
This Is My Little Dumpling
这是朕的小团子
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Is this Chu Xian Bai Yueguang from Song Shiyuan?
Queen, can your noble concubine still be the queen mother and concubine? Author, are you here to be funny?
I have some impressions after reading this. Can you tell me what time it is? 1 Theme, this novel is positioned as a serious drama, and the whole story does describe the process of the male protagonist from being an unpopular prince to an emperor, but the plot is too rough. Moreover, since it is a serious drama, the title should not be a very romantic novel. From the reading of this novel, romance is only a small part of it, although the male and female protagonists have many scenes. So in fact, it can be expanded a little more and the struggle history of the male protagonist can be clearly described. The romance part can be used as one of the clues, but not too much. But if it is to be defined as a romance, then the emotional line must be the main line, and the matters in the court do not need to be so detailed. 2. Characters. The characters in the book are too one-sided. In life, no one can be bad all the time, and few people can suddenly wake up and become good people. What impressed me most about the description of characters is Dou E's Enemy and Lei Yu. These two dramas are very successful in shaping the characters. Some people may think that the characters in Dou E's Injustice are not very distinct. , It should be said that it is very contradictory, but this is the image that a small citizen should have, so in this drama, only Dou E and Zhang Luer have the most distinctive characters, and everyone else has contradictions, and this is exactly the most real place. From this, it can also be seen that the author must not be very old. Reading the comments, he should still be studying. I hope the young author will continue to work hard and write better works in the future. 3. Emotional line. Since I found the article from a romance topic, it should be a romance. As I said before, the plot is too hasty and the emotional line is not distracting. The copywriting is very good. There should be an emotional transition between the male and female protagonists, rather than just showing their identities and being together. I'm sorry for your title. In fact, at this time, the second male or female lead can have more scenes. Although the plot may be a little bloody, the emotional line will be more complete. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the ideas in this article are quite good.
Snow. . . . Cher??? The name Wei Ranxue is super easy to jump into the drama. Since you are raising a younger brother, why would you choose such a name? It doesn't fit in with the plot.
It's short and quite sweet, but I feel like there are too many articles about fighting pirates, which makes the process of the male and female protagonists getting together a bit weird, hehe?
Wow! Finally together! I'm even more looking forward to the upcoming married life!
I can't understand people like Yang Hua
My former neighbor, you are already going to break the thousand-dollar mark, come on.
Not enough, the author is great
My sister has a boyfriend, and I feel abandoned. If we get married, I'm going to cry. I can't control my tears.