Dream-Making Master (Reborn)

This is my third long review on lj. I couldn't help but praise. I came here from the tweet and started reading it after it was finished. After reading the free chapter, I ordered all the free chapters. As a result, I read the article very quickly and wrote my thoughts for a long time into a long review. While reading, my emotions were always driven by the writing. I have to say that Mu Yan's writing is absolutely amazing. The structure of the article is the ultimate expression of the four words "watertight". It is relaxed and relaxed, and the writing style is mature and sophisticated, beautiful and without cumbersomeness. Overall, it's smooth and stable; no typos were found, and it's extremely comfortable to read. It can also be seen that Mu Yan is very serious, because every description is unique and just right. It is of the kind that one point more or less will not work, that is, it is impossible to imagine what it will be like after more or less changes. It seems that every direction of the plot of this article, every action, question, plan, motivation of the characters, etc. Are all naturally as they should be, without any abruptness, step by step. So the eight sufferings are taken away. The logic is rigorous, foreshadowing is everywhere, the suspense is cleverly designed, and the reversals are constant, just right. Therefore, the article is interesting in more than one place, and the emotional and plot lines go hand in hand. If you want to reason, you can reason. If you don't want to reason, don't delay eating sugar. If you want to watch the plot, you can watch it. It is a good work that can deal with all aspects of the plot. Ring tracing makes people feel like they are actually there. There is a boundless sea of ​​misery on the hanging mirror platform, a vast snowy land across the Dream Palace, a molten cave in the Four Wilderness Mountains, and a sea of ​​flowers in front of Senior Sister's Palace. The world view is huge and complete, the story is atmospheric, and the characters are full of flesh and blood. The few sentences that I clicked to the end gave me the feeling that even a supporting character has a "pipa half-hiding his face" and can continue to dig into the past. The writing is very real, and some points are thought-provoking rather than just superficial. It is atmospheric and full of details. Whether it is the interaction between the two protagonists or some detailed actions of one of them, it is well described. The candy is emotional candy, and the knife has the plot knife. It is Zhong Shen's heartbreaking glass slag that is difficult to calm down, and the pests are causing trouble and a sense of powerlessness in the whole family... In the deception and fraud, everyone is dealing with each other for profit, and the calculation is based on trust. I think for Lu Ci, Wu Zhou's sincerity that never hides will be like a fire that burns away the monsters and monsters, and it not only warms the heart. "Why do you have everything in your sleeves?" "Because someone has nothing up their sleeve." "You either?" "I only want you." "Are there any other sweets?" "Aren't you?" While reading it, I told people around me several times that this book shocked me. He is self-denial, gentle, sensible and knows how to advance and retreat. Ci is also a little angel. He is very principled but not kind-hearted like a holy father. And both of them have that kind of boyishness and cleanliness. I dare say there are some scenes that I will remember for a long time. "The lifespan is divided equally, and we live and die together." Fu Ling controls the deer, "like the eternity of the moon, like the rising of the sun. Auspicious birthdays, eternal well-being." Uncle's words, "You can't do anything too intimate," and Ci Ci's words, "Brother Wu Zhou." And the "tragic, heart-breaking, and irreversible" misunderstanding... Praise again! The sculpting of Mu Yan is really amazing! There are many times in the article that Ci Ci knew what he was going to do as soon as he opened his mouth. The aura of divine love is completely harmonious and the three views and minds are connected, so that the two parties are so perfect, but I didn't even have the slightest desire to dream. When I read it, I just thought that the two of them would get together soon! Is this fairy love, the kind that even dream girls can't dream of? (It's just a metaphor. I'm not a dream girl. Wuwuwu. Zhouci will always be together. Lock it up for me!! Another thing is, the name is so interesting. For example, the pufferfish and river crane... Are so cute! ! There is so much I want to say but I don't know how to express it. It has been finished for a long time but I still want to spread the word. Looking forward to Mu Yan's pre-receipt of articles! ! Please tell me if you can write more about Mu Yan's physical appearance... I still want to read it! ! ! Finally. I turned to the first chapter. The night at the beginning is "the boundless sea and the sky is filled with black clouds." Lu Ci was alone. At the end of the night, "the sky is filled with snow outside the window, and the snowflakes are dancing and circling in the half-bright moon, falling on the jade house of Qionglou, and spreading white frost all over the ground—— Drifting. Drifting. Drifting into a deep dream. " Lu Ci and Wu Zhou are happy.

Got this from Xinwen, it looks great! It was really comfortable to read it in one go. I originally wanted to read the comments to read the spoilers, but it turned out that there were no spoilers. The reading experience was also satisfying, but it would be great to follow up and participate in the discussion, but I was worried that I would be scratching my head wondering about the follow-up. Although I didn't watch it with much thought, I was still surprised by the foreshadowing. The logic of the whole article is perfect and very nice. I have also been doubting Wangyou and Zhongli. After reading this, I can only say that I am on the first level and the author is on the upper atmosphere! At the time, I thought the writing when the senior sister died was really abrupt and had a sense of desolation, but maybe this was a foreshadowing of still life. However, compared to the foreshadowing of the plot, the emotional line is also better written. The relationship between the two of them, Ji Wuzhou is really sweet, and Lu Ci is really good at it, but I am not educated and can only shout that they are a good match. The author quickly coded the words, I want to read the next one!

It's free and available, so I want to order it all tomorrow.

Although the name of the article sounds ordinary, it is really good-looking!

End! I haven't read such a good novel in a long time. The plot is novel, the characters are delicately drawn, and the context is consistent. Thank you for writing such a good article.

After reading it, I was still unsatisfied. Want extra

I suddenly won the prize, hahahahahaha thank you so much!

Ji Wuchen: Tsk, tsk, tsk, look, I just said my reminder is necessary! Today's young people...

What a great write-up!

The plot is super complete and the foreshadowing is so great. I experienced the magical twist of crying in the middle and then laughing again.