Judgment Day [Infinite]

The writing and the plot are quite good, but it ends too early. It needs at least more than 1 million words.

When will I rewrite it? I still remember this book after several years.

After reading it, it really depends on the old saying, it's all here. The first few copies are all very well written, and there are some minor bugs that are not harmful. But from the moment we enter the main plot, the plot and emotions seem to be wild horses running wildly, competing to see who can run crazier. Any supporting character here can be expanded a lot, and the setting of the world view is also quite special. Whether it is two generations exploring the outer city or facing the final judgment, it should be a very grand narrative, but the ending is written in a very petty and petty style, and it does not match the previous setting at all. The step-by-step growth of the protagonist that was supposed to be there was not depicted at all, and the subsequent copies were all brushed off in one stroke. Nothing to say about the bad ending. But it's really a pity. This text could have been well written, and I don't know why the author chose such a hasty ending.

Wife, do you still remember this book? . . I promised to rebuild it a few years ago.

Ah ah ah ah I don't know if the teacher still remembers that someone posted a short essay about this novel on your Weibo a few years ago. At that time, the teacher said that it would be rewritten in the second half of the year, but it still hasn't been changed. I really like this novel, both in terms of the setting and the plot. I look forward to the revised plot.

The ending is so sloppy. How well written the first copy is.

The emotional line suddenly became full, and it ended before the feelings had grown up. I felt very dull after watching it.

It's been a long time since I read this article, so I'm going to talk about it today. First of all, the opening story is really great, and the horror atmosphere is smooth enough. I personally think it is a bit thin, but every story can make up for this shortcoming. It is really comfortable to watch from the beginning. But, at the end of this article, I felt that the author wanted to create a big background but couldn't figure it out. For example, the identity of the attacker, and the female supporting character in the guild that I attacked earlier (it's been so long that I can't remember her name clearly). They were all writeable and operable. However, the paper was thin, and the character setting seemed to be just to highlight that the attack was awesome but had no actual effect at all. It was very uncomfortable. I remember when I was reading it, there was a section in the middle that said trials were all over the world or something. Anyway, I was exploring outside the city and found that there was another city. I felt that this setting was useless. Even if I deleted it, it would not affect the progress of the article at all. It was interesting but I couldn't write it. I felt panicked when I read it. It seemed like I wanted to write about a high-level world view, but ended up feeling lonely and empty. There's not much to say about the ending. I felt suffocated while watching the whole ending. It was really uncomfortable after watching it. It's a pity. I seem to see someone editing an article? I don't know if it will change, but at least it looks comfortable from the front. It's not what I expected.

I feel like this setting... If two or three hundred chapters were enough to write, it would end up being abbreviated a lot. But after all, it was my first time trying to write a dungeon and it was very gripping! ! Looking forward to the next work related to unlimited streaming

How to say it? It's a pity, but since the author has chosen to end it and has no choice, maybe it would be a good thing to let Brother Xie and Brother Lu leave that painful world as soon as possible? They return to their reality and start over. We just wish them well here on the screen. From now on, the years will be quiet and they will be safe and sound.