Lily's Brother

This article is generally good. The flaws are also quite obvious. The emotional line in the early stage is really strange. SS has no sense of existence at all, and then suddenly confesses. The pure sense of presence in SS in the early stage is too low, so the emotional line cannot be seen. I personally feel that the protagonist's deep love for Lily is a bit too deep, because he has memories and has matured his views, and I feel that it is still difficult for siblings to become each other's most important person. Nothing special happened. Then the protagonist started to have a big golden finger, but he always seemed very passive and felt uncoordinated. Of course there are more well-written ones. The emotional line between the protagonist and the ss in the middle and later stages is well written, and the characters are not forced to become intelligent. I feel like the characters are not very OOC and the setting is quite novel. The character description of the protagonist is also quite three-dimensional. Overall, it's pretty good. I like this article very much.

He once again served as a witness for his students, but as for himself, no more letters would come from Nurmengard.

It's not good-looking, high and low, especially in response to the prophecy. The male protagonist used the most inexplicable method to save his sister. Of all the methods, he chose the hardest one, preventing Zhan Li from falling in love or changing the time of their marriage and pregnancy. Or he directly hid Zhan Li as a secret keeper and killed Peter, or forgot all about Zhan Li and hid them abroad. Or, with such strength, he directly destroyed all the Horcruxes and cooperated with ggad. Three people killed a Voldemort and still couldn't capture it? I'm completely speechless. I don't think he's smart or anything, but I still find it inexplicable. I can't stand it... I've abandoned the article, but I didn't pay to read it. If you don't like it, just pretend I didn't say it.

From the parent generation to the child generation, everything, all the details, are perfect. The plot has been changed but it will not jump out of the drama. The career line and the emotional line are not so strong. It is not a simple love drama in a romance novel, but a step-by-step career line. The prophet's perspective allowed him to know a lot of things. He couldn't change much, but he tried his best to protect everything he wanted to protect. At the end of each step they become one. It's so good that I cryXXwuwuwu

I read it in one sitting. The prophecy is really scary. It was so hard for my uncle. Fortunately, the ending is he.

This ending surprised me, but this ending is very good. The author has such a great imagination and the writing is very good. This article is a treasure.

Ouch, I originally thought it was a Mary Sue article, but I never expected it to be so powerful! Big blow! I feel like the story is very natural and logical, and I really like the big description~

I didn't dare to watch the war part, so I watched the ending directly, but it was really good to watch!

I thought it was the wedding between Old Bee and the Dark Fairy [Spreading Flowers]

Finished reading. It feels so heavy, war, woo woo woo