How I Finally Became a White Lotus in the Golden Age [Quick Transmigration]

Ah, so sad. It feels like carefully peeling off a piece of candy that you have been begging for for a long time. After peeling it off, there is nothing. Come on, author. I really like the writing style, but it is really sad to end it in such a hurry.

It ended suddenly... I don't know why I always feel that the author's writing is very attractive to me. Although I have foreseen this ending from the hasty ending of the first world, I don't want to describe this book as a bad ending. I also mentioned many times in the essay that there were too many branches of imagination and undeveloped branches to write. I believe that the author actually built a possible complete world for them in his mind, but it was not shown due to limitations of writing power, energy, motivation and other reasons. To be fair, the character design in this article is not outstanding. The combination of the heartthrob and cold-hearted Su Shou and (possibly) paranoid and pathological Gong is not special, and there are some conflicting points in the development of the story. Xie Yi's personality changes in various worlds and whether he makes efforts to maintain his original intention are not shown. , In the last world, I even felt that he was a little indifferent, as if being an outsider gave him the right to live and kill. Although the explanation for this plot in other novels is that the protagonist does not regard those characters as real people, this is obviously not the case in this article, so I am a little bit worried about this x As for the attack, it seems to me that the author of the comment below has preset the forward attack, which is the line in the original world. It is a pity that it is not shown. Including the forward attacks in the later worlds, no clues can be found to connect them (there seems to be only one sentence in the text that the attack in this world is similar to the attack in the previous world). Therefore, the emotional line seems to be a bit wishful thinking and the feeling of being ignored by love. If it is a forward attack, it would be really miserable. In terms of plot, I feel that the author wants to write about some grand events, but too many forces are unilaterally involved with Xie Yi. It seems a bit inconsistent... (Personal feeling) Including the grand scenes of a century of changes brought about by war that the author wants to express in the last world, it is difficult to feel it from Xie Yi's perspective... (If he had not been imprisoned, he might have witnessed it with his own eyes x) After saying so much, it is actually difficult to understand, obviously this story It could have a better and more satisfactory development, but in the end what I saw was a flawed work. I hope the author can be more detailed when setting the outline next time, and roughly determine what he wants to express. New ideas in the writing process can be added to add details, and cannot be left to the next book (I always feel that the author's love and patience for this book are burning when I am exhausted orz). I look forward to a much better work from the author.

It's too bad. It seems that Mamoru likes the protagonist, but I don't know to what extent. But no matter what it is, he didn't take advantage of the protagonist when he was weak [and asked the protagonist if he was willing]. Compared with this tentacle... It's like picking up a drunk shrimp. I hope that the end of this chapter will not be too miserable for Mamoru. After all, he is a person who knows how to respect others...

Hey, so, xy was raped in front of (behind his back) wx? ? Is this a different kind of 3P (escaping with the lid on the pot)?

The smell of hemp is too grassy.

Ah, so sad. It feels like carefully peeling off a piece of candy that you have been begging for for a long time. After peeling it off, there is nothing. Come on, author. I really like the writing style, but it is really sad to end it in such a hurry.

I really like this article. Bi Weixia writes it very well!

It would be nice if the author wrote it completely

I really, really want to know the ending

Is it over because you were caught off guard?