Novice Disciple C

I don't think the emotional scenes are blunt at all, especially the extras are very sweet. I like it very much very cute The two of them "battling wits and courage" with each other are also very cute

I stayed up all night to watch the end and basically skipped it. The plot was okay, but the emotional scenes were really not good. The so-called love between the attacker and the receiver at the end was too forced.

Can there be a sweet story about Maple Leaf and Hao Shen falling in love? I really want to read it. I like them both very much.

I'm also very curious about Wu Jin's story. If you write a story about Wu Jin as the protagonist, please give me a kick.

The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage. When I saw Maple Leaf being betrayed by everyone in the Endless World Fantasy and no one stood up, I thought: This is definitely not the case. There will be brave people who will stand up. Human beings are definitely not like this. Seeing the ending of Xiqiang gave me a feeling of relief and that it was indeed the case.

I feel leisurely for so long, I almost forgot how much trouble Ling Yun caused hahahaha

I hope I can still see Maple Leaf and Fat Fish's post-marriage adventures in my lifetime www

I want to give a long review of my favorite novel. I first read it a few years ago. The novel I liked at that time seems a bit childish now, but this one is the only one that I still like no matter how many times I read it. This is a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the disadvantages first: Xue Ren: This time I revisited it and found that it was hit three times like a magnet, once by Fang Yang and twice by Lu. It feels a bit forced to me. The purpose of Fang Yang's collision is to lead the two of them to discover Xue Ren's hypocrisy. It can be written here that Xue Ren did not show any impatient expression. It's just that Arowana and Yu saw his hypocrisy through his eyes. After all, Arowana and Yu both have been foxes for thousands of years. (Fish are ten thousand years old, hehe) Xue Ren's original disguise is not much better. How high can the disguise be if you can no longer hold back after being hit? It's just that no one wants to argue with him. The first collision with Lu is more necessary, otherwise the following plot cannot be elicited. But it can also be changed to Lu about to hit him, Xue Ren dodged past, and then Lu fell and exposed the Sun Flower, because Xue Ren is also a master in the golden elixir stage, and he can't dodge in the Qi training stage? The second collision with Lu was the most unnecessary. It can be directly changed to Xue Ren thinking of ways to deal with Cao Zirui while walking. He happened to see some yellow flowers, and thought of Sun Flower and then Lu, so it would not be such a coincidence. Fang Yang: 70-80% of people who read this book don't like Fang Yang very much or even hate Fang Yang. Many people even abandoned the book because of Fang Yang. The remaining 20-30% are also indifferent to Fang Yang, and only 10% like Fang Yang. (This probability is a rough calculation based on my reading of each sister's comments. Please forgive me for any inaccuracies) The reason is that he is too lagging behind and is out of tune with the entire article. Before writing a long review, I want to write that he has not grown at all. But I read another sister's long review and found a little growth. But there is only one thing, and that little bit of growth cannot get rid of the direct feeling that he is out of tune with the entire article. Fang Yang's most critical things in the book: fighting the white-nosed demon bear and doubting that the sword will break, not participating in the competition after being poisoned, and being confused by the illusion after entering the Eight Ghost Rasheng Formation. They all follow a set of "I don't have perseverance - Long encourages/rescues/guidance-ultimate success" and never relies on myself. Even after he came out of Wujin, he still didn't make any progress. Original text [Faced with Hao Chen's praise, Cao Zirui was okay, but Fang Yang felt a little guilty. After all, if Cao Zirui hadn't stopped him, he might have poured everything out like Feng Yi. He relied on intuition to recognize people. It can be said that although his growth is not 0, it is at most 5 (out of 100). Especially since he takes up so much space, it's so uncomfortable. It can be said that all those who hate Fang Yang do not hate Fang Yang as a person, but hate that Fang Yang takes up so many articles. Width. Me too, I don't have any bad feelings towards Fang Yang himself, but I really don't like him taking up so much space. After talking about the disadvantages, let's talk about the advantages: Cao Zirui: I don't like it because I have a good family background and good looks since I was a child. I also have a single spiritual root in cultivating immortals, which is the representative of genius. If you are often jealous of others, then you might as well not have any friends. But I long for friends in my heart and treat people with kindness: I didn't doubt that there was something wrong with Xue Ren's bell; After being betrayed by Lu, he did not trust his fellow disciples. After meeting Fang Yang, even though he was afraid of being betrayed, he did not want to commit suicide innocently. He was grateful to Fang Yang for being saved by Fang Yang; (there is a bottom line) I don't know how to get along with friends, I can only buy and buy; (Growing up, learning how to make friends) The illusion encountered after entering the world of Wujin is the harmony between teachers and sects; (the desire for family and friendship) Even after being rescued by Phoenix, he still doesn't trust Phoenix. (Growth) In fact, if you look closely, Cao Zirui's growth is not obvious at first (from 0 to 20, full score is 100), but why are there not many people who hate Cao Zirui? The reason is because Cao Zirui doesn't steal the show, and there is no repetitive plot. Xue Ren: Except for the "magnet plot" I complained about above, Xue Ren's other portrayals are still OK. Ji Chengyue: His portrayal is very consistent with the character. Many people say that he is responsible for Xue Ren's darkening. I can only say that he may have some problems, but at least 80% of them are Xue Ren's own problems. Who stipulates that the eldest disciple of the sect leader must be the sect leader? I believe Ji Chengyue has never made such a promise, it is Xue Ren who thinks so. Xue Ren was able to form elixirs in twenty years, which is considered a "genius" in the worldview of this book. Ji Chengyue's guidance (and his own talent) must have been indispensable. When Cao Zirui started, Xue Ren was already over 30 years old. It can only be said that his character is only