Fox's Sin

Sometimes it's vernacular and sometimes it's ancient prose, and it's uncomfortable to watch them all mixed together. Hope the style can be unified.

Alas, we never fell in love

It hurts so much that it's hard to express, it really tortures the heart and soul, breaks the liver and intestines, the word love is too bitter, the word crazy is hurtful, but the world cannot understand it, no matter how gods, Buddhas and spiritual creatures are, they are willing to drown themselves in it... The little fox makes people feel sad, but Mr. An makes people helpless. All kinds of tenderness and tenderness, even risking one's life, in exchange for the words "never loved each other". It's not scary to be a moth flying into a flame. What's scary is that I want to jump but no one is willing to light the fire. Baby Chongxue, auntie really wants to advise you, repay anything, don't repay kindness, don't touch anything, don't be emotional... Alas, alas, there are so many separations and reunions, I advise you not to be sentimental... Author's reply: Looking at Mo Da dripping with sweat... Actually, it's me who doesn't let them have sex... In fact, there is a kind of true love in the world, not love...

I watched it over and over again several times. When the two of them were together, they were clearly a loving couple living a sweet life. Maybe they never really loved each other, but love is not the only thing that can get in the way of this relationship...

When it comes to reviews, there are several types based on the audience. I came from a science background and have poor writing skills. Although I read a lot of articles, I wrote a limited number of long reviews. I met Gu Da tonight in the side dish group. I felt quite friendly and came to see Gu Da's only BL article. There are some things I want to say, mostly to Gu Da. It is a continuation of the chat, but this time I have more words. Is the reason. I wonder if Gu Da has seen Dafeng's "Meet the Wolf". When I saw the beginning, I thought of a cute animal in "Meet the Wolf" who wants to repay a favor. Dafeng's writing style is off-beat, the story is told with twists and turns, and the plot is complex, making people cry and laugh at the same time. "Fox Fate" is not long, and it is told eloquently, but it has a touch of sadness that cannot be concealed. The writing is concise, the story is not procrastinating, and the ending made my eyes brighter. They really didn't love each other. How unconventional! Things in the world are impermanent, the universe is ancient, there are always joys and sorrows, partings and reunions, the waxing and waning of the moon. Xue Zong stared at it for a long time, and the figure gradually faded away. "Come on, come on. If you have no intention, I will stop..." Xuezhong was recognized from this. When anyone asked, Mr. An answered frankly: "This is my best friend and sworn sworn brother Jinlan." Then I fell in love with Ansheng. I comfort myself like this, Xuezhong has repaid his kindness; An Sheng is still An Sheng. It is not easy to live your life guarding yourself. Gu Da has great literary talent, and I really like the following paragraph: Lantern Festival, Qingming Festival, Flower Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Chinese Valentine's Day, Reunion, Double Ninth Festival, Laba Festival and New Year's Eve. Mr. An took him out, watched the dragon dance, ate green fruits, made fun of the flower girl, threw pebbles at the men on the dragon boat, went to the firewood shed to catch spiders, listened to the cook talk about Chang'e flying to the moon, folded dogwood and put it on his head, quietly ran to the kitchen and added sugar to the Laba porridge, and watched the people's mouths crooked by the sweetness. Time is expressed by festivals, and days are connected by small things. Exquisite thinking and unique perspective. Finally, what I want to say is: the text density in the part where Mr. An meets the girl Xuezhong during an outing is obviously different from other places. After reading it for the first time, I felt it was quite strange. I couldn't help but guess that the adults might have done it intentionally and didn't want to focus on it here. After thinking about it, it is also wise to deal with it this way. After reading it again, I do feel that the overall text density is slightly inconsistent, sometimes it is more ancient, sometimes it is more white. For example: "I study and he practices Taoism. They both understand the truth and don't get entangled." - It's whiter, if it's "clearly the truth" it's more ancient. "He won't bother you" - not as good as "He won't bother you". Xuezhong was carried out. Mr. An never married a wife in his life. ——It's Dabai. In short, I tend to be more streamlined when it comes to the heavy part of Yunnu Shaoxue, while other parts are better if the density is moderate and consistent. This is a private opinion and you can ignore it. It is for evaluation. This is the first time I have read an article by Gu Da. I didn't expect that Gu Da wrote a lot of BGs, so I will read them when I have time. Author's reply: Ah, dear~ I'm so touched. I've written so much and so well. It's really amazing =3= I really haven't thought about mastering the text density, but my opinion is very pertinent. It is also quite difficult to deal with the literary language. If it is too literary, it is afraid that people will not understand it, and if the vernacular language is not harmonious = =

Such a sad article. . . Love alone: ​​"That's right, good things always come with many hardships. It's only because of this that I met you."

It's like I've had a profound enlightenment,,,,, hehe,,,

MM Gu is really good at writing. Wound without blood I'm in pain Squat down and grieve for a while

The writing is brilliant, the story is not vulgar, and the collection is neat. It is really a strong person.