I'm an HP fan who's read countless fanfics. Now I've run out of things to read, so I've rolled up my sleeves and decided to write one myself...
This is just for my personal enjoyment. I'm not bashing anyone. My writing is nothing special, and I'm just doing this for fun. If you don't like it, don't read it!!!!
The heroine has lived a past life and a present one, and she's highly intelligent. Though mature for her age, she sometimes throws childish tantrums. The hero is little Dragon (the author's favorite), a proud, awkward young gentleman. They can't stand each other at first and are always getting on each other's nerves. Then comes all the sweetness!
Theme: It's all for fun
I stopped reading when I saw Admission... It's not that the writing is not good, but I personally can't stand some of the settings (so I still gave my wife 2 points). I just want to write a book review to remind future friends~ I should have had a hunch when I saw that I would be able to do wandless magic at the age of five, but I kept reading without thinking about it... Until I bought a wand before entering school, "carved sandalwood box", "carved purple jade handle", "scales of nine candles from the Book of Mountains and Seas", I realized that this heroine must have a lot of "su"! Then I saw that the heroine who was assigned to Slytherin participated in the Chief Challenge as soon as she entered school, so I decided to give up... It's obviously a new fan created in 2022. Why do so many old fans have Mary Sue settings?
Ah~ I felt something was wrong when I saw Ollivander take out the "carved sandalwood box". Sure enough, later on, the heroine's wand had a carved purple jade handle and a Yin Jiuzhu from the Book of Mountains and Seas... The opening chapter is a bit sour, can anyone who has read it tell me whether it will be so sour later on?
Why is Sylvia a Muggle wizard? Shouldn't it be mixed race?
I already feel like a Mary Sue when I see a five-year-old who knows wandless magic hahh
Are there any extras after the war? I still want to see the follow-up!!! H
The heroine is also pure-blooded to a certain extent, just not that deep. The children of mixed-blood wizards and pure-blood wizards are also pure-blooded
It's so enjoyable that when I was watching the movie, I was upset that Dumbledore was adding points after finishing calculating his points in the academy (▼乀▼#), come on, author!
It's 2022 and there's actually a Chief Challenge. I'm surprised.
Everyone thought she was a Muggle before, but suddenly everyone knew she was a half-blood. This feels so abrupt for no reason.
It's great. I was so angry when I watched the movie. It's unfair no matter what I say. One plus 170 points made me so angry.