there. He cares too much about his reputation, and he will not be able to go far on the path of cultivating immortality. I quite like the line between him and his fellow apprentices in Ling Yun. He himself and Xue Ren are also a control group. There is also a genius senior brother/brother, and the senior/brother/brother is not very lovable (it is said in the article that compared to Cao Zirui's Bingshan, Ling Yun is an equal and looks down on everyone) Same experience, different choices. He asked the dragon where his highlight was. He accepted it and remained silent, but he could not forget. He put his life aside just to ask God, why? ! Why? ! Lingyun: Ling Yun is Long's control group. It's still the same experience with different choices. Such a confident, willing to share, and such a proud person. It's sad that it ended up like that. After reading this article, I kept thinking that in immortality novels, one usually becomes a god through thunder tribulation [Thunder tribulation can test the mind] I have never thought about this method before, is this really possible? But after reading this article, my answer is no. I believe Ling Yun can withstand the thunder tribulation. Because he was so dazzling a hundred years ago. In the stage of cultivating Hedao with low spiritual energy concentration, it cannot be summed up by one sentence of talent: it is countless sweat, life and fighting, and for the sake of ideals, you can go to s (cut // heart). I believe that after Wujin told him this method, he was still not sure whether he was alive or s after cutting // heart (it was a dream after all), but he still did it. Before Long, the longest he could last in the Wujin world was 60 years, while Ling Yun lasted for a hundred years. I would like to think that in the end, the reason why Ling Yun's soul has not been completely extinguished is because he also saw the dragon's path to becoming a god, and he understood the difference between himself and the dragon. Finally our Arowana husband arrived. Hao Chen: In fact, he does not appear as much as Fang Yang in the entire article (except for extra chapters). But his character has not collapsed, and I like him very much. It is a god that has existed since the beginning of Chaos. I believe that he has only fought a handful of times, and I even suspect that he has never fought with a god, because no god would mess with such a great god. (There are also three, six or nine levels of gods) The reason for his fight, according to my guess, is most likely that he went down to earth to play with a beautiful woman and then stood on the stage to fight a mortal. (Yeah, it fits the character) Even if you really fight a god, it will still be in the early stage of chaos, and it will most likely be suppressed by spiritual power. If the fish has no spiritual power and does not use the prototype... Fang Yang, Cao Zirui and others (after all, they are only in the foundation building stage) will still be fine. I am a little doubtful whether they can beat Xue Ren... (Xue Ren is also a swordsman who has reached the golden elixir on his own) (After the fish and the dragon are together, let the dragon teach you swordsmanship. Eat tofu and increase your force value at the same time. Fish is the master who eats tofu even if it is beaten.) Of course, when I say that his force value is low, it does not mean that he is not worthy of being a god. His mission is to protect Beiming, not to fight. I remember that Long wanted to fish at first, but he chose to give up because he heard that "the Lord of Beiming is very protective of his shortcomings". It can also be seen that although Yu often sleeps, he will definitely be the first to stand up if something happens to his people. This is why the people of Beiming are willing to live and die with Beiming when Dragon Fish invades Beiming. (Although the fish lost face, it does show that the people of Beiming like this Lord) Therefore, it is very reasonable that he has not beaten Ling Yun who has the power of Wujin World. Feng Ye: He is the reason why I have to finish this book even if I endure Fang Yang's length. Gentle, strong, and adhering to the Taoist heart. Don't change your goals based on other people's opinions. Compared with the fish who sees through people's hearts and chooses to ignore them, the dragon is willing to be the fool being played. I would like to believe that this is one of the reasons the fish are attracted. Cutting down Jianmu and rescuing Fang Yang on the floating island are two contrasts that prove the Dragon Principle. Cutting down Jianmu was a last resort. He really couldn't save those innocent people 100%. For the sake of the world, he could only do that. He was sad that he couldn't save these people, but he didn't feel guilty because he did the right thing and he had no choice. Correspondingly, the floating island rescues Fang Yang. Saving Fang Yang will bring him trouble because his identity will be exposed. This trouble may be 0% or 99.9%, But he will still save Fang Yang. Because there is no choice at this time. As long as there is a hint of choice, he will save him even if it brings him endless trouble, but if he has no choice, he will not hesitate to take people//hostages (later in the article, Ling Yun suggested using people//hostages to threaten Long, but Wu Jin said that was useless). Taihe fills the universe, and brilliance fills the universe. Nine steps on the cliff, ten steps to become a god. He lived up to his name and his ideals. Use the soul as fuel to ignite the soul fire, illuminate the world without embers, give heaven a chance to correct its mistakes, and give yin and yang a chance to reverse the evil after thousands of years. Apart from the main character, I really liked the concept of this book. "Everyone has the opportunity to become a god and the responsibilities of a god" Original text [The way of heaven does not favor anyone. He does not care about race or nationality. He will give reminders to every soul who comes here. I like this kind of "fairness". As the way of heaven, He does not treat the dragon preferentially because he is the protagonist, but treats all life fairly. Original text [The gods, big and small, are all watching the south. Their reaction is the same as Hao Chen. While realizing the horror of the coming person, they do their best to protect the land they protect. This is the responsibility of gods. They can be warlike, lustful, and sleep well, but they must go to war when something happens. They must protect their territory while they are alive. The last arowana 99 It's been 6 years. I hope the author will give me a big wedding. [Orange Candy] Got it

Wuwuwu Feng Ye, you are a very strong and good baby.

When will the teacher come back to see our Yeye? I miss you so much.