After the Big Shot Sets Their Sights on Me

I am writing here because I don't want to climb the stairs. Orz two-point review [can be deleted] This is a pure reader. The review is not objective or professional. I hope to screen out the necessary, useful and feasible information based on my own article. In addition, persistence will pay off. The growth of writing is gradual. No one is born as a fairy. Over. I didn't even finish reading the first chapter. At first I thought it was my mood that was responsible for most of the problem, but then I found out... The author's writing is, how should I put it, very fluent. There is no gc, and there is no trough. The whole text is straightforward and can be said to be very "clear water", with not a single fish in it. Moreover, Luliba Suo wrote a lot, and I don't know what the author wanted to explain. Every word has nothing to do with what follows... Let's talk about the character that I have struggled with for a long time. I feel like the main character doesn't have much charisma. It's a very thin image. It can't even be said to be one-sided. It's just a dot, and this dot has no color. When two people get along with each other, I feel that we should break up as soon as possible, it won't be awkward. As soon as we met, she turned into a middle-aged woman. Headache. I can't write anymore. To sum up, read more, learn more, and write more. Do more special exercises, learn to design a full character and story, and learn to master the story's gc. The most important point is to figure out what you want to express: delete all the things you don't need, and save the things you don't need now but will need in the future. We don't want the protagonist to go on a road trip and write about all the shops on the roadside, and then the chapter is gone. As a result, these shops are of no use. (Exaggerated) Even if it's useful later, just take it out and run around, I'll explain it in detail later. It was so overwhelming that I didn't even know what to look at. The same goes for the characters, they must not be OOC!!!! Ooc is so scary!! Most importantly, remember that they are men and women! A man!!

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The copywriting is quite interesting, so I'll take it first!

Quite a daily routine. The main character setting is interesting. I just don't know why there are only ten clicks except for the first chapter...

It's very beautiful. I like it. It's great!

High-fives and praises, this article should only be found in heaven, and it is rare to see it in the world. It is not enough to burst our hearts of admiration.