After reading several fanfics of The Great Maid, I just couldn't understand why the transmigrated heroines were so desperate to cling to Fang Shaoling, a brainless male lead. So I wrote this to vent my frustration.
The heroine is a normal person from modern society. After a car accident, she transmigrates into the TV drama The Great Maid and becomes Shen Liuyun, a cannon-fodder supporting character. From then on, for the sake of her safety and well-being, she firmly follows the principle of "staying away from idiots."
As I kept writing, I suddenly wanted to change the ending. In the end, I decided on a happy ending, even if the journey there seems a little angsty.
Warning! For the sake of the plot, there may be some inaccuracies compared with historical facts. Readers who care about historical accuracy, please proceed with caution!
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Theme:
The first reaction of a person who dies suddenly and is reborn again should be happiness or pain.
It's rare to see a story about Shen Liuyun who traveled through time or when Shen Liuyun was reborn and still clung to Fang Shaoling. Even in the original drama, Fang Shaoling was not a good person in his emotional entanglement with the cabbage caterpillar. Well, since the main character was reborn or was penetrated, couldn't he change to a man? He had to fight that cabbage caterpillar to grab a scumbag. I really don't understand. Come on, author And, judging from this chapter, the protagonist finally knows how to wake up. From the moment the protagonist meets Zhang Bohan to the two developing a relationship, it always feels like the heroine has trapped herself in a dead end, and she feels like she can't live without a man and can't live without a man. It doesn't mean that she is not independent in life, but that she has to find a man to rely on. But at least my brain is not completely confused yet, so wake up quickly.
I thought I would tell you about time travel.
Why not tell these people Sang Caiqing's true identity? I don't like looking at it that way. How can a scumbag who pretends to commit suicide take it seriously?
Boring, can't stand it at all
Xingfang's family was just a rich man, but he turned into a warlord and a soldier. Nonsense.
I think the description of Zhang Bohan's appearance in this paragraph is quite good. Finally, he is no longer a stereotype of a handsome guy. It's not convincing at all to say that he is beautiful with a high nose, big eyes, or phoenix eyes with long eyelashes! Temperament description is also very important
Since they have changed their identities and not changed their names, they look alike and are called by the same name, so they must be identified as the same person. I don't know what the heroine is thinking.
The article is very novel and bold, and the psychological description is very relevant.
Another thing is that from the third person perspective, when writing about inner activities, you should use he or she, or let the reader directly feel that the perspective has shifted to a certain person through description, and then write. Generally, there should be no "I", ≥≤