What Should I Do If the Male Lead Calls Me Auntie?

Damn, maybe there is a reason for the cold. I only read a little bit of it a few days ago, and I'm going back to it today. The first chapter is really good and well designed. But the second chapter fell apart immediately, and it felt like it didn't connect with the previous chapter. The plot in one chapter is scattered, unable to grasp the key points, and there are too many descriptions that have nothing to do with the main plot, which seems wet.

Are the male and female protagonists around thirty years old? So…

It's very well written, thank you to the author.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh justice metioned the words in big letters. I really like Song Qingchen, I really like him! The writing style of DaDa is also very good. It is simply a pleasure to read DaDa's writing! I will always like Dada and follow Dada forever!

The writing style is better. Let me talk about my feelings after reading it in the past two days. The writing is indeed good, but you need to be very patient when reading it for the first time. You may feel that you want to write it more delicately, but the plot in one chapter is very unclear. No matter how many characters there are, or the world view is wider, you cannot read several chapters without knowing who the protagonist is and what he is going to do. I probably don't feel like I'm doing hydrology, but I've written a lot more subplots. But what readers want to read is the protagonist. There is not much written about the protagonist, and there is no progress in several thousand words. It is really difficult for people to want to read further. This kind of writing method is suitable for after the mass base is established, for example, after writing dozens of chapters, you can do it like this.

Damn, why are you so cold-hearted after you signed the contract?

Leave a footprint for the joker?

What the hell is the green boy?

No one pays attention to such a well-written article???? The first chapter kept me entertained, and I read the rest slowly. The design of the first chapter is very clever, and the writing style is also good. Although it is not the infinite style that is popular nowadays, it has the feeling of Jinjiang, a high-quality book in the past.

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