Utopia

The author really likes to use long sentences. Especially when writing about someone he is looking at, he must add a lot of modifiers before the person's name, such as the movements and expressions at that time, etc. These chapters are all like this. It is really too difficult to pronounce. Some of them can be divided into two sentences to read more smoothly. For example, the original text: "Facing Xiao Hongbo, who rolled like a carp while Xiao Shuo was trying to pull him off the ground, hugged Xiao Shuo and immediately ran back to his desk." I couldn't complain... It looked laborious... I hope the author can pay attention to this aspect in future articles, and there is no need to add extra reading comprehension questions to readers.

There are too many plot mysteries and character dialogues that are difficult to understand or guess. It is best to decrypt them quickly hahh or make the decryption process more exciting.

Um... Isn't anyone catching bugs? Original text: The whole person was shrouded in obvious sadness. "As for the captain, we only have the instructor, but sister, the last instructor No more. '' Suddenly thought of something, he quickly closed his mouth and looked at Xiao Shuo worriedly. Didn't understand. What does this say?

Repeated from Chapter 19(?)

Very good, I like the details very much, come on^0^~

Brother You needs to work harder. There are too many mountains and defenses in Gongbao's heart. Shou's weakness is attacking treasures, so Shuo Shuo is afraid that he will die.

The author should also take care of himself! Will there be a romance episode at the end?

The author is already conceiving the ending, and Zhou You hasn't caught up with Xiao Shuo yet.

How could it be finished so quickly!? Write slowly!

Wow, so cute, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, hehehe