A Second Spring (Matriarchal Society)

This is my first full booking in Lujiang. It's so beautiful. The emotional progression of the two protagonists is very natural. There is no such thing as torture for the sake of torture or industrial saccharine. The author's writing is very strong. But the writing is not careful enough. If it can be expanded to about 500,000 words, it can be written sufficiently. The male protagonist is very good but relatively thin. The female protagonist's character is very real, especially the state of mental trance when she first traveled through time. . . . . I personally think it's a bit suffocating. I haven't dated the male protagonist once. The female protagonist, as a top student (mentioned several times in the article), has never written a single word. She has no desire to read literary works, even if she teaches Xiaoguang to recite a few lines of ancient poetry. The female protagonist has not developed any career. In addition to growing crops and raising chickens and ducks, the male protagonist also sells embroidery in the town to earn some money. What if there is a natural disaster? Both the female protagonist and the male protagonist lack character arcs, but the disadvantage is that the ceiling is too low, especially for the female protagonist, who has no personality growth from the first chapter to the last chapter. In short, the number of new maps is 0, and all the emotional brewing and explosions are developed in the one-third of an acre at the doorstep. The inscriptions on cassava and Liu Qing at the village gate were completely wasted. I spent several chapters lobbying the village chief and doing experiments. The result was that I put them in the shop and sold them for a few copper plates, and then nothing happened... The author is very good at writing delicate emotional changes, and his writing style is also good. I personally ordered all of them purely for the male protagonist.

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I made a list of heroes to save the beauty, and I accepted it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Second sister, you have read a lot of dramas, right? [Bad laugh]

Sensitive people and rough nerves must communicate more! Otherwise, one party will go back and forth and go to more than a dozen theaters, while the other party will have a question mark on their face and have no idea what is going on.

Both of them are already showing signs of each other, it would be nice to have more love [star eyes][star eyes][star eyes]

"When Guan Yue heard this sentence, she almost..." This is a big bug for the author~

"This person really can't stand it. She is refusing..." This is a big bug for the author~

"When Wen Lin saw Cheng Lingjun, he divided into..." This is a big bug for the author~

It's so funny, the village chief is so funny too

There's also a side story, I always feel like there's a little bit of sugar missing [dog head]