Journal of a Wastrel

Then let me tell you, you are the only author I have collected since I came to Jinjiang. Will you be moved and happy? There are few writers with perfect writing talent, and at the same time, there are few writers in Jinjiang who are worthy of the emotional value of readers looking forward to her progress. At least I have read what I think is the most wonderful story you have ever written, and I have also read what I think is the most boring story you have ever written. I am still looking forward to any stories you continue to write, . I may not be a person who is good at appreciating people, but Long Aotian is really the most romantic story I have read in Jinjiang. The last time I experienced this feeling was when I played Legend of Sword and Fairy Five. It's been a long time since I've been so happily moved by Xian Hexia, thank you [Rainbow Fart]

After seeing what Dabai wrote, Qingqing should be Dabai's most difficult book, hahaha. It's really difficult to write a Shuangqiang novel. To ensure the heroine's complete growth line, you must also ensure that the heroine is not a vassal of the hero, and the tension between both parties cannot be reduced. What's more, there is another main character Li Guiyu, whose charm is also indispensable. A perfect balance must be found among these three parties. I'm really tired, hahaha, but I still hope that I can persevere and write a beautiful ending to the drama [Huahua]

This is the first time I have such a favorite article, and it is also the first time I have read the author's diary. I feel that the identity of the author is so magical. A careful author will know what the audience's perspective is like. I have constantly resonated with the author in this diary, and even the emotion of leaving little pimples can be felt. Sure enough, the final version is the best. I can really feel that the characters are loved by the author, so they are shaped so well, woo woo woo.

Nowadays, people's impatience has become commonplace, reflecting the cultural symptoms of instant gratification in the digital age. We are accustomed to the second-speed refresh of fragmented information and the unlimited supply of streaming media content, but we have gradually lost the quality of waiting that is most needed for literary creation. A true literary idea is like a slow stew. The growth of characters, plot twists, and elaboration of details all need to mature naturally over time. Those seemingly interrupted gaps are often the key stage for in-depth dialogue between the author and the work, and are the necessary pain for the story to become a masterpiece. Instead of killing the pleasure of reading in anxiety, it is better to cultivate a deeper appreciation while waiting. All works worth waiting for will eventually prove their worth in the long river of time. Of course, if the author disappears during the window period, you can occasionally update the log, letting readers know in a few words that the author is still there and has not disappeared out of thin air, and everyone will be happy.

The Jiangnan volume is finished, why hasn't Dabai updated the diary? It would be nice to write a few words in the diary as a memorial.

I've known the author since The Princess (accurately the TV series The Year of the Flower), and then started reading online novels. After reading it, I found that the story of Shubai is quite good. I started to follow Cangshan Snow after Chapter 115. Compared with the previous works, this world structure is larger and more attractive. Perhaps because of the serialized novels, the pace is sometimes too fast, sometimes it is delayed and there is unnecessary description, and the timeline is a bit messy. But the story and characters themselves are very vivid and three-dimensional, and the flaws are not concealed. As far as the characters are concerned, the growth lines of Pei Zichen and Li Xiuji are considered complete. Jiang Zhaoxue's growth line may be supplemented by the fact that her 200-year love brain behavior in the Lingjian Pavilion (although it was affected by an unknown force) is a bit deviated from the right and wrong personality she later showed, and her rescue of all living beings. Logically speaking, her sense of right and wrong and sense of justice should be good, otherwise it would be difficult to become a high-level destiny master. Especially the Dharma image that has been upgraded to an eighth-level life master with a sense of compassion. I agree with the understanding of the author and other book friends. The 7th, 8th, and 9th level upgrades of a life master should be an improvement in the understanding of life. As the skill grows, the understanding should also grow, otherwise it is easy to become a demon. If the 7th level is a breakthrough in the ability to understand destiny, such as a dream about a parallel world and the addition of a life beast, is there any triggering prerequisite? She finally saw through the 200-year cycle of entanglement and killing with Pavilion Master Shen, hoping to get rid of that reincarnation, thereby gaining increased understanding. If the 8th level is a breakthrough in the power of compassion for all living beings, then what is the 9th level? She can absorb the Tianji Lingyu and become a ninth-level destiny master in terms of power, but she would rather fulfill Pei Zichen's sacrifice of life. Another example is that she can become a god in the end, but sees that becoming a god is no different from the Book of Destiny, and finally returns to love and redemption. This part is a little supplementary, just straighten out the upgrade path of the fortune teller and open the "life pattern". Shen Yuqing's inner struggle was not laid out in the early stage, which makes it look awkward. Adding a few more small scenes and subplots should be able to save it, otherwise it will be difficult to deduce his final self-sacrifice for Jiang Zhaoxue. The character of Mu Jinyue is not well written, and the green tea is not good. Her struggle and growth line are incomplete. Where she comes from and where she is going are not explained clearly. It probably needs repairing. From the book editing point of view, if the current chapter structure is followed, the plot can be added and modified. If it is really perfect, the timeline may need to be adjusted. Jiang Zhaoxue's antecedents may need to be mentioned earlier, and the personality traits must be pointed out first, and then the dream plot and the appearance of the fate beast (also a ray of life soul of Pei Zichen). This book does not need to have a book link, no modern thinking, just follow the trajectory of the fate master. I like the fantasy part very much, please don't delete it. Maybe it needs to be strengthened. Imagine two sober people. Only in the illusion can they freely realize the hopes in their hearts. How strong the tension is. Pei Zichen has enough tension. Should Jiang Zhaoxue also change in the illusion? Otherwise, it would be difficult to deduce the dual cultivation of Pei Zichen when she was the Eight Realm Life Master. After all, the relationship between these two people seems to have been cultivated in the illusion for four years. Finally, I want to greatly commend the brilliance of this book and the breakthrough the author has made in this book. Emotions need the support of the plot, otherwise it is prose; the plot needs the rich embellishment of emotions, otherwise it is a running account and a history textbook. The novel needs to strike a balance between twists and turns and touching.

