All My Disciples Have Gone Astray

Let's briefly talk about this article () The setting of the protagonist really poked me, it's a bit suicidal and there are others' single arrows, but the article didn't reflect the male protagonist's sue very well. Yu Xing is very indifferent to others and doesn't like to talk much. He is more in line with the image of a cold master. This is where everyone's respect for him comes from. This is a common trait. But in fact, Yu Xing himself is a person with a lot of inner activities, and he often complains, and he is prone to drama when reading the article. I had to try my best to think of him as a sultry guy... But the author's word choice in the article is not very good, and words like "wocao" often appear, so the male protagonist completely becomes an ordinary young man with no charm. Although the characters in the book don't know this side of him, the readers do. How can the uncharming protagonist make people feel Su? Regarding other supporting characters, I personally like multiple arrows very much, but everyone has written a little bit, and whether they have been written down in detail, I feel a lot but not profound. Chu Renyu fell in love with the protagonist too suddenly. It felt like Chu Renyu fell in love with the protagonist because he was so handsome and was amazed by it, plus the "redemption" bonus. In fact, the male protagonist didn't have any communication with his apprentice after that. Yu Xing's charm was all based on Chu Renyu's imagination (this kind of plot is also quite common, it's much better after watching it). Let's talk about Junior Brother Yu Xing. This one confuses me even more. There is no love at first sight or long-term love. I don't know how this guy fell in love with the protagonist. Maybe it's because the male protagonist is so awesome. (The little prince and the big devil are okay. At least they have spent a long time with the male protagonist, so there is no big problem in the logic of falling in love with him. But the little shark at the end makes me feel like I just made up the numbers... This article should be a bit more enjoyable, so it must be able to create a plot that makes readers feel happy and happy in a short time with smooth logic. The plot does not need to be very rigorous, but it should not have too many flaws. Otherwise, how can it be enjoyable to read if it is stumbling? That's it for the review. I originally had a lot to say but I forgot about it as I wrote it () I hope the author can write better articles in the future. (By the way, if you don't like what I said, please reply politely)

The whole story is probably about Bai Lian who disgusted me... After thinking about it, I don't think the protagonist did anything wrong. The protagonist has principles and is it wrong?

How is Long Ya? Hey, I really want to know! !

Is Bai Ling dead? How did you die? How is the second apprentice? Can you explain it clearly? !

It's well written. The ending is endless.

This Gugu is finally finished, Sahua ~ I like this style very much, I am looking forward to the sequel, and I also want to watch Yu Xing, a world is completely unsatisfactory! Generally speaking, the plot is slow in the early stage and tight in the later stage, and the grasp is not particularly good. Many plots in the middle are not explained very clearly. The ruthlessness is not particularly clear in the later stage, but the irresistible male protagonist is really handsome. The author's writing is good, but it's too Gu. Finally it's finished and everyone is celebrating!

So if you hesitate, it will be in vain

When I saw the sisters in front of me thinking about sharks and pigeons, I just wanted to laugh out loud. After all, I could read it all in one go. It was so cool!

Is the possessed second disciple dead?

Hey - no matter what, it is always good to have an ending. I can't say whether it is good or not, I can only say that I finally finished reading it. It is also a joke to say that pigeons are a fact. At least I thank the author for an ending. But next time I read your article, I must finish it before reading it, haha ​​^o^