The demon sect’s peerless enchantress vs. the righteous sect’s comeback good-for-nothing
A super-long fantasy novel, sweet and satisfying, childhood friends
Synopsis:
They knew each other as children, innocent and inseparable, but fate tore them apart and sent them to opposite ends of the world.
Ten years later, they reunited. One was a demon enchantress, feared throughout the Four Demon Sects, while the other had become a lowly gatekeeper in the outer sect of the Divine Sword Sect.
Fate had already laid out their paths, declaring that her life would be no more than a fleeting dream, and that her legs would be cut off so she’d kneel and bow her head.
But she believed only in the sword in her hand, and in the power of people to overcome fate!
“Our paths are different. We can love each other and understand each other, but we cannot stay together. The world is vast, yet there is no way to silence the gossip of the masses.”
“With my sword, I’ll steady the realm. I give you my whole heart, with all my sincerity. I have nothing to be ashamed of before the world.”
Before you start:
1. A super-long, exciting fantasy novel with lots of original worldbuilding.
2. Both leads are powerful. The first female lead grows stronger over time. At first, she’s a whiny, lazy couch potato, but she’ll turn things around.
3. Happy ending.
4. If you don’t like it, please be gentle. Discussion is welcome.
5. The author’s Weibo: @Mu Feng Qing Nian
6. At readers’ suggestion, here are some additions about the power levels.
There are sixteen major realms in total. Each realm has three stages: early, middle, and late. Each stage has four levels, for twelve levels altogether. Reaching level twelve of a realm without breaking through is called great perfection.
Five Postnatal Elements: Qi Element Realm, Body Element Realm, Meridian Element Realm (introductory martial arts), Bone Element Realm, Marrow Element Realm (beginner mastery of martial arts)
Three Innate Elements: Spirit Element Realm, Core Element Realm, Soul Element Realm (advanced mastery of martial arts)
Entering the Dao Through Martial Arts: Acupoint Realm, Tracing the Source Realm, Immaculate Realm
Masters of the Martial Dao: Nirvana Realm, Rebirth Realm, Reincarnation Realm
Reaching the Pinnacle: Pure Void Realm, Primordial Chaos Realm
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Forsaking Immortality
Two women reborn, a mad, obsessive, wicked disciple x a cool, abstinent beauty of a master
Synopsis:
In her previous life, Yu Lianxin was framed and driven mad by demonic poison. Her master, the Azure Cloud Immortal, gave her own blood to save her beloved disciple, trading her life for Yu Lianxin’s and bringing her back to the sect.
But the Azure Cloud Immortal fell into demonic ways as a result, becoming the target of everyone’s scorn. The mighty cultivators of the Divine Sect joined forces to hunt her down. Only Yu Lianxin stayed by her master’s side. As they were pierced by countless arrows, she glimpsed the secrets of heaven, and the two of them died together.
Time turned back, and all things came to life again.
The world knew only that the beloved disciple of Qingyun Immortal of the Tinglan Sect had turned demonic overnight, betrayed her master, and defied all conventions. Master and disciple had become enemies, and the immortal searched desperately for her treacherous disciple so she could cleanse the sect. They did not know that the cycle of reincarnation had carried their hatred on and on, while the supreme Daoist heart had become a laughingstock.
A strip of white silk covered Que Qingyun’s eyes and bound her jade-white wrists.
Yu Lianxin lifted her chin and whispered seductively in her ear, “I’ve harbored improper desires for you since I was little, Master. But all you ever cared about was the Dao, the heavens. If one day there could still be a place for me in your heart, whether it was hatred or resentment, I’d be overjoyed.”
Que Qingyun was silent for a long time. At last, she answered with a soft sigh: “Foolish child.”
I cross a thousand rivers and mountains for one thought, while the world laughs at me for my madness.
Immortal, yet not immortal; demon, yet not demon. May this unrequited love not end in betrayal.
Theme: Don’t put people in boxes.
This is the longest article I have read in JJ, with a lot of words. Generally speaking, the story in the early and middle stages of this article can even be accurate to the time before Xiaoyi comes to participate in the Fengyun Ranking the day after tomorrow. It's so good for Soul Yuan Realm. I feel like the author has covered too many things in one go. This book originally had 3 million words in advance and a total of more than 1,000 chapters, but when it was finished, it only had more than 180 words and 600 chapters. In the middle, 1.2 Million words and 40 chapters were cut off. As for the content of Chapter 0, as a reader, of course I hope that the author can try his best to depict a complete world view and recycle all the foreshadowings. However, the author himself also said that when the writing was getting further and further back, the income was beyond his means. In fact, I can understand it. I still secretly hope that the author can give an ending to some of the characters in the article in the sequel, such as Rou Yuan, Xuanyuan Ge, Liu Qingfeng, etc., As well as some foreshadowing, such as the things Le Jianlan gave Xiaoxuan to let her go to Shenhuang, Miss Jiang's family, the purpose of the visitors from outer space, etc. Overall, this article is worth reading. The protagonist is not the kind of person who is very powerful and powerful from the beginning, and he becomes more and more powerful through training, which is good. I watched Abandoned Immortal first and then watched Witch. I personally think Abandoned Immortal is slightly better than Witch. It may be that Witch fell apart a little later, but it does not affect that it is still a good article worth reading. Now I am looking forward to the sequel of Witch. Please don't give up on this IP. With the author's imagination and writing skills, I think Witch can be given a better and more perfect ending [poor]
Very unfortunate article. The early setting and imagination are very good.
