I Want to Date You Online [Esports]

After reading it, let's talk about it briefly. The character creation is too thin. Coco must have experienced a lot and seen a lot since he became famous at a young age. The final result should be a more complex and charming character compared to Ah Jing. As described in the article, I hope Ah Jing understands that Coco is actually not a completely good person. I think Coco must have a fierce and decisive side, but also a gentle and gentle side. As for Ah Jing, he probably hasn't experienced too many setbacks. Perhaps the biggest setback he has experienced is Coco's retirement, which will definitely have an impact on his character. Therefore, Ah Jing should not be an optimist who just smiles every day. He should have a deeper side of himself, which may not necessarily be negative emotions, but should be more complicated. Now I always feel that the relationship between the two is a bit light and ungrounded. In terms of narrative, when writing about the game, emotions are not written, and when writing about emotions, the game is not written, which is a bit split. Especially at the end, after Ajing joins the team, Coco does not appear at all in a large space. The forum style of the author's forum writing is quite interesting. I hope that I can continue to work hard and develop my own unique style.

Today I looked back at the articles I had rated in the past, and I thought carefully about how the atmosphere of women's forums 19 years ago was indeed like this. It was so cute [and pitiful]. I just wanted to commemorate myself when I was not a vicious woman. This article must be placed now. Not only the household registration books of both contestants have been burned in the forum, but the fans' ID cards and photos must also be displayed in the square in real time.

Ah, it ended suddenly. I just felt that the ending was a bit incomplete. It would be nice if I could write about Jingjing winning the award. QAQ

There is no process, car exhaust can also be done ah woo woo, at least let us know when and under what circumstances doi passed, don't just say doi woo woo, every time I think it is possible to doi but it turns out it is really uncomfortable woo woo

The ending was a bit rushed, but overall it was pretty good, a sweet little story.

The pace is really weird, the later stages go too fast, and some things really don't need to be written. At the end, it will be better if Ajing wins the championship. It doesn't have to be a big game, or even a handful of chickens.

I want to see the extra 🥺🥺🥺 please 4K extra

It's good to end it here, but it's really lacking. It feels like there are still a lot of things that haven't been done and haven't happened! Anyway, come on, ma'am! The first book is very well written!

Like it very much! It's a cookie that I'll take out and look at when I'm in a bad mood.

First, finish scattering flowers! Then, Happy New Year, madam! Finally, I wish my wife all the best! Thirty thousand updates per day! QAQ