You Smell So Good

The plot is very complete and has ups and downs. It is a great novel. The first part is well written, but the second part is obviously faster. I feel that there are still many things that have not been written, and the emotional line is not very obvious. I stayed up late to read it and just felt dizzy. When I saw so many good reviews, I couldn't help but be confused. In short, I was quite disappointed.

First of all, congratulations to Dangan for completing another long article o(*≧▽≦) Dangan has been challenging to write long articles recently, and he can insist on updating it every day with few comments. I think it is really amazing. Dandan did lay out a relatively grand world view at the beginning, and it combined online games, interstellar mechas, and ABOs very well, which was an improvement compared to Demons. However, it is obvious that the subsequent plot is not as close as the opening chapter, and the connection between online games, mechas, and ABOs has also begun to fade (personal feeling). I also feel that the emotional line is very dull. There are highlights, but for this kind of long article, it is still not outstanding enough. Dandan, can you consider making the outline a little more detailed? Maybe this will be much better~

It ended really unexpectedly. I like it very much, and I'm very reluctant to let it go. After all, I've been chasing it on and off for so long. I really like Briquettes and every character with its own color. Like(????-)?

Oh, straight man cuckold As expected, I still like briquettes the most╮(╯▽╰)╭

I ran out of money before and haven't read the novel. When I read the ending, I felt that Cheng Xi was different from me when I first read the text. It wasn't about his personality or anything like that, but it was that he hadn't developed to the height I thought he would, and it didn't fully reflect the strength of his divine hand. At the end, his strength didn't reach a very high level, which felt weird. At the beginning of the story, I thought Cheng Xi would slowly grow up and become more powerful, at least in terms of his expertise, and gain more. Some achievements. At the end, I felt that the story turned into overthrowing the imperial rule. Although it was a matter of time, it was still weird emmm... How can I put it? It was very unconventional and different from those glamorous bitches. I don't know if I expressed it clearly or not, but one thing I still understand very well. I like Cheng Xi very much and think he is very good. Give it to the author~ I went to watch the extra~(≧▽≦)/~

The ending was so sudden_(:з∠)_, congratulations on the ending?

It ended so unexpectedly!

What else can I say..._(:з∠)_

It's obviously a waste of time to raise a child... Don't make excuses, doctor...

Finished with flowers~ In fact, I always feel that it will end before it starts... But the story is still great, why not expand it in the future 2333