Ordinary Player

The author's writing is quite good, but there are a lot of things that could be expanded upon but are just mentioned in one stroke. The characters are also a bit thin, which is a pity. But overall it's a good novel.

I like the background of your plot world very much. Really, it is much better than those cookie-cutter themes. This is my own feeling after reading it. I feel that when writing, it would be better if I could pay more attention to the psychology, emotions, and actions of the characters. Emotions and rationality contribute to human behavior. However, when describing this article, it is more rational rather than emotional, and it will look dry. If the emotions of the characters are added, they will be more like living people, and the world will be more full. Come on! Thank you for your hard work!

But dear, the outcome of this game is very important to me, why don't we write a side story? 🐰

I can't do it anymore, I want to give you 30 million

Very well written! Beautiful! ~The plot is pretty good, and the characterization is also very interesting, but the scene changes are a bit inexplicable, and the ending is also very sudden.

Finished Spreading Flowers ~ I just feel like there is still a lot that has not been unfolded. When will I write a sequel?

The Zhengqing sect must have finished its game after taking away the broom star Yun Shenzhen.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author!

Is this a bad ending? The previous writing is indeed good, but the ending is indeed too hasty, right?

It's too late, let's finish with flowers~