
The Spring Sparrow of the Capital
京城春雀
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 199k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
63Chapters
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6.7Score
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105Comments
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I was so suffocated watching it. I didn't like the heroine's character, and I wanted to see how the two of them would develop. This heroine's character is simply terrible. She doesn't communicate properly with everyone, she outputs herself like a barrage, and she lives in a miserable state. She is simply a model of stress and psychological trauma. Can't this heroine have some growth? After watching her for so long, she is still so unstable at the core. Can't she write that she establishes a normal interpersonal connection with someone? She can't keep hanging out like this. To be honest, when writing such an unlikable character with psychological trauma, you can't let the character keep talking about his suffering, or talk about it too early. She kept saying that, and it reminded me of Ding Xie in the great era. He was also a person who kept saying that he was very miserable, and then caused a lot of trouble to the people around him and was very self-centered. The appeal of unlikable characters lies in their sense of contrast. Beauty, strength and misery, putting misery at the end is the normal order of the narrative. At any rate, it's better to create the charm of the character first and then create the character. You didn't create the charm of the heroine well at all. Until now, apart from her beauty and her miserable and unstable core, this heroine has been empty. There are many plots that could obviously allow the heroine to be less talkative and have more psychological descriptions and detailed descriptions of fleshed-out characters, but there is none, just talkative talk. It gave me the feeling that the heroine was narcissistic, self-centered and stupid, and that she didn't show any self-reliance and self-esteem she should have. He was so angry that he couldn't argue!
So annoying! When will they be able to do something special!
Until now, the male protagonist has not said that he loves the female protagonist, and I am convinced.
Alas, it would be nice if the author's writing style could be better.
This is a torture novel, right? The heroine is being tortured all the time, and there are good things about one man and two men.
Don't finish it so quickly. Write more extras.
Hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, king
Still using your hands? It's not okay to pass it on to the male protagonist (
Wuwuwuwu, when can we see the male protagonist completely degraded?
Wuwuwuwu, when can we see the male protagonist completely degraded?