It's a pity that too many things were added to advance the plot. Life glycosides. . {Curse, divine star. To be honest, cultivating immortality is an act that goes against nature. Because of these things, most of the article is a bit hard to accept. Many things in it have loopholes or incomplete settings.
The things in the early setting are enough to write a sound novel. Leshi, Shenshan, Sky-Swallowing Beast, Xuantian Palace, and Futu Palace. It's really full. Many scenes and foreshadowing are basically disposable. The arena of the Pagoda Palace, the forge connected to the Sword Mountain, etc.
In terms of settings, there are He's feelings for Le, the apprenticeship agreement at the sacred mountain, Le's growth in blacksmithing skills, the trials in the Pagoda Palace, Le's understanding of creating his own swordsmanship, etc. There is no follow-up development for all of them, which is really regrettable.
Let's talk about the character growth part. In the early days, some people said that Le was a holy mother, but I didn't agree with it at the time. If she really wanted to describe it, she was actually a licker.
Throughout the entire story, she never takes the initiative in this relationship. Self-awareness is almost non-existent. The situation of the licking dog being favored by the goddess is basically the same as in the article.
In terms of cultivation, I always emphasize: Ah, I'm not strong enough, I can't catch up. The situation has not changed from beginning to end. Anyway, Zhi Zhi is not as good as others in playing tricks, has inferior intelligence, and is more resistant to beating at best. At once. . . Is this the author's adopted daughter?
On the other hand, look at Ji. As a reader, my feeling is that she is very strong, very scheming, and far-reaching. She has endured a lot and suffered a lot.
But the whole is fragmented. There are very few descriptions of Ji's opportunities, training, and specific experiences.
We all know that she is amazing, but why? Why is it great? Don't know anything.
Comparing the two, what is happiness? It is clear that both parties love each other more than themselves and would sacrifice their lives for each other. But why should one of them be described as so "cheap"? I don't want to scold the characters, after all, they can't speak out. But the look and feel is really not good.
In some novels, it seems that the characters in the text come to life on their own, and everything goes as planned. Some are very purposeful.
This article is unfortunately the latter. I understand that the author must have profit and mental considerations. But it's really a pity.
I look forward to seeing your revision or reinterpretation of this work during my lifetime. I will definitely come back to support you.
It's been two months since I read it. When can I see the sequel?
It's a pity that I can't order all the locks.
Overall, the book is good to read, but the ending is too rushed. It feels like the author didn't want to write it at the end. I really want to read it later! ! !
Today I accidentally clicked on a comment on a certain chapter, and then I realized it was yue Xiaoyi, not le. I had always read it wrong, but when I turned around and thought about it, luckily Sister Ji had read it correctly (dog head)
It seems that the author is really tired of writing, but the first part has taken a lot of effort, and I'm afraid I won't feel comfortable finishing it in a hurry.
Where are Su Tingyun and Senior Sister Ning? And what about Fahuai?
It's a bit regretful that in the end, the story of the two getting married was almost brushed off. The ending is too hasty and there is no trace of life after getting married. There is no sweet daily life where the relationship is exposed to the bright side, which is a bit sad. But the first half is indeed one of the few excellent novels I have read in so many years, and I am very grateful to the author for writing this excellent work! ! I hope that the author can realize his life wish as soon as possible and can make up for the follow-up of this work in his spare time in the future. It would be a great honor for us readers! !
Nice! ! ! There are really very few full-length Lily fantasy novels, and the writing is very good. I can never get enough of the stories of Xiao Yi and Sister Ji. This one has ended. What story will the author tell about them in the sequel? Looking forward to it. This is the top Lily fantasy book in my mind!
The second time I played it recently, I'm really curious as to how I kept chasing it all before.
