An Ordinary Person Caught in a Love Polygon

[Updated at 15:00 pm on the Saturday after V] There are no saved manuscripts after Chapter 31. They are all written now. I wrote the first draft (4K-5K words) in the afternoon and evening before, and revised it the next day. Usually all revisions are completed around 1 pm, and it can be completed in the morning faster. Pre-released article: "Entertainment Gold Medal Discipline Inspection Commission".

Finally finished reading it! It does feel like it's a bit high and low. The characters and supporting characters at the beginning were really well-shaped, which made me very interested. I really liked the writing at first, but later on, it felt different. There was always an indescribable feeling, which was just weird. I can only say that it did not meet my expectations. Someone in the comment section really expressed what I was thinking. But I really like reading this kind of refreshing article, and I like this kind of horse-trading. Come on, author! I hope the author will write better and better! !

After watching it, it is true that I feel a little high and low, but to be honest, the setting concept is very good. It is originally a sand sculpture. It is enough to have fun watching it. It is enough to pass the time. I personally enjoyed watching it and did not delve into the characters. However, it is true that Xiao Song lost some of his attractive characteristics later on, especially after he left the system. He does fit in with the "ordinary person" in his name. He could not do everything to perfection, and he could not even refuse decisively and neatly when faced with the pursuit of his roommate. There were no slaps in the face in his career in the later period, which may make readers feel "boring" and "watery". But if you want to say that other characters are broken, I think it is very rare. My brother is a capitalist. He has always been a genius among wealthy families and plutocrats. He enjoys capital dividends and cannot empathize with ordinary people and is even very indifferent. In fact, it has always been like this. He is kinder to Xiao Song. But in fact, the business competition is also mentioned in the article. He still grabs what he should grab, and there is no mercy on Xiao Song. The protagonist in the roommate chapter, Gong, is also a buffoon from the beginning to the end. He is a person who thinks he is straight, arrogant, does not know how to consider others, saves face, and even apologizes to others. It can only be said that grades cannot represent his character, and he is a wandering person. In short, he knows that he is the pride of heaven, and he looks down on the people around him, so he uses some despicable methods to mess with Xiao Song, but he actually knows that it is wrong, so he covers it up. As for the roommate protagonist, he has been accustomed to denying himself and finding problems within himself since he was a child, but he is also a bit proud of himself. He is the best among the best students, so he will not really think about Xiao Song in the early stage. And he later realized that Xiao Song was good and realized that Xiao Song's character was kind, soft and pushy, so it was normal for him to "bully the weak and fear the strong". However, he did not forcefully interfere in anything with Xiao Song. This cannot be said to be bad for him, right? However, later on, his green tea method to pursue Xiao Song was admitted and known to be ineffective. I think it started to break down here. His setting should be considerate of others, but here he never considered Xiao Song's mood. Even the method of "forcing a confession" from Su Sichuan later I even thought was very tasteless, but it was a moral flaw, and he later changed his ways. As for Gong, the actor in the entertainment industry, he really didn't have any kind-heartedness to be friendly to his younger generation at the beginning. The previous article has always emphasized that he was using Xiao Song to fight Wu in the ring, and Xiao Song also knew this very well. Later, his inner thoughts and pursuit methods of being interested in Xiao Song were normal! He is such a narcissistic and arrogant person who feels that the world revolves around him. Before Xiao Song fell off his horse, he had never looked at Xiao Song with an equal eye. He felt that he was really showing kindness, and a young newcomer should be grateful. This idea of ​​his is what a person like him would think. The greasy pursuit later was because he thought too highly of himself. I think his character is consistent with this from beginning to end. Later, he gave up courtship because he knew that he would be completely rejected or even disliked. If he continued, he would lose face. In addition, Xiao Song officially announced that his moral bottom line did not allow him to be a mistress who interfered with others, so he quit. However, he still had delusions because he was unwilling to accept that someone as good as himself would be rejected. He is quite easy to understand.

