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[Content warning: The seme is gloomy, overbearing, and sharp-tongued at first, but later eats his words. The story has healthy values, but it's not a traditional sweet romance.]
[*Dating before falling in love + powerful seme and vulnerable uke + shameless turnarounds / crematorium arc*]
Luo Mang (meng, second tone), Fei Yu (yu, fourth tone)
Luo Mang is a crybaby writer with tear ducts so sensitive that he finds it difficult to communicate normally. The slightest slight makes his tears flow uncontrollably.
So, after nineteen years of being single, he'd never had a boyfriend.
He decided to write his own stories, pouring all his favorite character traits into his novel's male side character, Fei Yu.
He loved this character too much to let him get together with anyone, so he made him the story's biggest villain and gave him a cruel, vicious personality. He would remain alone until the end, never finding a partner.
Then, one day, he transmigrated into a book and became Luo Meng, the novel's protagonist uke, who was constantly targeted by the male side character Fei Yu!
In Fei Yu's eyes, the protagonist uke was the biggest obstacle to getting together with the protagonist seme, Lin Feng. He tripped the uke up every day, all to make him die sooner rather than later.
Luo Mang: "..." I want to cry. QuQ.
On his very first day after transmigrating, Luo Mang ran straight into Fei Yu.
Fei Yu, the great villain, narrowed his eyes as a cold aura swirled around him. He stared at Luo Mang as if considering where to cut first. He was terrifying.
The crybaby Luo trembled all over and couldn't help crying.
Fei Yu's cold, sharp-toothed smile froze before it could fully form. "..."
What are you doing, trying to frame me?
The little crybaby sobbed until he hiccupped. "B-Big Brother, two semes can't have a happy ending. W-why don't we get together instead? I'll be very good."
Fei Yu had always thought Lin Feng must be blind to be attracted to a girly guy like Luo Meng, until one day he realized that the boy, who seemed like such a sissy on the outside, wasn't as simple as he appeared.
The two of them sat across from each other in a cafe. Fei Yu glanced out the window.
The little crybaby immediately said in alarm, "Hey, are you thinking of poisoning someone again? That's not good..."
Fei Yu shot him a gloomy look and said nothing.
Terrified, the little crybaby still managed to comfort him in a trembling voice. "I knew you'd forgotten to destroy the evidence again. D-don't be scared. I know where you put it."
Fei Yu, who had been planning something bad: "..."
How does this guy know everything?
Can he read minds?
But being softly clung to like this...
It doesn't feel so bad.
At the premiere of the movie "Starlight," reporters swarmed the stage to interview director Fei Yu. "Director Fei, we've heard that you and screenwriter Luo are a fake couple putting on a show for publicity. Could you tell us more?"
The great devil Fei Yu tilted his head and glanced at the reporter. His gloomy, arrogant air was so intimidating that no one dared look up.
"Get lost. I'm in love."
[Character Setup]
1. A beautiful writer who created the character [screenwriter] uke x a powerful, domineering, fictional character [director] seme. Men can marry in this world.
2. A beautiful crybaby uke x an incredibly beautiful, irresistibly charming seme. [Imagine any fictional character you love.]
3. The uke is a protagonist uke, so he'll be beautiful. The seme is a fictional character, so he might be ridiculously, ridiculously charming. XD The seme is vicious and domineering at first and a little twisted, but he's not bad inside and improves later. The seme has no first love and loves no one else. He's harsh with his words, but never mistreats the uke.
4. Characters who are wildly out of character. The seme thinks he doesn't love the uke at first, then later eats his words.
5. This is a story I wrote for myself, so I'm not accepting writing advice. If you don't like it, please drop it without telling me. ~
6. Weibo: Jinjiang Xixi Fer
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[Blurb saved on 2021/09/02]
Pei Xian is a commentary streamer. His greatest joy is livestreaming as he roasts the ridiculous plot holes in various novels and TV dramas. Then one day, while streaming, an electrical explosion rocked his home. When Pei Xian came to, he found himself bound to the Character-Breaking System XX1.
System XX1: "The world you're in is a composite world, where a magnetic field has accidentally caused a school love-triangle story, a tragic romance with a crematorium arc, a cultivation and superpower world, a suspense-horror world, and a supernatural thriller to overlap. You are the male side character shared by all these merged worlds."
Pei Xian: "."
System XX1: "Before long, you will...
In the school story, play the gentle, devoted, wealthy second male lead, accept the heroine's confession, and then be cruelly abandoned later on;
In the entertainment industry story, play a lovesick, devoted second-tier star who gives his heart to his crush, only to be treated as a stand-in;
In the cultivation and superpower story, become a stumbling block for the protagonist and get humiliated and beaten;
In the supernatural thriller, wander into a haunted house and get dismembered by a demon as a cannon-fodder second male lead.
Only by breaking character can you save your own life."
Pei Xian, who knew his own life story in advance: "...I think I can still be saved!" And so he began to break character wildly across every storyline.
School story main plot:
The sweet, innocent heroine, plain-looking but naturally likable, blushes and confesses to him.
