After Becoming a Cannon-Fodder, Both the Male Lead and His Love Interest Fell for Me

The setting is really interesting, but it's a pity that the writing didn't keep up. The cuteness of the time-division in the early stage, the cuteness of Xuanlin combining into one, and the cuteness of turning into a little phoenix... Were not written out. The plot feels compressed and not much expanded upon. But as far as the setting is concerned, it could have been a unit drama, a supernatural one, after all, Yin Yang Eyes. And in the later period, it basically felt that it was completely out of line. The affairs of Lin Yunlin's family were not explained clearly, and the affairs of Huo's family were not followed up. The part about "traveling through the book" was not clearly explained, such as what kind of novel it was about and what the plot was, so I was completely confused in the early stages of reading it. The full text is roughly divided into three stages: Before Chapter 19, to be honest, I was ready to abandon the article, but I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, and I was ready to give up after reading 20 chapters. Chapter 20 and 21 revealed their identities and kept me here; the second part is from then until the two parts are combined into one part. This part of the interaction is very interesting, but the main line is ambiguous; the third part is from then to the ending, this part is... Very confusing, maybe It feels like a long story in a hurry to finish, the interactions are a bit awkward, forcibly holding hands and so on, and the advancement of the main plot is also a bit awkward. Many characters have become tool people, used to forcefully advance the plot, such as the abbot of Tuotan Temple, □□, and the deputy CP elder brother and Xiaoxiao. When the main CP has not made it clear, the deputy CP forced the appearance of the scene. I don't understand the meaning of the female supporting role. Is it used to trip up the elder brother? I came here to read it on the recommendation of the author next door. I must say I was quite disappointed. Because the introduction setting was very interesting, I had high expectations. After reading it, I found that I also collected another book about Phoenix and Bamboo, and I am going to wait and see again. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will reach a higher level soon.

? It ends like this... Boring

Or. . . Are you going to try becoming a monk again?

Come and take a look at my full customization

Is the essence of this chapter about Yangyang bursting with clothes and giving welfare to Xuanwu?

I just want to ask if Xu Xu had finished eating that delicious spiritual meal before he was taken away. He showed me how hungry he was in the middle of the night. What a waste.

The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes. It doesn't look good. I bought it for nothing.

Like 4p, and I prefer the little viper and the little turtle

I feel like I'm falling apart from the rest of the writing. It's so boring.

It feels like two attacks were changed midway