Traveling to the Stars to Play Games

Is there a lack of transitional scenes here? I've watched it several times, and the transitions always seem a bit odd.

"Vanka" is here to point out a bug to the author~ It should be "ten thousand"

The story ended abruptly while we were getting to the exciting part? Author, please add a bonus chapter! I want to see what happens next!

It looks great! I hope they can finish the game! (?ω?) I really want to see that... Well, maybe you could write one specifically for that... Does the author play games a lot, haha?

The writing style definitely needs improvement. However, I think the game's plot is quite good and interesting. I hope the author can come up with more game-related plots, even as side stories. But if you're going to write more, I think the author could work on how Qianwan and Lailai play the game together, ideally with both of them contributing to completing it. Otherwise, it feels like one side's presence is weak, like the ghost wedding scene.

I don't know if it's the author's writing style or what, but it perfectly matches the title—this whole string of boring words is so tedious I really can't continue reading. _(:з"∠)_

Ball Length → Chief 23333

Wow, you've started updating again? Keep it up!

Come on(??_?)?

It couldn't be him...