Strange Tales of Mysterious Cases

Is this newly completed? The brush strokes are indeed more delicate than the previous one with ancient background. The modern background can also cover up many deficiencies in detail. When writing a sentence, you need to pay attention to the logic of language. For example, there is a sentence that says that the corpse was highly decomposed and had obviously been dead for several days. A more appropriate logical sequence is "the corpse was dead for an unknown number of days when it was found. The corpse was exposed in the wilderness and was close to the river. The corpse was very decomposed." This makes the logical sequence smoother and makes the reading more rhythmic. It was very interesting to write about the plot of Mrs. Hu putting out the fishing line. The description of the male protagonist's psychological activities that he does not believe in ghosts and gods is a little childish and could be reconsidered a little bit. Some inner words that are too straightforward can be replaced by descriptions of actions or expressions.

New book [Transmigration into the male protagonist Gray Moonlight]

Finished spreading flowers, when will the new article be published?

Hahaha, I need to go quickly

Eh? Is it suspenseful and supernatural?

Wait for me, I am really writing this, and now I am compiling an outline. I am also a person with an outline, but it makes me awesome.

This book is beautiful! How to pause it?

Looks good^ω^, looking forward to the update~

When will it be updated? Anxious, looking forward to

There are too many typos, please correct them next time