[Abandoned ending, not recommended if you have to pay]
After transmigrating, Yin Ling wanted nothing more than to lie around. So when she was eliminated after five hard years of cultivating immortality, she wasn't dejected at all. She was overjoyed and wept tears of happiness.
Yin Ling: Sob, sob! I can finally go home and lie around like a lazy salted fish!
But just as she was about to make it, a certain obsessive, deranged demon lord grabbed her by the collar and whisked her away:
Demon Lord: "Don't say a word."
Yin Ling: (Covers her mouth.)
Demon Lord: "They're here."
Yin Ling: "?!" Who's here?
Demon Lord: "I'll get you out of here. Don't worry, I'll take you home."
Yin Ling: ... No, wait a second. My home is totally not in that direction!
And so, completely bewildered, she was dragged away. From then on, she and the Demon Lord embarked on a sweet (not!) journey together, wherever they went, people died and disaster struck.
When Yan Mofeng was out of his mind, he kidnapped a young female cultivator. She owed him protection fees, tuition, compensation for emotional distress, and various other charges. But when he went berserk, she did everything she could to help him; when he was on the brink of death, she refused to abandon him; and when the people of the Canglan Realm condemned him in writing, she still firmly stood by his side.
He went through his ledger item by item, only to discover that he was the one who owed her.
He put away the ledger and rose to approach Yin Ling, still asleep in bed. His gaze was tender and affectionate.
"I have nothing to my name and no place to call home. So I'll have to repay you with the whole world, along with my heart."
Coming soon: The Demon Lord Is So Irresistible. Please add it to your favorites!
Ji Ling accidentally transmigrated to ancient times, where there was nothing she needed. A civilized vampire who refused to drink human blood, she was about to starve to death. She pulled out her crystal coffin, found a spot with good feng shui, and used the last of her strength to dig a grave for herself.
Sob, sob! I don't want to live anymore!
Just then, a handsome Taoist in blue robes descended from the sky, sword in hand. He slapped a talisman onto her forehead. "So you're the demon wreaking havoc in town lately?"
He smelled wonderful. Looking at him, Ji Ling could practically see a huge, juicy chicken drumstick. But in the next second, he smashed her crystal coffin without a word. Ji Ling snapped out of her chicken-drumstick fantasy and exploded.
"Are you crazy? Pay me back for my coffin!"
Later
"Taoist priest, wait! You can't do that with a coffin! You really can't!"
Few people know that Ling Yelou, the fearsome Demon Lord of the Haoyuan Realm, was a Taoist priest before he became the Demon Lord. His favorite thing to do is seal away his memories and pretend he's a young Taoist dedicated to vanquishing demons.
Then he travels across countless mountains and rivers, searching for the person hidden in the deepest part of his heart.
Theme: Stay positive and optimistic about life, and find the most sincere love.
Too hasty!! There are so many foreshadowings laid ahead. . Where is the Human Emperor Princess? The old man of the Wen family wants to seek revenge on the heroine and make her father feel the pain of losing a daughter? And the heroine's bloodline?? Didn't her father vaguely say that it would be difficult to raise her since she was a child due to her bloodline? Aren't there still rumors that her mother is a monster?? And Xiaobai, why don't you confess your love?? The plot is pretty good, but why is it so bad? Damn it. Change it. Don't ruin a work.
I feel that some supporting characters have too many scenes. Except for the villain who gave birth to Yan Zhongling and the heroine's friends, the other supporting characters feel useless. Their stories will not affect the later plot. Especially the one named Wen and the one named Zhuang. Their stories are so cliche that you can basically know the ending just by looking at the beginning. Later, the plot of the heroine's friends going to take revenge on them, except for the one named Wen, I feel that the plot of him killing his father is also weird, because his father's character is innocent and incompetent, so his father's situation can be made not spicy but innocent, so he will be killed, or he can be made more extreme, which is better. And he and the heroine should be friends, but the heroine and the others don't seem to care much about his situation, and they didn't even look for him when he disappeared. The ending was a bit rushed, and many holes were dug but not buried. After the third lady named Wen was killed by the heroine's friend, her father wanted to seek revenge on the heroine. The heroine's father got angry and wanted to kill him. What happened to the one who turned into a ghost at the beginning? There was no explanation at the end. That's about it. Overall, it was okay.
I have finished reading all the extras except Wen Mingxue. The male protagonist and female protagonists are pretty good, and the logic of the writing is generally OK, but the emotional drama is too subtle, and there are too many plots of the middle branch characters. Several chapters are about the Wen family's plot. Such inconsequential matters can be shortened into a few sentences, or put entirely in the extras. The main text can use more words to write about the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Mainly, the plots of these side characters that the author spends a lot of time writing are not very to the point. For example, the story about the Wen family details the scene of Jiang Jing's departure and the process of recovering his memory. When Mu Zhuangshan found Jiang Jing, when Jiang Jing and Wen Lan were together, he sketched it again. Isn't it necessary to write about the psychology of the characters when there is conflict between characters? Some of the rushing scenes, as well as unrelated plots such as meeting Brother Wen Lan, can be mentioned in one sentence. I always feel that whether it is the main plot surrounding the male and female protagonists or the side character plots inserted in the middle, what should be written in detail has not been detailed, and what should be omitted has not been omitted.
Zhuang Wen's grievances all started from Wen Lan's concealment and deception, and also from their common father's cowardice and incompetence and willingness to be deceived.
There's not a single kiss from beginning to end. I can't live!
How should I put it? I was very surprised when I first watched it. The setting of the big devil and the little white rabbit, but then it ended inexplicably. After a long time, I still couldn't forget this article. After reading the comments, I read it again. The story finally has an ending, and the author has filled in the holes. Thank you very much. But the ending is indeed quite hasty, and the previous story is quite ambitious. It feels like the story is missing a few chapters before it reaches the ending. The author has greatly improved the process, but I always feel that there are still shortcomings. I don't know how to describe it. The male protagonist finally turned into a good person. Oh my god, in the end, I gave the male protagonist a good guy card. Is there something wrong? The crazy and cool personality at the beginning is gone at all. I also hope for a happy ending and for the male protagonist to be healed, but the whole personality reset is a bit too much. . Personal opinion, please don't comment. Thank you.
This Wen Lan is so disgusting, and so is Zhuang.
This plot relies too much on misunderstandings and not telling people what to say.
I re-watched it after a long time and it's not finished yet. I read it as the ending, woo woo woo woo, am I going to be in a pit?
I quite like it, but the author still doesn't understand it for so long