me this impression? OTZ). There are many characters who look like a calm person who has suffered a great disaster. The later part about him and Hou still shocked me, (oh, why my imagination has become so low now, I reflect on it). In the final analysis, it was Sister Murong who made the first impression. Suddenly seeing Xiao Shou turn into Xiao Gong, this psychological change - it takes time to adapt. The author wrote later that if you want to completely heal a wound, you cannot just look at the surface. You also need to re-open the festering wound, cut off the rotten flesh and remove the dead bones. I support this with both hands and feet. What I also want to say is that whoever commits the evil is responsible, and whoever is the cause has the effect. The world should still be fairer. If you want to overcome the past, you must first face it, and only by facing it can you move forward even if it is difficult. The author wants to give us a brand new one who can become strong and face the joy of the past. It can be seen from the execution of the words that the author is working hard to develop in this aspect. However, it seems that he still cannot completely transform from the original text of Sister Murong. We feel that a good fanfic should not only have the spiritual flavor of the original work, but also have its own value and creation, and there must be a considerable turning point in the two. It is best that this kind of turning can be completed inadvertently by the reader. Slowly, the reader will identify with you. Oops, I went on a lot, and in the end it turned into talking about my thoughts on life OTZ. In short, the advantage of the completed article is that it can look at the article from the perspective of the full text. We love this. I have written a lot of comments recently, so I just thought about how to find fault in the article, haha, please forgive me if I am wrong. The above is my personal opinion. Ah ah, there is one thing that the author needs to pay attention to. When writing ancient texts, you must not substitute modern vocabulary, eh-- I don't know when the word society appeared, but it seems awkward when it appears in ancient literature.

I completely remembered it I have seen Huanyan Embarrassed Nawen is so abusive Let's read the article slowly Comment slowly

The text is locked during the river crab period. . . So what. . . Say nothing more. . . In fact, Nai's extras are always better than the main story. . .

Good. . . This finished chapter does not need to be locked~

It's not too bad here. . . Nothing like that

Sacrifice. . It's also safe~