I used to think that the author's refinement meant adding some psychological descriptions and daily plots to the original framework, and enriching the characters such as Shen Yuqing and Mu Jinyue. Mu Jinyue is a fairly important character who appears everywhere, and some of his own stories are not too tool-like. After reading the author's diary, it turns out that there are so many outlines, which is almost equivalent to rewriting the entire text? There are thousands of people with thousands of faces. Whether to revise or not is the author's grasp of the story. The final version of Dabai is definitely the best? Cangshan Snow is the novel that I have been following for the longest time and I particularly like it. , The reason for persistence is the delicate emotional line and relaxed and romantic tone. I like Jiang Zhaoxue's agility the most. If I can only use one word to describe it, this is it. Maybe it's because this character is very charming and spiritual. I didn't feel that Xiao Pei's emotional line came quickly. He is so cute and naive. It is really funny, romantic, free and passionate. It can arouse emotions and make people around you happy. It is very attractive. Perhaps Xiao Pei noticed it when he was young. Perhaps it is slowly boiling in daily life. Does love have to have a transformation process and impressive scenes? Zhuang Yan's trip The heroine's behavior is a window for Xiao Pei to understand her character and personality. The copy is so delicately written. She has always been deeply impressed by the ruined temple to take shelter from the rain. Even though she held an umbrella, when she arrived at the temple, Xiao Pei still carefully wiped her face with a handkerchief, which was tender and warm.

Dabai, seeing words is like meeting. After reading your mental journey, I feel that you are struggling in the middle and later stages of writing. It is so painful, helpless and unwilling when a person forces himself to do something he is unwilling to do. It's really not easy. I think Cangshan Snow is very good at the moment. Your dilemma is a bit complicated. Maybe it can be written as a super long extra if line A, B, C, D... You sent too many red envelopes. Maybe it's because time flies and you don't follow the flow of the novel. I can't stand it anymore. When you don't update, I can't find a place to spend Jinjiang coins. Pei Zichen is truly a flawless and humble gentleman from beginning to end. From a human perspective, he does not look like the Demon King at all. Lao Shen, he is one of those people who love you but never say it out loud. After Jiang Zhaoxue woke up, she basically only disliked him and wanted to stay away from him. The only one who was recognized was Weilifu. Mu Jinyue, the female supporting role, is not annoying from an emotional point of view. It's just that Mu and Shen's instrumental role in promoting the plot is too strong, and they lack the meaning of individual existence. The mental growth of Jiang Zhaoxue and Pei Zichen is very well written. Every level of improvement is based on giving to others, sacrificing oneself to save others, and the level of thinking has been sublimated in a spiral manner. I like it ~ When I was young, I did my best in everything, just waiting for recognition from others. I felt the same way. After suffering for so many years and seeing many counselors, I was finally able to do my own case. It wasn't until recently that I truly stepped out on my own and no longer wanted his approval. It is recommended that you read the original Saint Donat release method for public consumption. You can learn it by yourself for free. I have benefited a lot from it, so I will not elaborate here. I wish you a healthy body and mind, a happy mood, and everything goes as expected~

Come on, Dabai! This version moved me even more. Especially when I saw Xie Heng appearing like Cui Heng and the two of them drinking, I felt: Cui Heng came out not as a mask, but as his soul. He was the eighteen-year-old Xie Heng, and his soul would always be open to Wanqing.

Walking to a water-poor place, Sit and watch the clouds rise. I don't know why, as the volume of 'Enlightenment of Life' comes to an end, The dust of Qingqing Aheng's feelings has settled, Suddenly, I felt melancholy that Canglan Road was really coming to an end. A faint lingering sadness, It's more of a reluctance. I can't bear to clear Ah Heng, I can't bear to cry, laugh, and sit on a roller coaster waiting for the next update. I can't bear to see the joy of seeing the log updated every day. I can't bear to read the article because of the overwhelming emotions and the fascinating excitement. I can't bear to part with every bit of interaction with Dabai, I couldn't bear to read the book friends' eloquent talks about analyzing the plot and expressing their feelings directly. Even more reluctant to leave Canglan Dao is not more than one million words, So I understand that there is a long way to go, so don't say goodbye so easily~ Yuanshui Tongbo connects Wugang, and Houjun does not want to be separated. The green mountains are together with the clouds and rain, but the bright moon has never been the two villages.