
The White Moonlight Before My Eyes
我眼前的白月光
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 236k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
75Chapters
16.8kFavorites
9.5Score
3.7kNutrient gifts
52.4kClicks per chapter
2.9kComments
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Reader comments 28
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After watching it, I can say that the writing is okay, the plot is not cliche, and the male and female protagonists are quite sweet. But! The process was really emotional. Maybe I was looking at the problem from a peony perspective and my own personality. If a girl confesses to a boy and continues to have a clear crush on her, and the boy rejects her but is still friends with the girl, is it really normal for them to have so many intimate behaviors and even kisses? What is the boy's mentality when he continues? Doesn't he feel like rubbish? It's like letting himself go between being ambiguous and distant. This would have been scolded to death on other platforms. The same goes for girls. Due to being reborn again and again, their emotional psychology also changes. But one moment they said they no longer like him, and the next moment they kissed him. They blamed it on confusion... Later on, they said they no longer had any expectations of liking him, but they still watched the sunrise together and watched it in his arms and hugged each other. The result was attributed to the author's neurosis and abnormal brain circuits... In other words, it seems that the emotional entanglement between the two people was caused by missing and escaping, which prompted this article, and finally he. This article is more like what would happen in reality, because people are very complicated, but I am reading romance novels. It is enough for real people to experience the complicated and twisted emotions. If it is moved to the readers to experience it in the text, it is okay for me. One more thing, I complained about the male protagonist's aesthetics three times throughout the whole article, saying that he always follows reason, but when my heart is already moved, does the type of mate selection still matter? A normal person shouldn't be like "She is not my type, but I am still attracted, and then I gradually get to know that person without caring about the type." But as for the male protagonist, "She is not my type, I am attracted but reject, reject, reject." This kind of sentence accounts for 80% of the whole story. In the end, he breaks out of the type and finds his sincerity... I can only say that the male protagonist is also quite weird. The female protagonist is lickable throughout the story (not to mention not licking, two-thirds of them are obvious licks, and in the end she says she doesn't like it, but she still doesn't reject the male protagonist and his intimate behavior). The male protagonist is capable enough, come on.
I don't understand why the female protagonist is not worthy of the male protagonist. I feel that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonist in all aspects. Why do you ask the male protagonist, "I don't understand why I fall in love with my wife." The female protagonist is full of character, has courage and pursuit, can cook, make money, and is responsible for educating children. If it were me, I would also like her. What does the male protagonist have? Busy, cowardly, irresponsible, and even ugly, it's really outrageous
The human part in front of me is really a bit disconnected. I really hope the author can write the plot of the male protagonist chasing his wife in the crematorium instead of letting the female protagonist easily forgive him. The change of the male protagonist realizing that he likes the female protagonist is not very obvious (as a reader). The marriage progress is too fast. In short, I feel that the fast pace in the back is very inconsistent with the ambiguous pull in the front. The pull in the front is really exciting. It's a pity...
I would like to call it a story of "the heroine finally gets the white moonlight" and "the white moonlight in my imagination slowly disappears". It's not that the story is not well written. In fact, both the heroine and the hero got what they wanted, which is pretty good. It's just a little different from my expectations. I thought it was very interesting after watching the first part. I didn't expect that the storyline would develop like this later. It felt a little fragmented. How should I put it? I thought I could see a bit of sadistic plot, or that the male protagonist really liked the senior, and not just because of his long legs. Well... It seems that I am too vulgar and like bloody plots.
After reading it, it is really an article that makes people calm down and read it. It is very good. The heroine is very touching. I feel that she is like a good friend around me. She will stubbornly like someone, dare to love and hate without letting herself be wronged. I especially like the character of the heroine. Comparatively speaking, the male protagonist is not bad, but there is a sense of separation. How could he be so middle-class? I thought he was a cold-blooded male god hahaha. But it's very down-to-earth, and this is the type of person I would have a crush on in middle and high school. Although the process was tortuous, they finally got together, but I feel that the role of abusing the male protagonist is relatively small (poor my female goose (*? I`*)), but I am still very happy to see them together. I hope they live a good life and have many children and grandchildren hahahaha.
Ahhhhhhhh it's beautiful! How many other vests can I find in my lifetime?
The writing is quite good, but it doesn't stop me from scolding straight men.
The final explanation of rebirth is a bit of a stroke of genius.
Oh, I really like this book. I really want to read the author's new article [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
Teacher, this is a very interesting book. Both characters are very vivid. He fell in love with the female protagonist before the male protagonist. I mean, Mr. Baitou, can you secretly tell me your new pen name? Teacher, I want to read more of your writings.