Pei Xian: "Sorry, I don't like women."
Heroine: "!?"
Entertainment story main plot:
The sugar daddy gazes at the man with his chaste, sexy face and tosses him a check. "Eighty million. Spend a year with me."
Pei Xian: "Sorry, I don't like men."
Sugar daddy: "...?"
Pei Xian looks at his crotch, expressionless. "And yours is smaller than mine."
The sugar daddy is furious: "???"
Horror story main plot:
While Pei Xian is livestreaming a hike, a sudden downpour begins. He looks up and spots a dilapidated, sinister little cabin in the woods. Its door is so broken that only the frame remains, creaking in the wind. The pitch-black interior looks like a bottomless abyss, tempting him to enter.
Viewers: "That's terrifying! Should we go in and look?"
Pei Xian stands still and unzips his pants. "They say virgin boy urine wards off evil spirits."
Abyssal demon: "." Slowly retracts its hand.
Suspense-horror story main plot:
A reality show invites Pei Xian, already a top-tier star among domestic streamers, to join a live-action murder-mystery game on a cruise ship.
Pei Xian declines. "No, thanks. In an enclosed space, a locked-room murder could happen."
Director: "..."
A live-action combat game show invites Pei Xian to participate.
Pei Xian: "Thanks for the invitation, but I'll pass. There are too many people around the production crew. Someone could switch the blanks for live ammunition."
Production crew: "."
[High-Energy Warning]
1. An unremarkable-looking seme with a hidden identity x a seemingly chaste on the outside, goofy and mischievous on the inside uke
2. I want to write a cheerful, healing bedtime read. The plot won't be too elaborate.
3. Thank you for giving it a try. It's not very good, but please don't leave a bad review or I'll cry for you, sob sob sob!
Theme: Even a big bad wolf and a little puppy can fall in love.
Digging holes but not filling them, I always feel that the initial plot should not be like this. After Fei Yu realized that he liked Luo Yao, he kept chasing her. I can understand chasing his wife at the crematorium, but Fei Yu chased her for so long and did so many things. Luo Yao's surprise gradually turned into indifference. Luo Yao's reaction was too bland when Fei Yu chased him. Even if you say that Luo Yao later liked Fei Yu like this, it would be strange. Damn, even if Luo Yao in the novel is finished, the protagonist may become another person after the story is over. If there is a novel world that automatically completes the plot, what do you think your Luo Yao and Fei Yu will experience because of the ending you gave them?
In fact, I admire Luo Yao's view of love, because I am such a person. I would rather be alone in this life than love someone with a shy face. No matter how much that person once made my heart move, how much I liked and loved him, or how much I lacked love, he could not trample on my sincerity or insult my self-esteem. I like him because he is good. I know everyone has shortcomings, but self-esteem is my bottom line. If he doesn't respect me, he doesn't deserve my love. So I especially admire what Luo Suo does. If I like him, I will pursue him with all my strength. When I meet my love rival, I will be jealous openly without being overly entangled. But if what Dada said was that Luo Yao was an orphan and had a sensitive mind, then he should have relented when he found out that Fei Yu was changing when Fei Yu was taking good care of him whether he had a fever or was drunk. He had no one to take care of him since he was a child, and he was even teased for looking too weak, so he didn't like to go out. But Fei Yu had been taking care of him. He sent him home drunk, carried him into his room, and sent him to the hospital when he found out he was sick. He made a fuss about occupying a bed. How could a child who had been alone for so long and wanted to be loved be unmoved? Because he was an orphan since childhood, he knew better that others had no obligation to take care of him and had to rely on himself for everything. He had been carrying it for so long, and suddenly he had someone to rely on, and he was still his ideal type. He knew that the person he liked was changing, so why would he continue to be indifferent.
I don't give it a negative rating because I really like the first half of this article.
After all, I really didn't expect that out of a total of more than seventy chapters, chasing my wife takes up almost fifty chapters. Shouldn't Luo Yao know the truth better than anyone else? Fei Yu was actually able to chase fifty chapters! If there are only more than seventy chapters, the maximum length of Chasing the Wife's Crematorium can be kept at around twenty-five chapters, and then the plot will fill in the gaps.
I always feel like there's no ending yet, and this story shouldn't be like this. But the above is just my personal opinion. I didn't look very carefully at the end. If you find something wrong, you are welcome to give me some advice, but please be reasonable and don't curse.
I clicked in because the part about the coffee shop in the copy struck me. But what about the coffee shop? Also, the original character Luo Meng makes me very unhappy. It feels like a hole that has not been filled.
How should I put it, emmm, I feel that this feeling is a bit pretentious and too humble. The emotional line is not very good, a bit broken, and a bit disappointing.
