I Think I'm About to Be Expelled from My Sect

The author's imagination is not ordinary

Thanks for the limited exemption, finish spreading flowers~??ヽ(°▽°)ノ?~

Fancy new copywriting?

My wife wrote really well???!!(??????)?? But she didn't explain clearly at the end, it was too hasty. I hope the more I write, the better it will be.

Although I only read a few plot development chapters, I bought the whole book () After all, articles with such a big imagination are really rare, and the two protagonists are great. Unfortunately, I have a mysterious resistance to the coldness and madness of Utopia (because it was too uncomfortable_(:з∠)_). I jumped to understand the story. It is really great that they can be happy in the end. I will probably torture myself to death after reading the full text?(;?Д`?)

Except for the fact that some parts are written too fast, which makes me a little confused with a slow brain, this is actually a very good article! I really like this kind of imagination. The concept of Master's original world is really novel and creepy. Because I read Brother Zhao's article first and then reposted this one, I thought it was just a big cookie at first. Didn't I expect that the background and worldview structure were so terrifying? ? ? ? His face was full of confusion. Jpg This kind of character who feels weak when meeting the master and becomes tough when meeting a strong enemy is really to my liking. Finally, I have a question. What did the sword master next door go through to become such a cute little fanboy?

I really like it! Shi Zunzun and Xie Yu are so sweet! The author is awesome and super cute! It's just a pity that the last few chapters were a bit rushed, but the ending was a bit obviously rushed, but I still loved it! If the ending could be unfolded, it would be a masterpiece. It has amazing ideas and settings, and the background is very broad and horizontal. The forum body is full of clues and foreshadowings, and the main text description is not weak at all, so go for it! Love you!

Emmmm, what should I say... Madam, you can stop using difficult writing methods first and just write whatever comes to your mind as you feel comfortable. Sometimes thinking too much about writing techniques can really lead to some brainstorming and feeling happy. After you feel happy, you will have the illusion that everyone can feel happy (?

I feel... A little confused. In the past, the feeling of the demon god ascending to the underworld was very good, but later in the dystopia... At the end, Jie Yu suddenly became crazy and cool? ? What does that divine power mean? Why was it born? Because the Master created the world, it has, uh, a feeling similar to authority (Is that so? I really don't understand what this divine power is about. How to measure it while pursuing fantasy and science and technology (the god of Utopia is a machine? Who designed it? Artificial intelligence? Human transformation??))? Even if it can be transferred to Jie Yu, wouldn't it be possible to use the abilities in this world when you go to a different world? Why can you suddenly use them again? ? ? And also, so strong? ? ? ? If people in Utopia are in turmoil... But there will only be a small wave of resistance, right? Moreover, in this world, Xie Yu is like a demon. Even if the big guys in the world of immortality protect him, a lot of people must be dissatisfied, right? What he robbed was the foundation of the cultivation of the three tribes! Later, they came back and received a big welcome (well, I know the plot requires it, but Jie Yu was really a wave before, so he was accepted without any hindrance??? It just feels a bit subtle inside...

Ah ah ah, I like it, hope everything goes well!