Haven't finished reading yet. Read the previous one first. Then purchased the chapter for the review. It just feels so suffocating. I just like to read those kinds of cool articles. Well, maybe it's the kind where the main character is very strong. The kind that is very strong in the early stages of the article. So I just can't see the kind of person who is still awesome despite his identity. (I mean in this world.) But there are all kinds of forbearance and so on. I knew he was on a mission. Just go and endure it. But I can't stand it.

It's a very novel subject matter. I haven't seen it much before. It was very exciting to watch it at the beginning. It's not too bad. I think the character design is a little bit bad, but it's okay. I came from the Discipline Inspection Commission. I look forward to writing it better!

…I couldn't bear it when I saw the 79. I happened to see the 52 card before, and I ordered it all when I saw it was finished today. . To be honest, I regret it. I really drove high and walked low...

Open high and go low, this is it. I didn't read the comment section and just read the article. I really liked the first part of it, but when I saw the second part, I didn't know why I didn't want to read it.

After reading it, I just felt that the relationship between Song Shi and Qin Yunsheng was very cute (brotherly love), and the setting of the writing was still very interesting, but after chapter 40, it just became chaotic, so I just picked it up and finished reading it.

There is really no need for this article to be a hundred-word chapter, although it seems that the number of chapters will be neat. I jumped to this from Chapter 25-27, which was criticized by many people. I was angry for a while and then continued to read it. As a result, I didn't know what I was looking at. Overall, this is a novel that is full of ideas, writing style, and plot. But for some reason, the author is particularly good at creating non-decent characters. He can always make a person very annoying in a few words. Although he can clearly establish a character in a few words, he must spend a lot of words describing the villain. As a result, the two male protagonists, especially the character of Gong, are very vague. Or maybe I want to describe that there are only two normal people in the whole story, who are attacking and receiving, giving people the feeling that they are a natural match, but the others are too crazy, and everyone's personality gradually degrades in the later period... A small problem becomes a big problem, and whatever happens underneath is so real that it makes people uncomfortable. It is obviously a very unrealistic background, but in this place it becomes realistic again. After I read a few chapters later, I had to go back to the copy and read it, and it felt increasingly inconsistent. It was already three-thirty in the morning. I originally came to see the cannon fodder enter the station and confess to his relatives. I didn't see the former, and it's better not to see the latter. Reading suggestion: Skip 25-27. If you can continue reading when you see the story of "Gong Recognition", then just read it. If you can't stand it, it's almost done. 25-27 Can be read individually, but watching them in succession will affect the perception.

A particularly bizarre thing, very similar to the two in the campus novel. The daughter-in-law of a grandma had some conflicts with her (daughter-in-laws are shameless). As a result, the daughter-in-law seemed to know that she was shameless. She used to work as a matchmaker for a neighbor's family. Later, when the family got married, she came back but did not enter the house. She did not enter the house, so she sat with the family members who were getting married. (Let's make it clear first that no one will let her go home.) She even shamelessly asked grandma to "invite" her before she would come back. As for the old people, the old people in their 70s and 80s who were born a year before the founding of the People's Republic of China would not come back until she was invited. Finally, the women in the village came to persuade grandma, and grandma also bluntly said: No one will let her come back, and she will not come back. This is her home, and this is grandma's home. Let me tell you something even more shameless. Grandpa passed away, and grandma was alone at home. Then the matchmaker hired by grandma's daughter-in-law, who was so mean, said to grandma, "Will you still live in this house in the future?" It's a good thing that the old man was playing mahjong, otherwise he would be bypassed. This home is grandma's home, and she actually asked her relatives from her natal family to ask grandma, "Will you still live in this house in the future?" It is not a human thing. When I asked this question, I had an urge to tear her face apart. "A person with a soft heart is a person without blessings." This was an understanding that I didn't understand at the time. I regret it very much now. I really didn't do anything at that time. I just insisted on saying that this is also my grandma's home, so why can't I live there. This kind of person really is. No wonder my daughter-in-law is thinking about divorce even though she has a child that is almost three years old.