Harry Potter: An Nan

The overall writing style is good and very relaxed, but the professor's OOC is a bit too serious. In the original work, the professor loves Lily deeply, not just as a friend, but he falls in love with An Nan too easily. The transition period is too short, which makes the whole text look like a mindless love story. All the professor's actions are for the sake of love. There are also the English sentences that the author adds at the end of each article. I don't know if it is because the translation software used is not good at translating it or for some reason. It is very standard Chinese English. Those who know a little bit about English will dig their toes when reading it. I can understand the author's mood when writing these words, but it is too embarrassing to write with this level of English.

I stayed up late and finally finished reading it. Although the author wrote it well, there are still some shortcomings. Speaking of OOC, Sri Lanka and Harry are very OOC. Si Jiao's childhood caused all his misfortunes. Due to long-term domestic violence in his childhood and his mother's silence, Si Jiao's character was very extreme, gloomy and even inferior, and he was also very sensitive. In the heroine's situation, when the professor finds out that others want to get close to him, he should subconsciously push the heroine away and use venom and spikes on others. Therefore, it is written that Christianity is too mild. When Si Jiao first realized that he liked the heroine, he would not suddenly realize it with surprise, but would feel inferior and feel that he was not qualified to be with the heroine.

Why did I just read this article now? It's so good! In fact, I think there are no other problems except that the professor is OOC. Harry is always James's son, and his character inherits some of James' paranoia. Moreover, it is quite consistent with the Harry in the original book. As for the professor, I think I should put all the content of this article in the middle and the end. After all, the professor's guilt and obsession with Lily are too deep, and because of his childhood, he will not let someone enter his heart so easily. If it is placed in the middle and the end, I think it is excusable. Of course, the professor treats his own girl differently from other people, and the professor's attitude towards other people is also consistent with the original work.

I saw a lot of people saying that HP is too OOC, but I actually think it is consistent with the original work to a certain extent. (Note, I mean to a certain extent) Because I was deeply impressed by this description in the original text. It was probably around HP's fifth or sixth grade. At that time, Ginny was not infatuated with her as she was when she was a child. Instead, she fell in love with a Gryffindor boy. Then the psychological description of HP in the original book was probably "There was a lion in his heart that kept roaring, tearing him apart, tearing him apart!" (That's probably what it looked like, I can't remember clearly). In fact, it can be seen that HP is very powerful. Angry, he just didn't take action like in this article. However, in this article, the girl he loves falls in love with the person he hates the most. Compared with the original work, it is reasonable for the emotions to be more intense, especially when everyone around him says that the person he hates the most is a good person, his respected teacher, his dear mother, and even his beloved girl. He is also at a very immature stage mentally, and I think it is in line with the original work to a certain extent when he makes more extreme behaviors. Especially since he was not understood at that time and was ostracized and isolated by almost most of his classmates in the school. He was extremely eager to prove himself, and in this case, everyone told him that he wrongly blamed the person he hated the most. No wonder I would do many impulsive behaviors. Also, Sijiao is indeed too gentle, but considering the different emotions facing Lili here, it is understandable. Furthermore, the bad character in this story is really, really annoying. It made me want to punch him. If I were the heroine, I would scold him severely. He is impulsive and reckless. I don't think he loves Anna very much. In the end, it is more like he is competing with the teacher, just to prove that I am stronger than the person I hate the most and that I am not mentally mature enough. I can't even imagine how crazy he would have been if Albus didn't show up at the ball.

Help?!!!!!!!! Too sweet to sleep

Mr. Harry Potter, your parents owe your Potions Professor Severus Snape too much. At that time, your parents died and you accepted the miserable life without the love of your parents. It was not until Severus Snape's current lover Annan resurrected your mother that you could feel your mother's care and love. After all, you yourself also owe Annan, right? Well, if you knew that all the things your father and your godfather did happened to you, would you be willing? I have to say that I admire the patience of your Potions Professor Severus Snape. He never made trouble for you once. Of course, it was the kind of trouble your father and your godfather were looking for, especially the kind that didn't take human life as their own.

The ending is full of flowers ~ a super nice little sweet article, very well written!

Ahhhhhhhhhh!! Harry, you troll brain!!!

Ah, this... Is a bit sudden

You are so great! I literally let out a prairie dog scream! A satisfying sugar rush! Sweet people can't stop rolling on the bed! Ah ah ah love you 3000 times mua~