1. Inspired by reading a Mary Sue story.
2. First person! First person!
3. Top! Top!
4. An alternate world! An alternate world! Set in a Mary Sue story's world!
5. I'm making it all up! I'm making it all up! Terrible writing, no logic, everything serves the plot!
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I think it's strange that this kind of native family can be normal.
It's so difficult. After re-downloading JJ, the updates don't show up... If I hadn't clicked in, I would have thought my wife had tricked me orz I finally finished watching it!!! This is the first time I've seen this type of attack, hahaha, it's pretty fun! Confession to my wife
I feel like I have to wait a long time for every update.
Come on, I feel that the setting of the article is quite attractive, but the writing style is a bit weak. I want the writing style to be lively but it looks a bit childish, and there is a sense of violation that cannot be said to be wrong. How should I put it, the inner drama and the language feel tend to be ancient. That kind of (romance novels that cost nine yuan a book when I was a kid) is very inconsistent. The setting of the protagonist is not attractive enough so far, and I can't find his charm. He is a person who comes from a good background and leaves home for love. His childhood education has not been reflected in him at all. I have read an article before, "All Examiners Are Enemies", which is that although the protagonist has lost his memory, his temperament will not change, and here I feel that the protagonist is just an ordinary loser, and his temperament cannot be seen. Since the protagonist is set to come from such a family, even if he is A dandy, his eyesight, and his temperament should all be present, and should also be reflected in the text through some side descriptions such as other people's opinions. There is none here, and the setting is very weak. The image of the male protagonist is particularly thin, and it feels very inconsistent if it is not full. There is also the setting of the main character's family, which is too Su Liao. It makes people feel uncomfortable when reading it (maybe I am too picky about Liao). There are also cool articles and golden finger articles, but they should not be told in such an abrupt way and it will be very obvious. Such a setting is forced on the readers, but the abilities of the characters are not reflected, which makes Su feel boring. The author can learn from other articles with mature writing styles and practice more, and he will make progress in the writing process. I believe it will be possible, so don't be discouraged. (Actually, I think this kind of lively style of writing is the hardest to master. If you don't pay attention, it will feel very vulgar. How about trying the style that is as calm as flowing water? Emmmm, it seems to be quite difficult. Anyway, come on, read more and practice more, and you will make progress!)
Hahahahahahahaha Tao Fen, why do I remember that there seems to be a person in the history book with this name, I was shocked at the time
Brother, just tell me when you will wake up.
I fucked ヾ(? A`)ノ?
This article is really ridiculous, hahahahahahahahahaha
And it's not just indifference anymore. Everything the protagonist says and does is wrong. This is so different from normal indifference, isn't it?
I feel like my brother was once very important