Shadow Dance [Full-Dive]

This mess caught me off guard...

Recently I was reviewing a novel that I bought in full. Even though I knew it was almost over when I reached 120+ chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. In the second half, I skipped large sections, which made it uncomfortable to read. The biggest problems in the whole text are the setting and combat description. The author wanted to create a large framework, but was not able to detail it. Three kings, seven generals, and four zodiac signs sounded awesome, but many characters only appeared once, and there were not even 3 chapters in total. There are many settings, but they are only a few and are thrown away after use. She had no money to buy land, so she immediately made thousands by fishing (at that time, most passers-by didn't even have a single gold); there was no one to open a shop, so she immediately found a servant to manage it; if she needed support, her brother was the president of the guild and an elder of the first guild, so don't look for her if nothing happened; if she was short of equipment, fight Competitive, open treasure chests, and the treasure chests are always accurate; tasks come as soon as they are told, trigger points are mysterious, maps are changed when they are changed, and awakened when awakened. Many of them are errand tasks, or the protagonist is so lucky that he happens to have the items for the next task in his hand. There are only a handful of pve times, and most of them are dungeon monsters in the first half, and there are only a few wild bosses. The worst thing is the problem of combat power value, the author is really! Very! I am not good at writing battle scenes. The most boring parts of the whole text are the sections of competitive competitions. There are many characters but few descriptions. The images are flat and the battles have no sense of pictures. That is, he is a xx profession. He used xx, xx, xx, and he died. There are no professional characteristics, skill descriptions, damage effects, and detailed psychology and reaction actions of both parties to determine the outcome. The enigmatic Enlightenment buff that appeared in the finals of the individual competition, the enigmatic moving of the audience, the enigmatic beheading effect, and the continuous map changes in the team competition later, all have a mysterious rhythm, starting at the beginning and ending at the end. It goes without saying about equipment settings. There are very few equipments with fixed names and fixed settings. The protagonist's dagger triggers death more than 80% of the time. While saying that this is not just a game, but a real continent, highlighting the cruelty and seriousness of the abyss invasion, when encountering a deceptive plot, blame the planner? ? Was the plot planned? The consciousness of this continent is really benevolent. Only the good things can stimulate supernatural powers, and there are no bad things. When reading this article, I often feel familiar. It's not that it's plagiarized, it's just that the settings are all routine. Reborn due to emotional betrayal, randomly assigned to a hidden profession, saddled with racial missions, an artifact to be unlocked, teamed up with multiple dungeons, gained the admiration and admiration of the boss, joined/established a guild (again criticizing the combat description, I wrote a single brush with a reliable chain knife, how to brush it, please write) K people have to eliminate sins and change map dungeon towers, the setting of the Lost Book is really familiar (laughs) The competitive competition comes suddenly, suddenly the snake, the city suddenly, the dragon egg suddenly. Online game writing tests the author's ability to write in large formats and in fine detail, and many things need to be set in advance. Looking at the full text, you will find that only the perspective of the protagonist is relatively clear. But if you want to say that there is any connection between cities and cities, countries and countries, races and races, legends and legends, it is completely unclear. The settings are numerous but frivolous. For example, the protagonist's side job is to be a rune master, but only this chapter is mentioned, collecting materials? No, the finished product of enchantment? No. For example, in races, except for the twin elves, Ningche angels, Sharui dragons, and NPC sharks, everyone else basically defaults to the human race...

... It's a pity. This book is really good. I feel like there are a lot of foreshadowings that I didn't see. When I read more than a hundred chapters, I felt something was wrong. I was a little disappointed.

I saw a recommendation on the Internet and fell in love. The front part is really good-looking, with a lot of foreshadowing and a big framework. However, I didn't read the comments, bought the chapters, and didn't read them. I'm such an old blood, and I'm so bad at the end. Where did the promised explanation story go? That's right, it's the Ace Pigeon.

The hologram without love is really cool and good-looking? Big boost for the author

Well! Why do so many good-looking novels have normal and good-looking endings in the first two chapters, but the ending suddenly ends badly? Just think of a person who likes to eat a particularly delicious dish and realizes it is gone halfway through the meal (I won't say that there is a saying that even if you forget it after you finish eating it, you will find it is gone...)

? ? ? ? Didn't I say there is another chapter?

Are there any extras? Please continue woo woo woo

It's quite uncomfortable. This bad ending is so bad for me. This ending recommended from the forum gave me a slap in the face. I really hope that everything will be okay in the third dimension of the author.

It's 2020