Expired Love

The whole book is filled with back-and-forth jokes... In fact, I regretted that I impulsively ordered the entire book at the beginning. When I read half of the book and wanted to give up, it was already too late.

To be honest, I was really shocked by Yan Na's lack of be.

I found that all the men in this book are bitches, hahahahahahaha (?ω?)Hiahiahia

Good guys, I underestimated the author again. I knew this pair would be frustrated, but I didn't expect that there wasn't even a hzc? Should this person be promoted directly or can he be trained? There is no reason why doi is called Ruanruan. The question is, I like you now. Ruanruan is the past tense. God knows what kind of weird logic is there in letting go of Ruanruan Doi once in fantasy? No matter how far-fetched and clever the reason is, you can't explain it clearly to win back your girlfriend? Even if it is not stated clearly, shouldn't it be written in the narration so that readers can understand it? This is the first night, shouldn't it leave a psychological shadow? If it were me, I would just suffer from PTSD. In fact, it's okay for this couple to just be, but the result is py? Why did it become a py? Xu didn't write down his thoughts. With this ancient sadomasochistic style, I felt like I was back in the early 2000s. No one forces you to write a side story for the ending of the deputy CP, but you have to be more dedicated in writing it. Why did they just do it so hastily? What is the difference between this and putting the outline directly? No, this can't be called an outline, this is called a rough outline. Although it's ky, I still have to say that xq's red outline is better than the main text of this article. In some articles, lz can even tell that he is definitely a big boss who started in Samsung. His outline is written in a rhythmic tone. The ups and downs are particularly attractive to readers. I sincerely recommend that those who can accept it can learn and observe other people's logical chains and emotional lines. Even if it is just an outline, it can be perfectly self-consistent. I'm sorry to criticize you. I will continue to complain. I don't want to write it. As a guide, I'm not that good at it. I just felt frustrated and complained. Because of ljj's review system, except for swearing, I can only call you a good guy. The core jokes in this article are really attractive. I don't know why it went off the rails later. I really don't know. Have you ever seen a hzc story where the side story can sort things out, because this type of story basically ends after reconciliation, relying on the side story to be sweet and sweet. It turns out that for this couple, the side story is still in the running-in period, and they are still trying to eliminate the barriers and increase trust. This is not a matter of the main story! How can we reconcile without complete trust? You said that you completely trust her, but in order to receive endorsements, the heroine not only asks for an underground relationship but also engages in censorship with others? Just to make money? It seems that she has no money and is not stable or something. Anyway, she just wants to make more money. She doesn't tell the male protagonist her thoughts in advance, but just asks the male protagonist to cooperate directly. This episode is really awesome. When the male protagonist was starting a business, he called and said that he had something to do and said that he would not go back or come back later. Then a girl spoke to him without asking. The heroine was just like catching a rapist in bed. She immediately started a silent cold war and seamlessly met the male star who was speculating for CP in private (as if she brought a friend). Yes, this male star is still very popular. The male protagonist doesn't know. How can such a good female protagonist become a double green tea in the extra story? I am really afraid of this author. Green mountains will remain green and green waters will flow forever. We will meet again indefinitely. I wish the author can skyrocket to 90,000 miles in the future. Farewell.

Good guy, I didn't expect this to end like this. Good guys, good guys, good guys.

To be honest... This pair disgusts me...

Ah. . . This ending is a bit awkward.

Moreover, the heroine's routine of abusing the male protagonist is exactly the same. How uninspired is it to write like this...

Good guy, I didn't expect Yan Shenchuan to be this kind of character.

Uh... Cracked... It feels a bit sloppy compared to the sweet medicine in the previous book...