An Unorthodox Taoist Master

As "The Unorthodox Celestial Master" comes to an end, I would like to use this work to write a long review for Dong Mingda, the author I have always liked. This is my first time to write a long review in JJ. I am not very skilled in the business. I write whatever comes to my mind. Please forgive me if I am correct or not. First of all, I have to confess something leniently to the organization: I only started to be active in the comment area after serializing this book, and my account is also new, but in fact I am not a new reader. I have been observing secretly since 2014. I had just gotten into the pm fanfic world at that time. Unfortunately, I am very picky, and after searching for a long time, I couldn't find anything I liked. I basically gave up after just one look. I was in a severe literary shortage, and I was hungry every day, crying for food. Fortunately, I came across "Journey to the Origin". This is the first pm fanfic that I have read completely, and it is also the only one. It fully meets all my expectations of the pm world, just like what the copy says: a pure and warm bond. And for me, the meaning of "Journey to the Origin" is far more than just a novel. It came right at a very difficult time for me, when I was a freshman in high school. One weekend when I was home, I accidentally discovered "Tracing Origins" and only had time to read a few chapters. I don't remember how I felt at that time. I only remember hurriedly searching for all the resources, downloading them on my phone, and then taking them back to school. I hid under the quilt at night and finished reading. Although it is really outrageous to see piracy, I can honestly say that this small text document deeply healed me. I was reluctant to delete it and read it many times. It was a precious testimony for me, and it accompanied me through a long trough. On the cold and lightless winter nights, this story has always warmed me. At that time, I thought that someone who could write such a gentle story must also be very gentle. After that, when I went home, I read the settings of the Five Realms of Weichen one after another, read "Huai Shang Yun Ya Nuan", and read various short stories of Luo Ye. I was very busy during my senior year of high school and had no time to read novels, but "Tracing Origins" has always been on my mobile phone and stayed with me until the college entrance examination. When I applied for the exam, I was confused. I chose a major that was like the college entrance examination at the end of every year. I read less and less novels. It wasn't until this year that I remembered and downloaded the app. Although it has been almost three years, I still remember the two words "Dong Ming", and I am very happy to find that it is still being updated. If I had to describe my mood at that time, it would probably be: Long time no see. It was the first time we met, and it was also the reunion after a long separation. Okay, the lyric is over [? What follows is a long review that I don't know what to write. Long article + nonsense warning. My biggest impression of this book is: it is indeed Dongming. The familiar light novel style between the lines, and behind the words, the gentle emotions conveyed in the story. Below I will talk about my personal feelings in several aspects. I'm not a literature major. It's basically all nonsense. If you think it makes sense, read it. If not, just ignore it. Pure nonsense, no malice, please forgive me for any inappropriate wording. 1. Writing style In fact, it can be clearly seen that he was deeply influenced by Ri Qingfeng, not only in the dialogues of the characters, but also in the descriptions and discussions, which all have very recognizable characteristics. There's not much to say about this, if anything – just a suggestion – to try more styles. 2. Personality This part of the character design specifically refers to "Tianshi". Although labels can help people remember the character more deeply, there is also a disadvantage in that it makes the character flat. I feel that Lao Song is a bit flat. "Women's clothing" is his cute point, but his character seems a bit thin. I personally feel that his portrayal is not as good as that of Little Hell. Little Yama is usually very naughty, but he is also very able to handle things. The comparison of "surprisingly reliable" can leave a deep impression. On the other hand, Lao Song's character traits are not very obvious. Wouldn't it be better to leave a stronger contrast in his character? 3. Punctuation marks [Highlight! Highlight! Highlight! I must emphasize this! Single quotation marks cannot be used independently and can only be used within double quotation marks. The quotation marks in the sentence should all be double quotation marks "blabla". But except for dialogue, single quotation marks are used in the text. It is specially marked here to attract great attention. See me! 4. Plot I won't mention a certain boss by name here—yes! Bai Wuchang! It's you! As a level boss who has been secretly observed from a long time ago, Comrade Lao Bai really has no status... He died after not jumping for a while... Although it is very refreshing and there is no need to worry about abuse, but because the foreshadowing given to him has been mentioned repeatedly, I can't help but have expectations for him, waiting for him to read a long bar, use a big move, and cause a wave of huge damage. How should I put it... A little unexpected. That's all I want to say. As for why I only talk about the problems and don't praise them – of course it's because there are so many things I can praise! What's more regrettable is that those who rushed and slowed down still didn't catch up with the completion. I originally wanted to post it when I finished the chapter, but unfortunately I hadn't finished the exam at that time... Well, see you next time (wave)

Madam, that Donghuang Bell is said to be an old acquaintance. Which article is it from?

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I love this big cock sister so much! He is so awesome! ! ! !

Forever, a heart will last forever!

O(≧▽≦)OActually, I want to watch driving

I really like this article! Looking forward to more works! Grateful!

Finished spreading flowers~ I've been looking forward to the showdown for a long time, come on Xiao Ming!

How can I regret it? It's clear that I can sleep in Chu Mei'er's bed, okay?

Hahahahahahaha Grandpa Zu said in his heart: Congratulations on the ending, shameless bastard. The gift will arrive later. Speaking of which, if War Song delays again, I think Aye will jump out.