[Harry Potter] Flaws

I am very grateful to the author for this fanfic. I have a lot to say in my heart. This is the first fanfic that I have really read and shed tears, so this first long review is dedicated to ? Flaws flaws? First of all, this book made up for my missing year at Hogwarts, which was also an important year, graduation. In "Harry Potter", we follow Harry's perspective to find the Horcruxes. We don't know much about the complete school year, there are also exams that have not yet come, and everyone's expectations, tension, and excitement for the future. The beginning of the novel did not start from the first grade, which surprised me. The love at first sight on the carriage basically set the direction of the subsequent development of the story. Leah and Sirius tested each other, expressed their feelings, and had quarrels and misunderstandings. But they all came out, right? The purest love, as Dumbledore said, love is the greatest magic. Secondly, Rowling didn't depict many of his parents' children. The ending in which no one of his parents survived made me feel very sorry. I always felt that Harry Potter should grow up under the careful care of James and Lily. He would tell his parents everything that happened in school and discuss it with his parents. Regarding what kind of person I should be in the future, I would spend Christmas or summer vacation with my parents, Sirius and Remus. Speaking of Sirius, the boy in the author's works is so lifelike that my heart has always been affected by him. He is so real and detailed that it makes me feel like I have had a very long dream. , Sirius should not fall under that curtain of nothingness, he will always be free; and Remus, Remy's life can be said to be very unfortunate, but fortunately he met the Marauder when he was a boy, joined the Order of the Phoenix as a youth, he met like-minded friends, Voldemort was After being defeated, Lemmy lived a wandering life again until Dumbledore called him back to teach. Even so, he still faced life gently. The world kissed me with pain, but I responded with songs. Lemmy needs a girl who knows him, understands him, and loves him regardless of everything. He is worth it. I believe that Remus and Claire in the parallel world will live happily ever after. The author has made up for all my regrets very well, and I am really touched. Finally, near the end, Leah met Lily and James in her dream. Just like fourteen years ago, Lily would smile and hug her, and James would joke with her. I really cried when I saw this. Lily really loved Leah and couldn't bear to see this girl living in the past. She personally took Leah out of that haze. Although all of this was brought about by the Resurrection Stone, I believe that with this complete farewell, Leah will be full of hope for the rest of her life. I thought of the ending of a novel I read before, and felt it was very appropriate to use it here: "Maybe you don't remember, but you actually said goodbye to the person you left, on a long night." Enjoy your new life, a peaceful world without Voldemort, a beautiful and dreamy magical world Harry, Leia, Sirius, Remus, Claire, and the students and professors of Hogwarts Some of the unspeakable feelings that I had hidden in my heart were finally written out today. Thanks to Tao Jiujiu's fan fiction, it smoothed out some of the wrinkles in my heart. ——Written in the early morning of January 23, 2024

Zhan Li scored hard and I cried hard. My parents are heroes for generations. Wuwu

It's true. When I was a child, my grandfather was my primary school teacher, and I was very desperate. Although he didn't teach me, he was very familiar with the math teacher who taught me. It was my nightmare for three years.

How could a mother not recognize her child? Crying. Jpg

The descriptions of the family members in this book are really great. From my wife's words, I can truly feel the friendship between the family members. It's really great. Long live friendship! In particular, the three original characters are well described. The friendship and companionship between the heroine, Levi and Claire are the best form of friendship in my opinion! I also want to talk about some of the flaws that I feel, such as Sirius hurting the heroine because he didn't defend himself and valued friendship more. The heroine's process of forgiving him in the later period was a bit fast, which made me feel sorry for the heroine. For example, the plot line of the second generation is too fast-paced, and many plots cannot be described in detail, and it feels like it ends in a hurry. But these are acceptable. The whole story is smooth and there are no logical flaws. It is really great that it can be written like this for the first time. Thank you, my wife, for generating love. I look forward to more HP fans! Am I going to go? Watch it again~

Harry: I'm just a love-splitting machine with no emotions.

555555 Every time I read HP fanfic, I cry for Lily?

Woo woo woo, I really cried. Love, friendship, faith, light, everything is so beautiful.

It's not that I'm stuck in the tree house. (Actually, I don't know if there's a problem with the upbringing, but in the end, after graduation, I always went to the Muggle world.

Finished reading! Wow wow cry! I love Leah's daddy and all the family members so much! ! Earlier, when Sirius cared more about friendship and ignored Leia, he was so angry that he wanted to beat him to death, but Leia and him were worth it. Let them continue to be happy and sweet in this beautiful time and space!