Ghost General

Finished spreading flowers! I always feel that the plot should be richer. Of course, it's not too cramped now, but it seems that some small details are not written out, but as the first article, it is really well written!!! A new treasure wife! Let's go read my wife's new article

You write, or you are still writing, and it is there, only increasing but not decreasing.

Finished reading! Super pretty!! I feel like I've found a treasure! O>_<o, fairy love! But some places feel unclear, such as how Chu Xiu returned to Beiyu's past? There's a chance for a second brush!

I read it in one sitting... Madam's logic is really clear. All the clues can be connected together. The main plot is actually Bei Yu's revenge plan, but the variable in it is Chu Xiu (forgive me for wrongly accusing Junior Uncle Zheyu). This article is really a great treasure. It is rare to encounter a fairy tale with good writing and clear layout. My wife's first article is so well written and I am looking forward to the other stories in the future. In addition, I feel that there are still a few things that cannot be explained—— 1. Changes before and after cold weather To be honest, I saw Chu Xiu fall into the illusion of Immortal Laughter. I saw Han Tian, the evil ghost in the previous life, so paranoid and crazy, but he (mistakenly) looked like a kind old father to the Immortal Laughter little ball of light, and the Han Tian who was reborn looked completely free and easy again. How should I put it... The change process of mentality before and after rebirth is not so clearly written. It is like Han Tian's temperament suddenly changed. It is a bit abrupt. This cannot be explained by saying that his mentality changed after he died and was reborn. If there is an extra story that briefly tells the story of Ajun and Han Tian, it might be clearer~ 2. Duan Changfeng All I can say about this character is... It's really one of the highlights of the whole novel! He was the one who picked up Fu Nian and Yue Yun and made Bei Yu the new ghost king. Later, he was the one who let Chu Xiu take off his clothes and enter the ghost realm. This character almost tied the whole story together. However, there are still some awkward places, such as why Fu Nian, who killed the former ghost king Hantian, was allowed to try to succeed the ghost king. After all, he was Han Tian's subordinate, so he would still have a grudge against Fu Nian no matter what. I think it would be better if the previous article hinted more that Duan Changfeng was only loyal to the ghost realm and not to the ghost king. 3. Fu Shi Fu Shi was unwilling to live in the shadow of his second brother, so he worked step by step to pull Fu Nian down from the altar, and then tried every means to plan the fall of Emperor Chao until he sat in that position. But no matter how I look at it... I feel like his character is like a small boss controlled by a big boss. Although he looked like a smiling tiger in front of him, when he entered the Fu Zhai Guanyin copy of the Immortal Laughing main formation, I always felt that he was a bit of a charlatan, not at all like the deep temperament that a real big boss should have. I can't believe that such a huge plan back then could be planned by a dandy and arrogant young man like him... I think it makes sense to say that he was reluctant to do anything for this reason, but I do feel that his character should be made a little deeper and more like a big boss. I feel that the character design is a bit broken in the later period. When I saw the back part, I had a feeling - how did such a fool figure out the protagonist in the first place?! There is also a question that I don't quite understand - who was Beiyu looking for revenge from the beginning? In my opinion, what he hates is actually himself. He also hates those who pushed him into the position of emperor that he did not want. He also hates those who take his efforts as a matter of course. Of course, the one he hates most is Xianrenxiao. That's why he led everyone from the Xian family and the Fu family, who were desperate at the time, to the main formation of Xianrenxiao, hoping to annihilate them in one fell swoop? And because of Chu Xiu's existence, that's why he chose to use his own body as a guide? The above is my own understanding. Oh, by the way, let me briefly talk about pen power. I think my wife's first article was really well done! I particularly like the pace of the plot. It doesn't drag out or talk nonsense. Although the only thing missing is that the pace is a little faster in the middle, the writing style is really lacking. And although the number of words is not many, although Sparrow is small and has all the internal organs, the world view is still very large. If you want to write more, you can actually try to write a few more copies, and hiding the big boss in it also lays several foreshadowings, which makes people feel unexpected but reasonable. If you want to write more, you can try to write more copies. Don't worry about the short word count~ But looking at the full text, under the cover of the wonderful plot, the wife actually has a small hidden problem: the character setting is not particularly outstanding, the tsundere of Gong is not deeply reflected, and the direct personality of the tsundere is not particularly obvious. Hey, it's already a thousand words long. I'll just leave my first long comment for my wife~ This kind of plot flow is really good. If you like it, please call my wife~ It's finished~

In fact, I quite like the pace of Madam. At least it is not too draggy like most fairy tales, and the layout is quite large, although sometimes the pace is a little faster.

Damn it... I feel like this chapter has overturned all my guesses... I feel like I'm not very suitable for guessing the plot...

Purchase the full text until now, but there has been no comment... I thought about it for a long time... As long as the big boss behind the scenes has appeared... I can make a reasonable guess... It's Zheyu? Although Zheyu only played a part in Lingge, I really like his skinny appearance, even though I think he is the big boss.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is really good!

I must say, it's really well written. I really like Chu Xiu and Bei Yu.

I have been buying updated chapters since I bought this book. I actually encountered the anti-theft seal for the first time. It's really amazing.