[Literary Fanfiction] Control and Indulgence

After reading the novel, I feel that the author wrote it very well and made the heroine very plump. Although the heroine has a spoiled personality, she is not unreasonable. She has her own opinions and is a very determined person. This kind of firm character and belief in loving oneself is what many people lack nowadays. This belief makes her look sparkling, more charming than her beauty. To me, the heroine is like a sharp sword, transforming into her own light little by little. And her beauty is like the gem on the sword. Her unparalleled beauty makes me sigh that the famous sword and the gem complement each other; her lack of beauty does not damage her strength and majesty at all. I think it is not so much that only beautiful people deserve to be pampered, but rather that such a "pampered" person must have top-notch beauty to match. If I were the author, I would also hope that this heroine has the best things in the world. Of course, I also look forward to the author writing exciting stories about ordinary-looking female protagonists in the future. I'm really looking forward to it. I want to see girls with different personalities, looks, and ages shine in different ways.

The female protagonist has grown up very well and strengthened herself. The male protagonist has become a lot more likeable after being betrayed by PUA. However, the plot is still a bit tired in the later stages. It is difficult to reunite after a broken scene. It is a bit sweet but not too sweet, but it is very subtle. Fortunately, it is not a long story, and it is good to finish it in time.

The portrayal of the female protagonist is quite profound and I like it a lot. But the male protagonist is very strange later on. The female protagonist has grown up, but the male protagonist seems to me to be a bit crazy or even completely lost himself. Dogs would shake their heads just looking at the male protagonist.

"I finally thought about having a wife who could be oppressed and finally met a talent like her"? Is this a problem of the male protagonist being the unlucky one? If it were a different princess (belike original work), the princess would be the unlucky one, right?

The beginning is really good. I originally thought that the story of King Thrushmouth had a different flavor among fairy tales. Although I didn't like the king's deception and deliberately making things difficult in the original work, the character plot was quite different from the traditional story of princesses and princes. This version written by the author is really interesting, allowing the heroine to maintain her own personality and not become the domesticated existence in fairy tales. I really like the tsundere girl's ability to manipulate the male protagonist in the early part of this book. Even if she doesn't like to do certain things, she verbally agrees, and her body handles it casually, but she is still very persistent. The two of them get along very much like a confrontational couple, and there is a little friction between you and me, but later in the article, I feel that the female protagonist is trapped in family affection and looking for pure love. In love, her personality changed from the fresh and lively little girl before to an elegant and perfect lover template. She evolved from a little girl to a mature sister. In the later period, I felt that the heroine was already in a state of casually finding a reliable person to end her life. It happened that the male protagonist loved her enough, but she did not meet the person who really touched her heart, so the story ended. There is a broken feeling that the love is no longer there, and the ending does not look perfect. The male protagonist has completely become the corresponding princess character in the traditional version and has been domesticated. It is difficult to say that the relationship between them is love, it is a bit too forced.

Crazy criticism is only good if you are crazy about yourself! The crazy critic who attacks the heroine is a criminal

Very good, very good. The male protagonist's mental journey is also very reasonable. He is attracted by sex, longs for the female protagonist to become his ideal look, he actually cares about the female protagonist more and more despite repeated setbacks (emotional fluctuations, the female protagonist breaks his control), the guilt of realizing his mistakes, and the gentle moments of the female protagonist make him hope that his wish may be fulfilled. Together, these things allow him to gradually see the real female protagonist, learn to respect her, and develop real love. However, because I have made big mistakes in the past and suffered many setbacks, it is normal to be in a low position. Besides, the only way to "tame" Alice is to let her tame herself first.

Excellent anti-pua article

How to realize that I don't have perfect and independent thinking ability, I realized it when I put myself in the heroine's situation at the beginning, and in the male protagonist's situation in the second half... And in the second half, when the heroine is thinking normally, she especially hopes that the two of them will get together quickly... I am very grateful to the author (?艸`) It is really great that the heroine can unswervingly stick to her own will!

Your wife writes so well! Very clearly written about the conversation experience and reaction between two people. Sometimes it feels like I'm watching a literary game