
[Xianjian IV/Ziyun/Campus Version] Eyes Meet
[仙四/紫云/校园版]视线交错
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 18y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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1Chapters
12Favorites
2.1kClicks per chapter
14Comments
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Ah! I actually missed such a lovely article and just saw it ~ Sure enough, Tianhe written by the postman is the most healing~ The image is so strong! I think every plot would look beautiful as an illustration! I am a person who likes to understand things through pictures. I don't know how to speak beautiful words, and my mouth may be dumber than Tianhe's. But I really like the postman's writing. I feel a little obsessed. I don't know how to express it every time I write a book review >//< I understand the postman's state! ~I think we are a bit similar... Of course you are writing articles, I am doing other things... Well~ I am your biggest fan anyway! (Although I often dive because I don't know how to express it... I will change it in the future!~) I heard there will be an update tonight! Sit back and wait!
Oh Ziying, you are so cruel... TUT~~
This is the first Ziyun fan article I've seen. It's so cute. Although when I play games, I prefer Xiaohedi... But as long as it's a little savage, it's not a problem. I love little savage~~ Um, by the way, Sir, there is also Xiaohe's 100 questions that seem to be a scam... The first 50 questions seem to me like chicken jelly, chicken jelly~
The Ziying here is so cute. Not bad, not bad. It can continue to develop.
Yan Ziwei... I seem to have read her book a long time ago, but I have completely forgotten ||||Is the writing style similar? I don't know. OTL short stories are indeed easier to control. Long stories have more things to consider, and people with poor memory like me often forget what they were thinking at the time. It's true that my literary audience is very small, and I'm really discerning = =+ I haven't received professional guidance in writing OTL articles. I think you can write whatever you love. The main thing is to be able to write what you feel in your heart. But I have loved Chinese since I was a child, probably for this reason. It's not difficult to write an article of my level, just start writing. To be honest, there are many people here who are better than me. I am just a newbie who started in March last year. You think of me so well =w=
I love it so much~ I suddenly feel that the author feels a bit like Yan Ziwei, eh. . It's not that the writing style is similar, but that kind of light writing style, often short stories, but with excellent touch, full prose, and first-class conception, eh. . But it doesn't feel that red, it looks very similar~ May I ask if you started writing it yourself or did you have professional guidance? How long does it take to write an article of this level~
Nothing else to say OK~~~~~~Yes~~~~~~~Love As expected of a postman, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Very good... The postman's writing and conception are first-rate. I originally didn't like fanfics with modern backgrounds, but every post in Postman is so well-written, and I really like this one too... It's so touching, as if I've returned to my school days, remembering the green and romantic feelings of my youth... Author's reply: Thank you for the compliment =/////= For a lazy person like me, it's so exciting to be praised by my friends for the articles I occasionally produce! Hehe, when I was a student... Why didn't I have such a handsome senior when I was a student?
Thank you Chizi! I get so many replies every time! It's written in such detail! So touching! ! ! I'm so happy to see such a reply when I write an article! ! ! In fact, I also know that the audience for my articles is very small. As for long articles and update speed, the main reason is that I feel that I am not capable enough. It is more difficult for me to grasp long things. Although I also want to write long OTL, the update speed is not possible. As for the writing style, I have many writing styles that I want to try, but no matter how I write, I am clear water. I don't mean to avoid H on purpose, but I think it is unnecessary and unreasonable according to the plot, so I won't write OTL. In fact, you will find the reason yourself if you look for it. Anyway... I guess it is still my personal problem. I really want more people to like my articles. This is what I call wanting to be popular. However, I don't want to change my writing style for the sake of popularity, so I'll continue to be the penguin in Antarctica =v= It's enough that readers like Chizi like me. As long as someone affirms, I will continue.
The postman's writing is very beautiful, with short and long sentences scattered at random, and the charm is revealed naturally. The characters of the two people in the article are also very cute, especially the fish and the pig, they are so cute, and the part where Tianhe gnaws the bread also made me laugh out loud. The postman's writing is really good, but it's not very popular. I think there are several reasons: 1. The writing is not long enough. Today's readers prefer long articles, and short ones are generally skipped. Second, fan fiction itself has limitations. People who have never played Fairy 4 probably won't read it. 3. Update speed. Of course, this is for long-form articles. 4. The CP concept issue. If this CP is not cute, it will turn off a group of readers. However, Ziyun is still quite popular, so it is not a big problem. 5. The artistic conception of the article is beautiful, and the writing style is cute but pure. Nowadays, many LOLIs like to pay attention to taste, and the more ero they are, the more popular they are. Of course, if the postman is writing out of his own hobby and feels that it doesn't matter whether it is popular or not, then forget about the things I mentioned above, it will indeed lower his own style. I just feel that it's a pity that the postman writes so well but is not popular, and I feel like my talent is not being appreciated. Continue to support Postman, come on