After I Transmigrated Into a Book, I Became the Male Lead's Puppet

Hua Lian is like a dream of Miao Yin. Miaoyin traveled to this world, and all the persistence and care were not obtained in the end. She was stupid and paranoid, but no one said to her, "I care about you." There was no one in the world to give her a hug when she needed kindness, so she went crazy. And what about Hua Lian? She has a brother, a mother, and a lover. All the things Miaoyin asked for, but she couldn't get, she got. All this is like a dream of Miaoyin. The reality is so painful, but there is everything in the dream.

Ah, right. I seemed to have figured out a few things that felt wrong. The ending did not explain clearly what happened to Hehuan, including how he met Miaoyin and why he had to wait for her. In the end, Miaoyin tied him up and he didn't explain what happened after Miaoyin died. And how could Qi Yue forgive Yang Lang? At that time, she thought that Manchuan had framed her and was so filled with hatred. But if it was Yang Lang, everything would be fine? Yang Lang injured Man Chuan and framed Qi Yue. These two people were so kind to him when he was young. He could do this to these two people without feeling any guilt. Can such a person be easily forgiven...? And why can the male and female protagonists finally meet themselves in the first life, and only after death can their souls be reincarnated to the next life? Unless they travel through time and space, there is no way to meet themselves in other lives according to the normal timeline, right? They have all passed through the wonderful sounds of people, but they are still not allowed to become immortals. It's like a dog to God. Tsk, it's a pity that Manchuan was ruthless but affectionate in that life. He devoted himself to the Tao, and for the sake of Miaoyin, he was completely destroyed.

If Manchuan had been kinder to Miaoyin in his previous life, Miaoyin would not have done this unwillingly. In the final analysis, it was still Manchuan's fault.

Well, the early stage was great, the characters, writing, etc. Were all very attractive, but I can't say it was a letdown in the later stage. Anyway, I felt that the plot was still a bit missing, for example, the story of Miao Yin and He Huan was not explained clearly (ah, I don't know if I missed this, it was just confusing anyway)

I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been explained clearly. But the story between the heroine's brother and the heroine and the story with Qiu Sheng did give me a good reading experience, but the latter part did make me feel weird. Many parts were not written clearly and clearly. The story pattern is quite big and innovative. Unfortunately, the gradual change of emotions and the explanation of the truth were not really handled well. Come on(???_??)?

The ending made me very sad. Who was right and who was wrong? Is the sound wrong?

Maybe it's Miaoyin and Manchuan. Hua Lian is Miaoyin's clone. I'm a little curious about Qiusheng and Manchuan now.

It's a bit unfinished... The wild boar one is better, woo woo woo

I've always read it quite well, with a lot of flavour, and I feel that the writing is very good. The emotions in some parts at the beginning always felt a bit abrupt, but later on when the mystery was solved, it was smoothed out. In the end, the explanation of Miao Yin and Yang Lang felt a bit too hasty. Especially seeing that Hua Lian is only a part of Miao Yin, we can probably feel that Manchuan liked Miao Yin before. Although Hua Lian is a part of Miao Yin, this explanation still feels strange. Miaoyin seemed a little too paranoid. But when you think about it, it's no wonder that straight men don't say or do anything. I can only say that it's their fate. Spring Innocence Manchuan Online has always had the potential to become paranoid and dark. I don't know how to deal with this, but it's okay. It has the child-losing effect. Understandable. On the contrary, Manchuan used to be a cold and well-behaved kid, and he was quite capable, hahaha. But when you think about the bad things he did, such as pretending to be a deceiver, meeting a succubus and other things, you can see that he is not a flat character and has a certain three-dimensional feeling. He is unexpectedly pure and kind, but he understands everything. He has moral integrity in his heart, but he is not pedantic. He is willing to try changes, and he is decisive and knows the choice when encountering problems. Needless to say, Brother Man is so cute, I love him. (Lian Lian came to Bushi with a hammer in hand)

I think it sucks. You can write better.