The Plane-Hopping Writers' Group

This article felt a bit confusing to me, with a lot of delays and repetitions. The emotional part is really baffling, but I actually finished reading it. There must be something good in it.

Maybe the writing was broken. The heroine was okay at first, but later she was selfish and stupid. It was originally a very attractive subject matter, but the more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became, and I skipped to the ending.

She opened her mouth again but couldn't say a word. Could the heroine's reaction to the hero not be so barren?

The whole person took a step back... When I read these words, I imagined that the heroine took a step back with her legs and kept her upper body still, and she suddenly felt happy.

How many times has the heroine stared at the hero and been unable to say a word? Ten times? Twenty times? A woman with a mental age of over 20 is so dull that it is not only excessive but also aesthetically fatigued. This is no longer a sign of being clumsy and having a low emotional intelligence. It would not be like this if she has never loved anyone or if someone has fallen in love with God.

After waiting for dozens of chapters, the heroine finally has a powerful counterattack

The heroine's IQ is really mind-boggling

The gap in IQ and strength between the heroine and the hero and the villain is so far apart that it makes a good article very unnecessarily depressing. I don't know if the author likes this tone or can't control how many posts he sends.

No, the mythical beast boasted in the last chapter that if it were not for the fact that face to face through the computer, Qinglian layman would be worse than death. Why is it restricted by the rules of the world in this chapter and becomes as incompetent and furious as a real cat? Although Obikura is definitely not an ordinary person, the fluctuations in the strength of the mythical beast classmates are too precise.

After reading it, I was a little confused. First, the heroine is Su Wan, but Zuo Si always appears. Second, the full text is too repressed. The author brought in his own emotions. Third, there seems to be no difference between the heroine and the heroine's mother. They are just one on the outside and one on the inside. Fourth, why does the heroine like the male protagonist? Because of the eyes? Why does the male protagonist like the female protagonist? Because of talent? I really don't know how to describe the character of the fifth heroine, she is wanton and reckless, and the sixth relationship is chaotic. The whole text is except that the male protagonists all have designs on the female protagonist, while the female protagonist is alienated and defensive towards everyone around her.