The Abandoned Land of the Immortals

Many Regrets: Yu Yao's summoning of the spirit was a game in itself. No matter how many happy memories the five people had in the process, they could not escape. In the end, they had to face stabbing and blocking the sword. Although I had already guessed that the villain was useless, I was still sad. Ling Xing Yu Yao Lin Wu Yang Yan came to exercise his power in vain. The largest faction in the world Brother Magatama was thinking about Qijin but lost his heart. Hongsha did nothing wrong from beginning to end but was humiliated by the Xianmen demon. A bowl of soup is so gentle. Master and Master are so kind. The Seven Gold Sect and the Thirteenth Regiment are both very good... It's a pity that the Seven Gold Sect has been suffering for a long time. Who is the villain? In the end, it was difficult to direct anger at Quan Fuwu. Mr. Yu is guilty of so many crimes. But the request that turned into petals at the end made me unable to see through it. Quan Qingfeng is also a scumbag, but I am confused about some things about him. The art of blank space (? After thinking about it, the most painful thing was Hongsha. The person who caused harm to him died so easily. Starting from the heavy memories, the whole story seems to have entered a sad tone, but some parts are described with humorous sentences, which makes it feel more sad. The gods have abandoned their land, but there are still seven-gold old immortals I hope you will meet the spring breeze tomorrow.

As a teacher's first book, it's pretty good! Personally, I think we can tell the story of Queen Qixing, True Lord Wuling and Fairy Qingyan (Lingxing's parents). I like the old story of Qixing very much. Lanshan fell into the lake with Qixing to save Yu Yao and confessed that he had just ascended to immortality. How could the master soup bowl not understand his junior brother Lanshan? The last green firefly led by the master's wife as a tree demon extinguished the light; Tang Yiwan asked Yu Yao to kill him because of his grief and self-blame; Magatama wandered around in the heaven, and finally forgot the meaning of Qixing (using the body of Hongsha to make a deal). Isn't the Qixing that he wanted to protect and loved at the beginning the home he lived with day and night on Pingcang Mountain? People, not a sect that is constantly expanding its recruitment. After Hongsha committed suicide and Magatama was used as a shield by Baolan (who violated Hongsha) and was killed by Yu Yao himself, Yu Yao was really alone. He met a foreigner from the Western Regions by chance and got into trouble for no reason, almost After being slaughtered all over the house and transformed into a human form, he finally obtained the Silver Dragon Sword, and after a massacre in the Western Region, he flew up to heaven. However, Yu Yao was not suitable for that world where immortals colluded, wine ponds and meat forests, aloofness, and indifference to people's livelihood. Is all this a blessing or misfortune for Yu Yao? Quan is useless, in the end, do you really not regard Yu Yao as your real senior brother? Are the sworn brothers with Yan Laixing and Lin Wuyang just acting? Are all the laughter along the way false? Will the flower of mistakes only bear the fruit of mistakes? Is dying by Yan Laixing's sword the ending you want? What if the medicine pack your boss gave you back then was not poison but was actually used to cure colds? Or earlier, if the evil spirit had not trampled the boss's grandson to death, what if... It's a pity there is no if.

I have to say, what a special article. The teacher's writing style is really good and very stylish. There is a feeling of "lightweight and lightness" throughout the whole article. This feeling is the teacher's characteristic. I also like it very much, but maybe it is because the whole process is too light and light + the teacher Fujimoto's method of chopping melons and vegetables, so there is a little lack of foreshadowing and substitution of emotions and emotions. This is just my personal opinion, but I still have to say it is a very good and memorable work! ! Thank you teacher! !

The Abandoned Land by the Gods. At first, I only read the name and did not realize the seriousness of "Abandoned Land". I thought it was a romantic story. After reading it, I found that it is very realistic and tragic. I went straight to the main task without stopping. It was very refreshing to read, and the emotional line was also heart-warming. The barren land also bloomed. Poppies, peonies, bells, and stars are all beautiful images.

It's very beautiful, the characters are all full-bodied, great, very good! But compared to the suffering of the protagonists, the villain still died too easily. It would be better to change the rhythm of the story! Love this one very much!

Woo hoo, I finished repainting it [ bursting into tears ] It still looks good! ! Goddess, I beg you to write some extras for us to watch [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough to watch. I really like this group portrait setting [Cat head] [Cat head] [Cat head] Everyone has flesh and blood.

I watch it so much, I like it so much that I can't bear to part with it [crying]

A regretful but still beautiful story, and the author's writing style is so good that it's worth reading. Lingxing's name was given by Quan Qingfeng, right? You don't want this kind of thing, TAT. Has Lingxing recovered his past memories? Does he know what Quan Qingfeng said to lie to him? Who is the real Peacock? He wants to know the answers to these questions. I really can't match the brain circuits of the two junior brothers from the Quan family. I can only understand that they are arrogant + really mentally ill. They just make up all the lies and talk about how noble they are. The junior brother has a bit of conscience but not much. I don't understand and disagree with Mr. Yu's petal death.

I really like the author's writing style. I have read all the works. I look forward to publishing a book and buying it for my collection.

Woohoo, the free meal is so delicious!