The Evil Black Swan

40% Of the language is seriously flawed. The preface does not match the postscript. There is no need to pile up words. It does not promote the plot. The author is too narcissistic.

People with incorrect views write books with incorrect views. Please stop being a keyboard warrior on Weibo and come here to get bad reviews.

This is obviously an 18-year-old novel, but why are the characters so old...

I always feel weird here. The creative idea proposed by the heroine feels like a replica of herself, and the description of the senior management. With all due respect, how did this brain become a high-level executive? Let's not talk about the setting of the heroine cheating on marriage. The male protagonist It makes me sick to have Bai Yueguang in my heart and to think about others. I flipped through the others. Although the scumbag routine looks very enjoyable and popular, it actually has no meaning at all. I always feel that the progress is too fast, and the ups and downs of the characters are not very obvious. The description of appearance It is obvious that Mary Sue has a sense of déjà vu. In fact, if it is not well written, it can be completely omitted, or it can be summarized with something like the forest system. There is also Qi Wang. If you are a school boss, you should pay more attention to other people's evaluations. Even if you don't like it, you won't say it to your face. Of course, you can't deny it. There is also the image of the old man, who is stuck in the wealthy family beating the mandarin duck father-in-law. He is very old. Although the female protagonist helps the male protagonist to improve, there is always something weird. This is how this character feels to me currently.

Worm, 26.5% A black swan, not all the time. The writing style needs to be improved, but the serious attitude deserves recognition. Come on, I probably know something after reading the comments. In fact, there is no need for Shanshan to hype up. If you are serious and down-to-earth, readers will definitely see it. You should pay attention to the coherence of the outline when conceiving. Don't use old memes from the last century. It is boring and affects the article. It is better not to keep arguing with those who have negative reviews. It affects the popularity of passers-by. As long as you do it seriously, someone will definitely see it. Your efforts will definitely be rewarded! Come on! (I'll read this one again)

I rewarded the moonstone as usual, I really didn't mean it, I just felt embarrassed not to give anything, and then I'm poor, so... Please Shanshan don't dislike me.

According to the plastic surgery method in the article, the heroine is probably a copy of AB...

According to the plastic surgery method in the article, the heroine is probably a copy of AB...

Why do young boys have milky smell and muscles at the same time (yes, ex)

Looks good, come on!!! The Hype Queen is also full of energy today