
[Chinese Paladin 4/Ziyun] Dragon Sacrifice
[仙四/紫云]祭龙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 171k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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32Chapters
184Favorites
8.0Score
1.5kClicks per chapter
231Comments
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Ah~This is it~~~Open ending OTZ
It's finally over... I'm so touched... I thought I couldn't see the end... I just feel... It seems like it ended too quickly... Especially because the postman deliberately gave an open ending... Well... How should I put it... In the later chapters, the protagonist's role is really small... It feels like I am watching the story of Dragon Sacrifice...
Oh my god, is it over? It's really unfinished. T T It's such a heavy, complex, profound, and great story! ! ! Postman, come out with a copy, come out with a copy, I must buy it! ! ! It doesn't matter if it has nothing to do with Ziyun later on. This story is really, I can't describe how it feels. Anyway, it touches my heart a lot. Such an ending makes me burst into tears. T (I had to end with the words of Hei Wu and Chi Yao at the end. I didn't feel much about the return of Qingluan Peak at the end. I just whispered, I personally think the ending is a bit cumbersome orz) But, I really like the whole story and the expression of the characters of each person on Panlongzhu at the end. It's so real, and the words and language are very sonorous and powerful
When I saw Chapter 29, I felt that there should be at least 6 or 7 more chapters before the end. I didn't expect that it would end in just 3 chapters. I always felt that it was still unfinished~ Congratulations to the postman for finishing the article~Spread flowers~
What about my previous message orz was it swallowed again orz I don't know if I can spit it out so I simply write it again orz The problem you mentioned about the unfinished ending... I personally feel that the final chapter alone is not unfinished, and the ending seems to be very refreshing when it reaches the most climax (jinjiang, are you still trying to kill me?!), Which is just right. However, compared with the original Chapter 5, Chapter 30 of Dragon Sacrifice seems to be less fully laid out; there also seems to be gaps in Chapters 28 to 30, which may be affected by the incoherence of writing. The above are all personal opinions, please ignore orz. After all, when I saw Chapter 29 before, I thought you would at least write 6 or 7 more chapters. I didn't expect that Chapter 3 ended, so I probably subconsciously felt that it was still unfinished. It goes without saying that there is nothing going on with Ziyun in the back... After all, in addition to these two people, the article also has a lot of fictional background, as well as discussions on social composition, gender (couldn't it be a word that was criticized because of a certain word = =) role, and other issues. Ziyun and Ziyun themselves also grew up under the overall structure of the author; and the experience in the story "Sacrifice to the Dragon" is very valuable for the relationship between the two people, probably because both of them have found a suitable position in their relationship. The interaction between the two in the final chapter is still very touching, whether it is Ziying getting into a subtle [crossed out] awkward[/crossed out] entanglement because of a certain answer from Tianhe, or Tianhe patting Ziying on the shoulder and saying that he is not loyal enough (it also makes me feel so depressed that I want to grab him and roar like a god: I am a LG, don't act like your buddy!) The little actions... All make people feel very happy and comfortable; Ziyun and Ziyun are very beautiful in themselves, and Postman is an author who is very good at capturing and expressing their beauty. Therefore, the two people gradually perfected the state of getting along after Chapter 19, which makes people feel very satisfied, as if it complements the story of dragon sacrifice and the imperfection of the real world itself. Generally speaking, I think the article "Sacrifice to the Dragon" is a very respectable work. The context is very clear, the writing is well organized, and the wording is also very particular. It is a soulful text that the author has devoted his efforts to. But what I am most grateful for this article is that it embodies some beautiful things that make me feel that life itself is better. Thank you, Postman =3= Congratulations on the completion, thank you for your hard work~~~Fireworks~~~Looking forward to the extras and the book! Ps: I forgot to ask again just now, how much does the gun Ziying want to make have anything to do with one of Wanguan's three-piece kitchen utensil sets? Is it a handful?
It's finally finished~~~~Thank you for your hard work, Spread flowers
Rubbing hands and smiling flatteringly: Before we get to the ending, let's do some welfare to satisfy our cravings/w\\~ Tianhe Ziying, you guys are so cute~ Dragon Lord... Why do I feel that he is so sinister and evil... So, is there any cp like Dragon Holding a Candle x Tianhe (Hey)
Sir, please update □ too. .
What a great article! But why are you so imperfect? T. There are 19 more chapters in T. Why is it locked? . Tragedy! Want to see it~
I discovered a serious problem after commenting... I forgot to rate = =||| Make up for it, haha~