Letters from Heaven

Finally, I saw the kind of emotion between adults that breaks through gender. Too many hp fandoms giving birth to female characters make me feel sick to my stomach. The author is really great.

It's great. I really didn't expect to see such an article. A coincidental encounter ultimately changed the fate of two people, and a Muggle tried his best to change that outcome.

The biggest tear point in this article is the protagonist's repeated self-deprecation and self-mutilation. I remember that I wrote before that he went to the hospital once. The doctor said that he had a mental problem, but he greeted the doctor's ancestors and left it alone. In the eyes of countless people, his behavior is that of a real man, but he still firmly believes that he is just a gangster like a weed. It's really heartbreaking and admirable, but it also brings irritation. What's annoying is that the protagonist always puts down his heart. This is also the biggest touch That heart has love

It's one of the best professorial texts I've ever read.

The emotional line feels very abrupt, but it makes sense

I want to know whose patronus that doe is

... I have to say, this is the most, how should I say, the most flavorful HP fanfic I have ever seen. The language doesn't have the "romantic" feel that occasionally or consistently appears in the fan fiction I've read before, but the plot and emotions are described in a real and delicate manner. This article made my heart go up and down at times, and now that it's over, I feel a little empty. There is no lengthy plot, no mutated and brain-dead plot, the main line of this article itself is everything. I must say that the grasp of the characters of the two men here is hard to extricate. In particular, the beloved professor has not lost his shape, which is something worthy of universal celebration. As for the protagonist, his light has not been obscured by sev. It is not the memory of his past life, the confusing appearance or the indescribable power of the existence of a bug, or some pretentious act of pretending to be weak and tempting with magic potion or something that can be called an idiot. He just tried his best and put in all the qualities of a "Muggle" man. He was straightforward, truthful, tough, heartless, ruffian-like, and reckless in his actions, which made people feel heartbroken and exuded his unique charm. There is nothing about the professor here that makes readers think that he is suddenly attracted by his brain. There is no needlessly gorgeous and venomous sentences, and there is no description that is repeatedly emphasized and cannot give people a sense of reality. His character is presented in the author's writing in a way that makes people unconsciously addicted to accept it. Elegant, calm, restrained, depressed, dark, those who are heavy, burdened, and those are all displayed so naturally. The protagonist is not a saint, nor is it just another touch of "sunshine". In fact, intellectually, I always have some doubts about the sweet setting of the gentle saint of sunshine who travels through the professors' tolerance and love and then develops into the final relationship. Can people who have not experienced darkness accept everything with just memory, or even heal the scars of the past, and go on forever? Now, the title "Master" is very endearing. The showdown, or the sentence when Fifth Master confessed his love, "I am self-righteous and smart. I will not beat around the bush and tell you to take care of your health, love your life, and live well. I am officially informing you that you love life and death, and I will do it anyway." "In other words, we'll see you in hell when you die." I was so cute. As for the professor's "I love you, only love you", this article never had any inexplicable pink atmosphere, incomprehensible sudden heartbeat, incomprehensible devotion. It allowed me to see the purest and deepest kind of love. At this point, I actually don't know what I was talking about. In fact, after reading it in one breath, I couldn't write anything due to the ups and downs in my mood. But when I closed it, I suddenly felt that I saw such a heart-warming text. Even if the sentences are not gorgeous at all and the logic is wrong, there should be something left behind. For this rare ups and downs of my heart, for these two people who make people rippling, and for the author of this article who has an admirable grasp of the characters. Finally, let me admire Mr. Zhang's final declaration: "Perhaps others will take care of themselves step by step for the rest of their lives because they are a good match, because they have similar looks, because they have money, or because they need marriage. This is not me. There is no relationship between us except the coincidence given by God. I am an ordinary Chinese second-rate who can't be more careless, and he is a British wizard gentleman with a prince in his family name. However, these bastard things can't stop me and him." Among thousands of people, they met each other and decided to be with each other. There will be struggles, pains, sacrifices, and maybe regrets along the way, but such a happy ending is real and... Makes people look forward to it and want to bless it.

It's okay, but the emotional line after the war feels a bit oily and doesn't taste quite right. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

Well, various book reviews have said everything I want to say, so I can only repeat it again like an idiot. Fuck, this is really my favorite fanfic of the original protagonist. Mr. Zhang is a real man, not a sissy who engages in romance! It was a pleasure to watch, and what was very special was that Harry was a complete stranger and only appeared once. I said it was refreshing to see the protagonist's law and my stomach ached! Too good to explain

After reading it carefully, this is a very..."Rude" article. And it's shockingly true. And this is the first article about Muggles using sniper guns to deal with Voldemort, right? [Laughs ... Damn it, I can't laugh. I am the kind of person who is happy to read a novel as long as the content is not too bad or too cruel. My mother once said that I can understand what I am doing just by sitting in front of the computer and looking at my expression. But I didn't laugh while reading this article from beginning to end. Even when the protagonist beats up Dumbledore. Is this article sad? Of course not. Is this article dark? Yes, but what should I say? Its darkness is completely different from the deep dark literature we usually see. It is far different from the piercing elegance, pain and delicate sadness. It simply exudes a vital smell of decay. …What adjectives did I use. I don't like many of the articles about Snape in Jinjiang. The ones that are dark are this one and "The Pain of Loss". This article and "The Pain of Loss" are almost the two extremes of writing. "The Pain of Loss" has the beautiful, gentle sadness and darkness, while this article... Is basically the opposite. Occasionally, there will be a concise and clean sentence that makes people shine. The number of times can be counted on one hand. The few places I have seen recommending this article all say that the protagonist is an ordinary person. In fact, he is anything but ordinary. Except for not knowing magic, he is not ordinary in any way. Although the beginning of this article is so ordinary that it is almost boring, neither the article nor the people are ordinary at all. I really admire the author's ability to control such cultural relics. Of course the ending is good. But why can't I say the word "warmth" in the first episode, which can only be described as "warmth" according to the plot? I really can't use words like "warmth" and "loving" in this article. Although I know this article is very loving! But when I saw the part where the protagonist asked the professor to choose one of the two, what were my feelings? Happy? Move? How could I use such bright and beautiful words in this article! But go back and think about the plot and try to hypnotize me, ignore the writing, ignore the writing—— Instantly killed by cuteness. Of course, I am not saying that the writing style of this article is not good. It is quite difficult to use words that are neither bright nor beautiful in this article. I think that from the perspective of a fantasy-oriented esthete like me, I always only want to get the sentence at the beginning, "It's so real that it's outrageous." But please don't interpret it as "reality". Thank you. The rhythm of this article is not strong but not bad either. The key is that it is not cluttered and it is indeed attractive. What surprised me was that the only person whose favorability increased after reading this article was Father L. Really speechless. If someone accidentally reads my comment first and then still has the courage to read the article... The word "heaven" is used in the title of the article, which I think is quite appropriate. Hell and heaven are two realms, with the human world in between.