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Provoke
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The Archenemy Turned into a Cat
Beauty
This is the longest article I have read in JJ, with a lot of words. Generally speaking, the story in the early and middle stages of this article can even be accurate to the time before Xiaoyi comes to participate in the Fengyun Ranking the day after tomorrow. It's so good for Soul Yuan Realm. I feel like the author has covered too many things in one go. This book originally had 3 million words in advance and a total of more than 1,000 chapters, but when it was finished, it only had more than 180 words and 600 chapters. In the middle, 1.2 Million words and 40 chapters were cut off. As for the content of Chapter 0, as a reader, of course I hope that the author can try his best to depict a complete world view and recycle all the foreshadowings. However, the author himself also said that when the writing was getting further and further back, the income was beyond his means. In fact, I can understand it. I still secretly hope that the author can give an ending to some of the characters in the article in the sequel, such as Rou Yuan, Xuanyuan Ge, Liu Qingfeng, etc., As well as some foreshadowing, such as the things Le Jianlan gave Xiaoxuan to let her go to Shenhuang, Miss Jiang's family, the purpose of the visitors from outer space, etc. Overall, this article is worth reading. The protagonist is not the kind of person who is very powerful and powerful from the beginning, and he becomes more and more powerful through training, which is good. I watched Abandoned Immortal first and then watched Witch. I personally think Abandoned Immortal is slightly better than Witch. It may be that Witch fell apart a little later, but it does not affect that it is still a good article worth reading. Now I am looking forward to the sequel of Witch. Please don't give up on this IP. With the author's imagination and writing skills, I think Witch can be given a better and more perfect ending [poor]
Very unfortunate article. The early setting and imagination are very good. It's a pity that too many things were added to advance the plot. Life glycosides. . {Curse, divine star. To be honest, cultivating immortality is an act that goes against nature. Because of these things, most of the article is a bit hard to accept. Many things in it have loopholes or incomplete settings. The things in the early setting are enough to write a sound novel. Leshi, Shenshan, Sky-Swallowing Beast, Xuantian Palace, and Futu Palace. It's really full. Many scenes and foreshadowing are basically disposable. The arena of the Pagoda Palace, the forge connected to the Sword Mountain, etc. In terms of settings, there are He's feelings for Le, the apprenticeship agreement at the sacred mountain, Le's growth in blacksmithing skills, the trials in the Pagoda Palace, Le's understanding of creating his own swordsmanship, etc. There is no follow-up development for all of them, which is really regrettable. Let's talk about the character growth part. In the early days, some people said that Le was a holy mother, but I didn't agree with it at the time. If she really wanted to describe it, she was actually a licker. Throughout the entire story, she never takes the initiative in this relationship. Self-awareness is almost non-existent. The situation of the licking dog being favored by the goddess is basically the same as in the article. In terms of cultivation, I always emphasize: Ah, I'm not strong enough, I can't catch up. The situation has not changed from beginning to end. Anyway, Zhi Zhi is not as good as others in playing tricks, has inferior intelligence, and is more resistant to beating at best. At once. . . Is this the author's adopted daughter? On the other hand, look at Ji. As a reader, my feeling is that she is very strong, very scheming, and far-reaching. She has endured a lot and suffered a lot. But the whole is fragmented. There are very few descriptions of Ji's opportunities, training, and specific experiences. We all know that she is amazing, but why? Why is it great? Don't know anything. Comparing the two, what is happiness? It is clear that both parties love each other more than themselves and would sacrifice their lives for each other. But why should one of them be described as so "cheap"? I don't want to scold the characters, after all, they can't speak out. But the look and feel is really not good. In some novels, it seems that the characters in the text come to life on their own, and everything goes as planned. Some are very purposeful. This article is unfortunately the latter. I understand that the author must have profit and mental considerations. But it's really a pity. I look forward to seeing your revision or reinterpretation of this work during my lifetime. I will definitely come back to support you.
It's been two months since I read it. When can I see the sequel?
It's a pity that I can't order all the locks. Overall, the book is good to read, but the ending is too rushed. It feels like the author didn't want to write it at the end. I really want to read it later! ! !
Today I accidentally clicked on a comment on a certain chapter, and then I realized it was yue Xiaoyi, not le. I had always read it wrong, but when I turned around and thought about it, luckily Sister Ji had read it correctly (dog head)
It seems that the author is really tired of writing, but the first part has taken a lot of effort, and I'm afraid I won't feel comfortable finishing it in a hurry.
Where are Su Tingyun and Senior Sister Ning? And what about Fahuai?
It's a bit regretful that in the end, the story of the two getting married was almost brushed off. The ending is too hasty and there is no trace of life after getting married. There is no sweet daily life where the relationship is exposed to the bright side, which is a bit sad. But the first half is indeed one of the few excellent novels I have read in so many years, and I am very grateful to the author for writing this excellent work! ! I hope that the author can realize his life wish as soon as possible and can make up for the follow-up of this work in his spare time in the future. It would be a great honor for us readers! !
Nice! ! ! There are really very few full-length Lily fantasy novels, and the writing is very good. I can never get enough of the stories of Xiao Yi and Sister Ji. This one has ended. What story will the author tell about them in the sequel? Looking forward to it. This is the top Lily fantasy book in my mind!
The second time I played it recently, I'm really curious as to how I kept chasing it all before.