There were so many intimate things at the beginning. Can it be explained that because of personality, he didn't recognize his own feelings but couldn't control them. If he accepted them, he showed that he really liked them. Otherwise, he would have done those intimate things without any burden? He also acted like he really loves Gong, but later he suddenly said that he didn't like him very much... OK, if you don't like it, you don't like him. He had a crybaby character from the beginning but lost it all later on. He behaved like a completely different person. If you want to show your disappointment in Gong, you can just be cold and softly sad. Anyway, you can't see where he is sad. As for the self-esteem issue mentioned, it can really be changed to "I like you but I have self-esteem". It feels like saying that I don't like you very much is like superfluous and makes the initial interaction illogical. Later, I should slowly believe that Gong is changing and gradually accept him, instead of feeling that there is no struggle in the whole process and gradual changes, he suddenly begins to forgive and accept, sweetness is really not that sweet, and then I feel that I have been cut in half.
Wow, it's great. Although the plot is a bit rushed, it's still great.
Why does this feel a bit strange?
That's gone? ? ? Didn't see enough. I was caught off guard.
Author, I love you (?? ?(??? C)
! Ruan Ruan is so cute! ! !
I feel like the copywriting and text don't match a bit
Digging holes but not filling them, I always feel that the initial plot should not be like this. After Fei Yu realized that he liked Luo Yao, he kept chasing her. I can understand chasing his wife at the crematorium, but Fei Yu chased her for so long and did so many things. Luo Yao's surprise gradually turned into indifference. Luo Yao's reaction was too bland when Fei Yu chased him. Even if you say that Luo Yao later liked Fei Yu like this, it would be strange. Damn, even if Luo Yao in the novel is finished, the protagonist may become another person after the story is over. If there is a novel world that automatically completes the plot, what do you think your Luo Yao and Fei Yu will experience because of the ending you gave them? In fact, I admire Luo Yao's view of love, because I am such a person. I would rather be alone in this life than love someone with a shy face. No matter how much that person once made my heart move, how much I liked and loved him, or how much I lacked love, he could not trample on my sincerity or insult my self-esteem. I like him because he is good. I know everyone has shortcomings, but self-esteem is my bottom line. If he doesn't respect me, he doesn't deserve my love. So I especially admire what Luo Suo does. If I like him, I will pursue him with all my strength. When I meet my love rival, I will be jealous openly without being overly entangled. But if what Dada said was that Luo Yao was an orphan and had a sensitive mind, then he should have relented when he found out that Fei Yu was changing when Fei Yu was taking good care of him whether he had a fever or was drunk. He had no one to take care of him since he was a child, and he was even teased for looking too weak, so he didn't like to go out. But Fei Yu had been taking care of him. He sent him home drunk, carried him into his room, and sent him to the hospital when he found out he was sick. He made a fuss about occupying a bed. How could a child who had been alone for so long and wanted to be loved be unmoved? Because he was an orphan since childhood, he knew better that others had no obligation to take care of him and had to rely on himself for everything. He had been carrying it for so long, and suddenly he had someone to rely on, and he was still his ideal type. He knew that the person he liked was changing, so why would he continue to be indifferent. I don't give it a negative rating because I really like the first half of this article. After all, I really didn't expect that out of a total of more than seventy chapters, chasing my wife takes up almost fifty chapters. Shouldn't Luo Yao know the truth better than anyone else? Fei Yu was actually able to chase fifty chapters! If there are only more than seventy chapters, the maximum length of Chasing the Wife's Crematorium can be kept at around twenty-five chapters, and then the plot will fill in the gaps. I always feel like there's no ending yet, and this story shouldn't be like this. But the above is just my personal opinion. I didn't look very carefully at the end. If you find something wrong, you are welcome to give me some advice, but please be reasonable and don't curse.
I clicked in because the part about the coffee shop in the copy struck me. But what about the coffee shop? Also, the original character Luo Meng makes me very unhappy. It feels like a hole that has not been filled.
How should I put it, emmm, I feel that this feeling is a bit pretentious and too humble. The emotional line is not very good, a bit broken, and a bit disappointing.
There were so many intimate things at the beginning. Can it be explained that because of personality, he didn't recognize his own feelings but couldn't control them. If he accepted them, he showed that he really liked them. Otherwise, he would have done those intimate things without any burden? He also acted like he really loves Gong, but later he suddenly said that he didn't like him very much... OK, if you don't like it, you don't like him. He had a crybaby character from the beginning but lost it all later on. He behaved like a completely different person. If you want to show your disappointment in Gong, you can just be cold and softly sad. Anyway, you can't see where he is sad. As for the self-esteem issue mentioned, it can really be changed to "I like you but I have self-esteem". It feels like saying that I don't like you very much is like superfluous and makes the initial interaction illogical. Later, I should slowly believe that Gong is changing and gradually accept him, instead of feeling that there is no struggle in the whole process and gradual changes, he suddenly begins to forgive and accept, sweetness is really not that sweet, and then I feel that I have been cut in half.
Wow, it's great. Although the plot is a bit rushed, it's still great.
Why does this feel a bit strange?
That's gone? ? ? Didn't see enough. I was caught off guard.
Author, I love you (?? ?(??? C)
! Ruan Ruan is so cute! ! !
I feel like the copywriting and text don't match a bit